Our purpose.

Our purpose.

A Poem by sarahsara
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Diving deep in thought. wrote this over a month ago.Hope you enjoy.xxx

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                                                                      Why am I here?
                                                                  What is my purpose?
                                                            These cant just be all worthless.
                                                                    Do I deserve this?
                                                            While others have been deserted.
                                                                  So many of us are disconcerted.
                                                                     What did I do to earn this?
                                                             I am keeped alive trying to find a purpose.
                                                                  Praying this isn't all worthless.
hoping one day I'll do something to deserve this.

© 2019 sarahsara



Author's Note

sarahsara
Hey all! I wrote this poem a while ago and forgot about until a few weeks ago. I am not too sure if I like the way it turned out. I don't feel like I got the full my point across so I thought I'd get others opinions about it. I find it very easy to share my work here since I am anonymous on here. Thank you so much for your lovely reviews and support!xxx



PS: Please feel to give me constructive criticism.xx

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I liked the poem. Great questions asked in the poem. I ask the questions daily. Am I worthwhile, doing the wrong things. Amazing words and thoughts. Made the reader ponder your words.
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Posted 3 Weeks Ago


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Tags: why, what, who, when, where, how did I get here, feeling worthless, do I deserve this, watching others suffering, meaning of life, is life worth it, Is life worthless

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sarahsara
sarahsara

Malta



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Hi My name is Sarah. :) I have always loved writing ever ever since I was little.I adore horror and novels and poems about life, so i will mostly be uploading poems and horror stories so if that's s.. more..

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