Walking The Dog

Included within "I Walk Naked into a Cloud" Publishamerica. 2010 ISBN: 978-1-4489-7989-9

A grey day -

Sure, a fine soft morning -

wet on the wind with rippling circles

that dimple the overnight puddles.

Misty rain lacquers the fallen leaves

to glow under sodium light

and washes asphalt paths

to tarry blackness.

The waking city stirs.

The early cars rush by,

anxious to head the traffic jams,

before the parking place is filled;

while little dog sniffs among the leaves

and praises God by being. 

Reviews

[Jeremy Baker]

This is a simple, unassuming and beautiful poem, one that inspires - great writing!

[Dewella~Vintella]

You have a lot of imagery in your work, very good.

Vinny~

[SinnerInspired]

You put so much creativity So much beauty into your poems
Its so nice to meet a great writer like you

[alexlessah]

Very beautiful poem, I love it!

[imagination101]

Beautifully written!

[brenda]

awesome poem love it !:)

[Pretty Faces Split Open]

Incredible imagery !

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I can really visualise the scene :)

[AndyJCash]

A very detailed description of a simple moment in time, very nice.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Absolutely beautiful imagery. I loved it.