Why?

What was it about me that just wasn't good enough?
Why was it me that got used and treated like s**t when
All I wanted to do was love you?
Why is it that I have to sit here and see how well you treat
All the other girls and see how happy they are?
Why was I not worthy of that?
Why?
I just want to know.
Ive known you the longest out of all of them yet, I was the one who Was nothing but a stepping stool in your eyes.
A joke.
A joke is what you are.
And when you come crawling back in the near future just know, You'll never again get my heart.

Reviews

[M. Maarij K.]

Hey girl...I felt a contradiction in your writing...!

[Angad Waraich]

I can see the hurt you are trying to convey.
A well written piece.
Enjoyed it
Thank you for sharing.

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you !

[Amber Lily]

Some very deep emotions here, yet hope as well. The strength at the end says 'I'm heartbroken but I will move on, and do much better than you.' That is what I love about this piece, that independent strength you feel when your on your own.
Well done! :)

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you so much ! (:

[Amber Lily]

Your welcome! :)

[sheriH 2]

My god , this crackd my heart.i feel the same feelings in my situation right now
this was just brilliant it touchs my feelings deeply. Great read
I absolutely loved it.
-sheri

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you! Glad you liked it !!

[Just Jayren]

(To me) this is crying out for more. Don't get me wrong the simple rawness and honesty leaves much to be admired as well as commended, but this speech can go deeper. Either way, good job!

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you!