Torn

My heart is torn between two souls

How do i know whose hand to hold?

Do I listen to my heart?

Or do I choose what is right?

They both have everything i need

Or is this just greed?

I want to love both of them

For they are both gems

My heart is here for the taking

But whose do i end up breaking

 

Author's Note

gah i know i write really short stuff but oh well. i'm still new at this poetry thing

Reviews

[Comatose]

Oh, this is so touching. The confusion portrayed in this is amazing. Well done. ^^

[Skyman]

yup. heres another poem.

[A]

Once again, this was very good. I'm sure lots of people fall into these situations in life, and can connect to this, no matter what age.

[Opal Anne Rochel]

Wow, this is really lovely... and the fact that it's short doesn't mean it's not complex, because it is. You're a great writer!

[Thomas B. Buckman]

Awesome, truly awesome. It flows well, and its heartfelt. I like