Wedding Gift

A Poem by Haruki

for Adam and Molly

Musical fragrance

Drifting through the tree top boughs

Clinging to starlight

© 2008 Haruki

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zainul

It's really a great wedding gift.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Gathering_Stars

This is ear candy, pure and simple.

Posted 15 Years Ago

♡Moon Child♡..

That's so cute. Short, sweet, elegant...leaves you wanting more! :) I love love, don't you!
Check ouy my stuff too!
Happy Writing!

Posted 15 Years Ago

just is

This is so wonderful, it's soft and gentle.

Posted 15 Years Ago

Pax Analog

Beautiful subtlety. Exquisite nuance.

Haiku as lovely and delicate and unique as a snowflake.

Truly the essence of the miracle of the living moment.

This poem is a treasured soul caress.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michael X

lovely poem, a breaching limerick in haiku syllable,
the soft imagery magical and has a way of transporting the reader,
beautifully done.

Posted 15 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The Rock And Roll Cowbo..

What a way to describe marriage... two souls reaching into the unknown together. Love it.

Posted 15 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Shelved in 2 Libraries

Added on September 10, 2008
Last Updated on September 11, 2008

Author

Haruki

Green Bay, WI

About

I have so little time these days to write. I come to read your work and to be inspired. I may not have the time to post my own work but I look forward to reading yours. Please send me read request .. more..