If You...

If You...

A Poem by Saumya

If you  want to be something,
be like a TREE,
which is always.....

If you want to be something,
be like a FLOWER,
which is always........

If you want to be something,
be like a FOUNTAIN,
which is always...........CONSISTENTLY TOILING

If you want to be something,
be like a COOL BREEZE
which is always..........PLEASING and SOOTHING

If you want to be something,
be like a great FABLE
which is always..........INTERESTING

If you want to be something,
be like a S
which is always..............SHINING

If you want to be something,
be like SKY
which is always.............WITHOUT ENDING

If you want to be something,
be like an ANGEL from God
which is always..............FORGIVING, LOVING, and BLESSING

But yes, my friends,
if you want to be one of these,
which i had been mentioning......

you first need, to be a good
human being...
who is really essential, to
make the atmosphere

so make your world,
something really amazing,
by .......supplying it with great meanings.
from your surroundings.

and be the change,
you and your heart,
had always been ...dreaming..!!

© 2013 Saumya

Author's Note

thanks a lot for reading...!!
i will be rally grateful, if you review and rate it..!!

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Again your faith shines through. The analogies (I think I've chosen the right word) are precise and instantly visual -- all symbols available to everyone and thus easy to mimic the benign influences. Your use of colored text keeps the reader's eye interested. Your gentle spirituality should be bottled and distributed worldwide. The last stanzas sweep the reader up into the thrilling realization that the answer is to change, to be part of the change. Inspirational for any religion and inspirational for a free spirit.

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


There's a pattern when you write and I'm loving it :)

Posted 4 Years Ago

This has a beautiful message in it., which I found pleasant to read. Indeed, we should all strive to be good. We should all strive to be the change we wish to see around us.

Well done.


Posted 4 Years Ago

Oh this I really like. strong, thought pervoking! good job

Posted 4 Years Ago

Your poems are always so thoughtful and this one too gives me such a wonderful feeling while I read. Comparison with and a message to be like those wonderful things from mother nature is noteworthy, gives it a symbolic touch and also makes the poem one wonderful piece reading which gives you immense pleasure. Please turn up with more such thoughts and ideas. Keep writing and thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago

Beautifully uplifting and inspirational. A poem I could read again and again!

:) Julie

Posted 5 Years Ago

I like the way you bolded some words. Very clever. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago

I will be a tree and a flower as you wished.This is a wonderful poem.You are a much better poet for your age.You have got very innovative and noble ideas-the hall mark of a good poet

Posted 5 Years Ago

Absolutely wonderful. Thank you for such a wonderful and uplifting poetic experience. I strive to be like this every day. Soothing just by my presence. At first I did it just to free myself from suffering but then I realized that the energy of my positive emotions was releasing others from suffering too. Joy becomes larger than just the sum of its parts.

Posted 5 Years Ago

This is a beautiful poem filled with some great analogies. It was also very visual. Nice work!

Posted 5 Years Ago

This was a very pleasant read.

Posted 5 Years Ago

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Hi all:) this is me....Saumya well, i don't have much to tell you all about me.. but yes to start with, I love writing & painting.(you can find some of my paintings in the "my photos" section of.. more..

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