A Poem by samparks,sam

Image result for drawing of two friend in deep love
I  want to be continued doubt in my heart with your doubt
We can read the step of the current attraction of life in a silent way
I can keep alive the moment of the life better for you
The mountain of the feeling we  created for touch happiness for each
We are  in the way where step moved only see destination of life
You hold me till the end of life in such a way
I bring of all the world happiness in your way
Your choice is the happiness of my feeling in your life in such way
Your confidence makes us  so crazy every time on your way
You are the my life, beauty will remain in every sense 
Hold ...Hold ...be continue  We are  soul for each remember this every day

© 2016 samparks,sam

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Your writing is true your writing has connection that you are the glue. You will be the one who saves this woman who is in deep confusion and troubles. You sense her everywhere.. Love true

Posted 1 Year Ago

Beautiful. Sincere emotions.Well written and expressed. Keep writing!

Posted 1 Year Ago

Very sincere. Beautifully written.

Posted 1 Year Ago

This poem is very beautiful it carries a lot of honesty and emotion

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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4 Reviews
Added on December 10, 2016
Last Updated on December 10, 2016



Indian, India

I am Chess player, My life always move step with thought of 10 steps ahead every time. Nature is my friend, Keep me smile. I start to write poems without experience of writing, but I can't believe my.. more..