Siliver lining

Beneath and beyond,

Azure sky of rationalism

Above the scaffold of optimism

Lies a rigid yet vulnerable soul

Facing winds of pessimism

Standing against barbarism

That soul symbolizes faith..

A merger of courage and curiosity

It demonstrates the law of land and sea

Depicts the relationship of destiny with duties

Represents the true essence of humanity

Revealing a silver lining of survival

Between chaos and humility

 

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

this is deep spiritual and i love it, thanks for entering this into my poetry competition, good luck great work

[halv]

Really loved this. Especially the last stanza. Great writing!

[sansrity sinha]

thank you so much :)

[J.M. Wise]

Interesting read, I really enjoyed the first stanza with 'scaffolding of optimism' and 'azure sky of rationalism'. Decent flow too. Nicely done

[sansrity sinha]

thank you so much..I wrote this with a thought of people surviving humanitarian crisis in a few countries..struggling to survive on a daily basis with a hope that some day things will be fine..and everything will be the way it should be.
Thank you so much for the review.