A Writers Pen

A Writers Pen

A Poem by Saumya

A writer is the one
who lives in this same world
but actually exists in a different one,
where he and his thoughts 
only have existence..

His pen, heart, and brain
are the ones,
which are completely filled with 
distinctive thoughts from others
in every situation..

When he writes,
his thoughts become so vigorous
that the ink itself cannot stop
to quote them on the paper...

He sees the world 
differently from others,
and feels differently
in every condition..
His pen, as if clearly knows,
what all to quote,
that the reader actually notes...

The pen when in his hand
never feels bothered,
as it knows
that whatever he writes,
will definitely turn excellent..

The pen feels greatly proud,
every time it is used for
to be written,
because it knows
that one day, this
writer will appreciate my existence,
as i was the only one
to bring out his thoughts
clearly on the paper
in the form of the words,
of his stories or poems,
and made them known to everyone..
and therefore I, can never be forgotten...

If we writers are at a 
soothing level today,
its all because of this mere pen,
who was, and forever will be with us,
to make our every single heartbeat,
thoughts, and emotions, 
flow clearly on the paper,
and made known to everyone..

so I owe all my goodness to you 
my dear pen,
and request all you dear writers
to do the same for your pen,
without whom,
you and your thoughts today
would be nothing,
like a river, pond , lake, ocean,
or even fountain,
without water's presence...

As it was the one,
who itself being lifeless,
made our thoughts lively
and helped us 
made known to everyone...

so how can its existence
really be forgotten..!
as it is the one,
which actually deserves
to be loved and respected 
by everyone..

And the actual gem,
behind a writer's existence..!

© 2013 Saumya


Author's Note

Saumya
i hope you all enjoyed reading this..
please do rate and review
regads
saumya:)

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I find writing with pen more creative then computer or typewriter. There is some magic in it. I like your creations of scenery . What can happen when we start write. Your gratefulness for other writers and your self. Yes i love ending to be loved and respect for his or her creations. This what we all should deserve here. I hope one day this will be also truth.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

6 Years Ago

Indeed! Typing words on the PC can't replace the happiness and satisfaction we writers have when we .. read more
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6 Years Ago

I really love that piece. I usually make 2 type of writings here. One is right away on computer and .. read more
Saumya

6 Years Ago

Thankyou so much!😊
Writing for our own self, and writing for others, both have their own .. read more



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I find writing with pen more creative then computer or typewriter. There is some magic in it. I like your creations of scenery . What can happen when we start write. Your gratefulness for other writers and your self. Yes i love ending to be loved and respect for his or her creations. This what we all should deserve here. I hope one day this will be also truth.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

6 Years Ago

Indeed! Typing words on the PC can't replace the happiness and satisfaction we writers have when we .. read more
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6 Years Ago

I really love that piece. I usually make 2 type of writings here. One is right away on computer and .. read more
Saumya

6 Years Ago

Thankyou so much!😊
Writing for our own self, and writing for others, both have their own .. read more
I think there is a lot of truth to what you write. The pen, however, is an inanimate object that can only be animated by the writer and his imagination, thus, the writer is the gem. The pen is an extension.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Saumya

6 Years Ago

Thank you:)
well written and and i found this very extravagant which the message cavalcade straight into my heart

Posted 7 Years Ago


well done saumya.....you have written it very beautifully and you have arranged every line properly.I love this creation.
keep it up...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Saumya

7 Years Ago

Thankyou Anshuman! I'm glad u liked this piece 😊
Sure! I'll keep up the good work 😊
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Anshuman Aryav

7 Years Ago

Most welcome
Yes you have correctly expressed. I liked it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Saumya

7 Years Ago

Thank you 😊
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome ☺
Saumya

7 Years Ago

............. 😊....
It's very imaginative, the way you personify the pen & make it almost an object of worship, attributing all the good things in life & in writing, to the existence of this pen. I feel the metaphor about how writing or expressing oneself is really the thing of worship, the reason life stays right-side-up instead of going upside-down. You've shown us this in many imaginative ways. To a certain extent, some of your well-stated ideas feel like they're being stated more than once, maybe a little bit differently, but still coming across as a bit of repetition -- not a criticism, just an observation. I think many writers might consider the almighty pen as being something else . . . one's muse, or one's God, or one's beloved. It all works.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Saumya

7 Years Ago

Thank-you so much Margie :)
This is a very lovely write, Like this one as much
as the other one I read, Awesome writing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Saumya

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear ! :)
This was really a beautiful piece.
He sees the world
differently from others,
and feels differently
in every condition..

This part is really true, especially when he/her lives a different condition or a complete different life.

Bravo

Posted 7 Years Ago


Saumya

7 Years Ago

Thank you! M glad you loved the piece! :)
Saumya,
I see this one was posted a couple of years ago, and that is wonderful to know, because poetry, like vintage wine, seems to improve with age, and this one certainly has a bouquet that trips deliciously off the tongue when recited.
What poet, I ask, with an ounce of romanticism coursing their veins will not thoroughly love the poem about a trusted, revered, and beloved pen?
There some unusual word usages and phraseology you might consider revisiting and editing … thus, the 90/100 grade.
Your mind, heart, and soul join to dance amongst each and every line, enthralling the very senses of your readers, and what's not to love when composed by a pen and ink of pure gold?

Thank you, Dear Poetess, for such pleasure shared … hugs to you! ⁓ Richard

Posted 8 Years Ago


Saumya

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Richard! :)
Richard🖌

7 Years Ago

Of course1
Saumya

7 Years Ago

..... ............... :)
"so I owe all my goodness to you
my dear pen,"

Oh man, this punched me right in the sentiments. There's two people in the world I can always resonate with; Writers and trippers. A lot of people have made similar remarks about how writing isn't just something that you want to do, it's something that you need to do. And after that you develop a better friendship with a pen than soldiers do for coffee. It's like working in a certain industry, the only people that can relate are the people that have well and truly walked that way. I love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Saumya

9 Years Ago

Thank you Michael:)

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