Light Enough to See By

With one slip of 
your magnificent tongue, 
you drank 
me into you. 
I held your hands in mine,
abandoned my glass 
and
celebrated us.
There wasn't time anymore
to drink wine or talk of
favourite music.
We were past that uncomfortable distance.
With one touch of
your incredible hands,
you drew me
close to you.
I closed my eyes. 
I opened my eyes.
This was not imagination
but instead
our private room
of reality.
You closed the door,
you shut the lights.
No matter.
The hungry panting we were sharing
was light enough to see by.

Reviews

[realmwriter]

Very Cool piece. I love the flow and the story is sexy...!

[Bobbie Coelho]

Wonderful words and imagery - a masterpiece./

[Brenda:)]

imagery i love it i am in love with your imagery its amzing and it makes the poem sound like one long line but with sense love this poem !:)

[Amila Jay]

Wow .. Very nice indeed:))

[msharma]

Well crafted.

[Maria.F.T]

Top one !

[Sometimes Blood]

Excellent crafting

[Leslie Philibert]

Good poem,like the imagery at the start, and the way you connect your impressions with a real background ( room).Great last lines.

[Manpreet]

Vow! beautiful moments captured in beautiful words. A sensuous and dreamy write!

[stars are far]

Great piece .. Well im loving your writings these days ..