Blank Silence

Meandering winds
playfully rushing
past the
emptiness of the mind.
Quiet seconds of
contemplation,
introspection,
renewal.

I close my eyes
hoping
everyone has gone away.

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

always nice to have some alone time. awesome as always, Chris

[realmwriter]

It's sad. Why would one want everyone to "go away"? Or is it just the way it seems, as if they have?
Not bad Chris...!

[Alicia Schroeder]

Short and sweet.. Great write

[Amila Jay]

clearly said, good write:-)

[Leslie Philibert]

Good poem,with a universal message at the end.

[T.W. Early]

short and sweet and simple. I do sometimes wish there was a blank silence.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i love this poem's short and simple message!

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Short and sure!

[Dayran]

Interesting!

[Caitlin Dale]

wow.. short but very breath taking and intense.. :)
Flawless.. :))