Blank Silence

Meandering winds
playfully rushing
past the
emptiness of the mind.
Quiet seconds of
contemplation,
introspection,
renewal.

I close my eyes
hoping
everyone has gone away.

Reviews

[Keve]

The moving air again. Nice.

[SUGATA M]

You are master in capturing the beauties of the moments of life as they pass on. Superb

[Aaran]

There are moments like this you want sometimes.. could not have said it better.. :)

[Swapz747]

Great piece of write :-) Captivating ......

[Thrinna Mae]

A short piece but still I can see the creativity...
:)))

[Tai]

A very peaceful but simple poem. Even when you don't want to think, even when everything is silence, the thoughts from our mentality still exist, and in fact, are still active. The ending was beautiful, it shows that the writer just wants to drift away into his own world. Beautiful write.

[Robbie]

Even in blank silence, inner thoughts are present... yet peaceful calm renews the mind, heart, and soul... Nice write.

[Renny]

Good job!

[Arielle Ann]

short and simple...yet says so much!

[Manpreet]

Nice style with touch of simple in it. As usual it is a pleasure to read your work always