Our Love

Our Love

A Poem by Sanskrity Mishra

I fell in love with you when the first time you looked into my eyes. I was falling but you held my back. I asked you never to leave me and you promised to be with me all time. I asked you do you love me? And you replied with a smile, Baby, you're my love, you're my life I'm only yours and you are mine. When there was darkness of sorrow you lit a candle of happiness. I asked for a hug and you gave it with a kiss all time. I was afraid of walking ahead but then you came, held my waist and made me run to do my best. In the nightmares you were my saviour, In my life you were my hero. When I thought that all my beauty is lost in vain, But then you came and relieved my pain. I wished on stars for you to live long, And you wished for my health to stay strong. For our love was forever, But I'm sorry I didn't lived for long. Your visit to my grave, is the bestest gift. I know we'll meet again When the sun will show it's reign. Our love will rise once more.When you'll see me and I'll see you again.


© 2017 Sanskrity Mishra



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This is a powerful poem with all those lines... I almost cried

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanskrity Mishra

1 Year Ago

Really?? Thank u so much...
Its wonderfull. . . . i liked the way you expressed your love through such a beautiful poem. . the ending made me sad but i felt your write is having soul. . nyc one

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sanskrity Mishra

1 Year Ago

Thank u so much :)
Well i have to admit, you kicked it off....story inside it is awful...I loved it...:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanskrity Mishra

1 Year Ago

Really?? Thank u so much.. :)
Surya

1 Year Ago

Yeah, I felt so...coz u mentioned it, like, even after death he visits her grave in yard...that made.. read more
Sanskrity Mishra

1 Year Ago

Hmmm...Thank u
this is a really really soulful poem..i have no words for this...keep writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanskrity Mishra

1 Year Ago

thank u for ur reviews...
A sweet symphony of emotions. Good job(:

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanskrity Mishra

1 Year Ago

Thank u....
So warm and deep poem...I truly loved this....

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanskrity Mishra

1 Year Ago

Thank u......
Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

You're welcome.

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Added on June 8, 2017
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Sanskrity Mishra
Sanskrity Mishra

Allahabad, India



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