Jumble

A presence falls into the darkness of the daylight. 
I am waiting to meet it with anticipation. 
Evil sheds like slipping reptiles of hate. 
Shattering the olive oil of desire. 
As quick as it arrived. 
It was serenely gone. 
And I wondered. 
why it 
dried. 

A demon danced like evil inside of my heart.
I cringed like a woman giving  open birth.
I chant like wounded old rosary beads.
Killing the desire for living alive.
Ending the mocking ugly face.
I only thought that
it would always
seem to
end.
 

Reviews

[Mary Chalmer]

Good write

[realmwriter]

I think its about f*****g, plain and simple. Awesome... Of course I say that because, well I would think that obvious...!

[Sometimes Blood]

this is an excellent example of real poetry which grips the reader from the first line

[Jeremy Baker]

Beautifully structured, and another haunting message. Wonderful.

[Dragonflyz]

amazing imagery...great read!

[Michael West]

Wonderful penning. Vivid image and emotions painted.

[nishantshah2381]

brilliant as always

[joshua deathdealer]

Love the format.. Excellent work.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

I like this poem's format.

[Rene Velez]

interesting, good and evil? a bit vague but words well expressed...