92 Undina

7 July 1867

cosmic is a jack in Pandora's box;

a facetious leviathan in spring-loaded anticipation

that mounts with semitonic oscillation

while an invisible hand turns the crank

Reviews

[Gary]

I read through all under "Atsral Gnomes", I love this sort of thing. In a world where facts kill the mystery of being to the point where many see the world as something just normal, I believe we need to reinvest our literature with mythologies, dreams and phenomenology- nothing is what it seems; you do so well in your words to present those things!

[Saoirse K.]

thank you Gary
i appreciate you taking the time to read through and comment
to forget wonder and awe is to forget the self, who without dreams has succumbed to death,
or something
thanks again

[Crowley]

Ok I feel like a stalker with all these reviews in a row, but I hope everyone reads these through at the same time, wouldn't be the same not to. I want to congratulate you on a great series of writing, every word, every analogy inspiring and spot on I think.

[Saoirse K.]

Hey!
thank you so much for the reads and reviews
i am glad you read through them all and enjoyed them as intended
i really appreciate that
thank you!
(more to come)

[Tim]

I'm loving the metaphors you're coming up with. This represents a personality trait to me. spring-loaded, semitonic...

You've described 'to me' someone in history you are not aware of. That last line comes straight out of the unconscious.

[Tim]

*not aware of Change that to 'don't know about.'