Red

Red memories.
Drowning in blood.
Red desires.
Dripping in sarcasm.
Fresh mud,
deeply staining.
Our feet walking.
No clear direction.
Just drifting.
Searching for nothing.
Red dreams
soaked in distress.
I wonder
if you'll
remember our passion?

Red balloons.

Drunk on fresh air.

Dipping in horror.

Soft bellies.

Intensely aching,

forsaking all traces

of moving along.

Rolling vowels

earnestly deploying.

Red living.

I wonder

if you'll

ever forgive me?

Reviews

[freelancejouster]

very emotional and dark. i really like the line "rolling vowels earnestly deploying". and i don't so much like the line "drowning in blood"

[Mary Chalmer]

You have so many beautiful and colourful images here.

[joshua deathdealer]

A very well portrayed emotional write.."Just drifting."....xx

[imagination101]

Love thew use of colors in this well written emotional write!

[K.C. Zbryk]

The use of the color to reinforce the emotions behind this piece was brilliant, and it aided the imagry that was used. Very powerful, and insightful.

[Bryan Micheni]

the colour... anger. brilliant piece.

[Berkeley Street Writer]

Very dark and rather violent...the red tells it all for me. This truly stands out in a positive way for me. I enjoyed this one a lot!

[NightShade]

I believe the word I'm looking for is visceral. This is truly a striking piece and brings to mind so many associations that it transcends normal consciousness. It's positively amazing!

[BABy]

gripping...different but questioning

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Red means genuine whatever it may be...