An Adventurous Child...

An Adventurous Child...

A Poem by Saumya
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'sometimes when we sit and remember our childhood memories, they teach us many minute but precious principles to deal with life...these are some of them i discovered:)

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Since the time I was a child,
i loved to gaze at the stars in sky,
their glitter,their shine , their spark
and the light,
filled me with huge delight..
and i always wondered,
what  made them shine so bright?

Since the time I was a child,
i loved to see the butterflies
pink, white, green, blue,
and some with beautiful stripes..
and i always wondered,
what  made these creatures fly?

Since the time I was a child,
i loved to see the rainboin  sky
i always waited for the heavy rains,
so that i could see it back again...
those seven colors
left me completely mesmerized,
and i always wondered,
what  imparted it,
such
immense beauty in the sky...

Since the time I was a child,
i loved seeing  birds
fly high in the sky..
and like all others
wished too,
to fly in the sky
and  always wondered,
why humans too, cannot
at least skid in the sky?...

Since the time I was a child,
i have been loving
every second of my life,
i try understanding and enjoying
everything around and nearby
and no matter how harsh is my life,
i live it like an Adventurous child
fighting with harshness,
 every moment in it i survive...

for if you live life as a child,
you'll never know 
what are worries and strife,
as they indeed aren't anything else,
but ' happiness in the form of pains disguised'
and as you walk on these stairs of life,
you'll somewhere clearly know,
that' you are the one who can create 
everything for you, by the only  attitude
you have towards life'
and that will tell you what's life...

 No matter people judge you today
to be wrong or right,
'always remember, that's never a full stop,
but only a comma of life'
live life like an Adventurous child
for a child never knows
what are worries,anger, rejection, and pain 
all they know,
is to sail through life
and dance merrily,
even in storms and heavy rains.. 

they never care,
what people say is wrong or right
they only do what they think is right...
and this is why
they are always filled with
 cheer and delight...

© 2014 Saumya



Author's Note

Saumya
i hope you all enjoyed reading this..
please give your honest review and feel free to mention everything you want to with respect to this write:)
many thanks
saumya:)

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This is amazingly good. The repetition, the content and arrangement of your stanze. Indeed, if this world is like a child, we will bear no grudge, no malice, no struggling, no killing, no bad would be inherited in us, because is not a product of childhood. But you see, my very good friend, Saumya, its never like that, not always. The world has grown oid and full of evil. But doing the right at the right time no matter what stand against would always make us smile and once more we become like a child. An Advanturous Child. Thank you so much for this poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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This made me smile coz it's nice to know more people who hides that adventurous child within! Loved it! 😊✌️

Posted 3 Months Ago


Saumya

3 Months Ago

Thank-you Krutika :) I'm glad you likes the write :)
I bloody love this!! this is so much a flashback of my childhood even though i cannot remember most of them. As we grow older it gets tough and life is hard but a child sees the most crazy thing and innocent they may see they are gonna grow up never reading this piece of writing :) I love it :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


Saumya

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much Annie! :)
I really loved the layout and the colours of this poem, it marries really well with the whole childhood theme. As for the poem, it's amazing, I've been wanting to write something similar but just haven't been able to put it to words, a task that you executed really well!

// O

Posted 9 Months Ago


Saumya

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
I'm glad you liked this piece. :)
Your upbeat attitude shines thru your words with much power to inspire & uplift the many who are living lives of quiet despair. I think people like you & me are naturally in possession of such upbeat thoughts, but most people are not. I really appreciate your message of optimism & I think there's a place in this world, especially amongst the young & the old, who need to read something like this every day to help keep their attitude in a good place.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Saumya

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for the review :)
I'm happy you could feel the essence of this poem, and co.. read more
A lovely childhood memory piece, I like how you described those feelings, really nice work

Posted 1 Year Ago


Saumya

1 Year Ago

Thanks for stopping by, reading and the review of coz :)
Glad you liked my writing style!read more
read it again,loved the theme of it,birds,rainbows,stars the same stuff we all love
and who cares about insecure people

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saumya

2 Years Ago

Thank you Ron:)
 wordman

2 Years Ago

my pleasure
This is great :) I enjoyed reading. When you're a child, growing up seems to take so long and then when you're grown, you miss being a child again.

Posted 2 Years Ago


it seems you are in love with nature,very curious since child hood
and bring your memories to paper..great write

Posted 2 Years Ago


Reading this, I felt like a child again. I miss looking at something with innocent eyes and curiosity overcoming fear of the world around me. This poem is wonderful, from every word to every image you paint, This poem is a delight! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Child like from start to finish, sage advice from a little girls perspective. I fell in love with this poem!

Regards,
Al

Posted 2 Years Ago



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