sitting by the beach on an early morning

Sitting by the beach
on an early morning
I was disturbed by a fragrance
strange yet resistible
Sitting by the beach
on an early morning
I was disturbed by a voice
polite yet mild
Sitting by the beach
on an early morning
I was disturbed by my thoughts
horrible yet tolerable
Sitting by the beach
on an early morning
I was disturbed by a smile
mysterious yet  friendly
Sitting by the beach
on an early morning
I was disturbed by a person
ordinary yet unforgettable
Sitting by the beach
on an early morning
He & I side by side
Glad yet gloomy

Reviews

[The Lost Poetry Files]

Very easy to read poem, full of emotions that are gently portrayed...

lovely poem :)

[Steve]

Well done. You are definitely interesting to read.

[CecilA]

saroosh'

Amazing. It's like sweet and tart mixed together yet each retaining their originality.

'strange yet resistible' kind of throws me off. What about 'strange yet irresistible'

I love it and I love the colored text contrast for emphasis. It works well with your theme.

Great job. Thank you for sharing it with us.

[Jack...]

I really liked the feel of this piece. I told a story that was easy to read. Like a sunny day at the beach. Very nice

[Phillitup]

Very sweet and mysterious. I'm sorry that I don't have much to say about this write. I like how you kept going back to where you were. The sequence you chose was amazing. I agree about the mix of nice and suspension but I also feel an air of peace through all the bad. Just a thought. Nicely penned! Best regards, Dell

[saroosh]

thank you dell!

[Seanh12]

Very good. I like this peom. I think it glorious. It rymes nicely. It fits together. The poem makes me feel calm and happy. Nice fellings. Its got a mixture of nice and suspenison. Well done

[saroosh]

thank you so much!

[Seanh12]

Your welcome thank you for reviewing Hardship of being an assassin. Your poem was really good

[saroosh]

My pleasure!