Dripping, Dropping Slams of Under Sized Brands

Door opens

                  slowly.

Dripping, dropping slams

                  of under sized brands.

Glitter like muscles moving

                         in psychedelic windows.

And they see you at that moment.

Call you at that time.

                             Define and refine you

                              until your movements

                               do not belong to you.

Hating what is unique, they mould

                               the mud that forms you.

Reformation and reclamation. You are

                              the image of the glass bowl

                                   they've ordered you to be.

Slim tender fingers wrapped like

                                                       scars

around your sublime feet.

                                               I am a sheep.

                                               That is, I've

                                                forgotten the

                                                moment of my birth.

And as the cars rumble by, endless cars of

                                                 many descriptions,

                                                 I'm a shadow unto myself.

                                                 I'm a floating zero

                                                 of contrasting

                                                 complexity.

Anchors of yowling animals flatten the

                                                 figurative 

                                                 yelling of the

first time I was conceived.

Door opens

                  slowly.

Dripping, dropping slams

                  of under sized brands.

Be silent.

              

Reviews

[Loner]

Really a heavy metal touch leaving a classic touch too it.

[Laura Maidah]

Aesthetically exquisite.

[Kaya]

This is truly an exceptional piece of writing. I really enjoyed it.

[Maria.F.T]

Nice

[Belle]

An attractive and wonderful way of presenting fact, very nice!
Stimulus of words alone claimed my attention, and at the same time
made me informed in an enjoyable way.

[Revolutionary]

I picture being bombarded with advertisements and descriptions of what is logical from the day you were born.May be sad but true.I am a product of commercial broadcasting

[Judas Hammer]

awesome write.......next level

[imagination101]

Well penned indeed!

[Berkeley Street Writer]

This seems very bleak to me, this sort of place, situation that is also emotions that you wrote about here. Its a very well written and amazing poem

[storiestotell]

Nicely penned!