Congratulations

Congratulations

A Poem by sanya

Congratulations and celebrations to you

We all are very happy to see your happy view

Intelligence is filled in your mind

You are super kind

You are as sweet as honey

You are as bright as day which is sunny

I hope you will always be the best

You are so great that no one will take your test  


© 2013 sanya



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It is nice to receive a note of encouragement as this. Keep writing! Yes, you are young, but if you continue to write EVERY DAY you will improve, and when you are older you will be happy you have accomplished so much!
Your rhyme is perfect - I suggest you add some punctuation to finish this off.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sanya

4 Years Ago

thanks i will try to improve and i appreciate ur time thanks



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a nice poem that is written i guess to boost someone close to you, who you think is The Perfect, who can be anyone.

best wishes

Posted 4 Years Ago


The character in the poem is saying congratulations to people in a tone where the character really cares less about other people intelligence just for them to go and stay out of the character from the poem way.

Posted 4 Years Ago


sanya

4 Years Ago

sorry don't take it rudely but i could not understand ur review pls use simple language. sorry if u .. read more
SquinklaPsyOps

4 Years Ago

The character in the poem congratulates itself because other people couldnt interrupt the character'.. read more
sanya

4 Years Ago

no, actually i wrote this poem for one of my cousins wishing him congratulations...........
It is nice to receive a note of encouragement as this. Keep writing! Yes, you are young, but if you continue to write EVERY DAY you will improve, and when you are older you will be happy you have accomplished so much!
Your rhyme is perfect - I suggest you add some punctuation to finish this off.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sanya

4 Years Ago

thanks i will try to improve and i appreciate ur time thanks

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sanya
sanya

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HI ALL! I AM SANYA. I AM A SIXTH CLASS STUDENT SO DON'T EXPECT ANY GOOD PIECE OF WRITING FROM ME . I LOVE TO READ , WRITE AND TALK more..

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