Your words  are sensative

Your words are sensative

A Poem by samparks,sam

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Since I concentrate itself on you completely
Since I feel unsecured itself 
Your word's scene in mind for forever
I am the  story in your writing
How much you can scare me behind these words
How can I hold you through these words
This is the so hardship experience of my life
Life is going through these words nice way
Hard to  search in a struggle situation to get you
We are each destination of the spirit of life
We are alive for each this is great concern so good
We were in the past, we are present of such motivation
We will create the charming  future of our realization
We are the story of these words be creative be continued....







© 2017 samparks,sam



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Amen to that Sam. I like the line; "I am the story in your writing." The whole poem revolves around this line. and then the shining hope for tomorrow within this life with your loved one; "We will create the charming future of our realization." A poem with much meaning................Like a love letter. Bless you in your life and writing............Kathy

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Nice poem with good meaning. thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amen to that Sam. I like the line; "I am the story in your writing." The whole poem revolves around this line. and then the shining hope for tomorrow within this life with your loved one; "We will create the charming future of our realization." A poem with much meaning................Like a love letter. Bless you in your life and writing............Kathy

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A thoughtful poem... I liked the spirit in it


Posted 7 Months Ago


The picture describes everything ..... holding and being supporting to the one you love!

Posted 8 Months Ago


I like the imagery in the line
"How can I hold you through these words"
And the picture emphasizes it
Some of us were made to be fortresses and don't know how to be held

Posted 9 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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samparks,sam
samparks,sam

Indian, India



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I am Chess player, My life always move step with thought of 10 steps ahead every time. Nature is my friend, Keep me smile. I start to write poems without experience of writing, but I can't believe my.. more..

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