An Adventurous Child...

An Adventurous Child...

A Poem by Saumya
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'sometimes when we sit and remember our childhood memories, they teach us many minute but precious principles to deal with life...these are some of them i discovered:)

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Since the time I was a child,
i loved to gaze at the stars in sky,
their glitter,their shine , their spark
and the light,
filled me with huge delight..
and i always wondered,
what  made them shine so bright?

Since the time I was a child,
i loved to see the butterflies
pink, white, green, blue,
and some with beautiful stripes..
and i always wondered,
what  made these creatures fly?

Since the time I was a child,
i loved to see the rainboin  sky
i always waited for the heavy rains,
so that i could see it back again...
those seven colors
left me completely mesmerized,
and i always wondered,
what  imparted it,
such
immense beauty in the sky...

Since the time I was a child,
i loved seeing  birds
fly high in the sky..
and like all others
wished too,
to fly in the sky
and  always wondered,
why humans too, cannot
at least skid in the sky?...

Since the time I was a child,
i have been loving
every second of my life,
i try understanding and enjoying
everything around and nearby
and no matter how harsh is my life,
i live it like an Adventurous child
fighting with harshness,
 every moment in it i survive...

for if you live life as a child,
you'll never know 
what are worries and strife,
as they indeed aren't anything else,
but ' happiness in the form of pains disguised'
and as you walk on these stairs of life,
you'll somewhere clearly know,
that' you are the one who can create 
everything for you, by the only  attitude
you have towards life'
and that will tell you what's life...

 No matter people judge you today
to be wrong or right,
'always remember, that's never a full stop,
but only a comma of life'
live life like an Adventurous child
for a child never knows
what are worries,anger, rejection, and pain 
all they know,
is to sail through life
and dance merrily,
even in storms and heavy rains.. 

they never care,
what people say is wrong or right
they only do what they think is right...
and this is why
they are always filled with
 cheer and delight...

© 2014 Saumya


Author's Note

Saumya
i hope you all enjoyed reading this..
please give your honest review and feel free to mention everything you want to with respect to this write:)
many thanks
saumya:)

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This is amazingly good. The repetition, the content and arrangement of your stanze. Indeed, if this world is like a child, we will bear no grudge, no malice, no struggling, no killing, no bad would be inherited in us, because is not a product of childhood. But you see, my very good friend, Saumya, its never like that, not always. The world has grown oid and full of evil. But doing the right at the right time no matter what stand against would always make us smile and once more we become like a child. An Advanturous Child. Thank you so much for this poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Childhood is a wonderful time of life and the inner child always keeps us adventurous and exploring. Beautiful write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Saumya

9 Years Ago

thank you:)
I don't know what any of the colors mean (except rainbow) but I do like the structure and the imagery. I also like how you use the images to describe abstract qualities of life (radiance, flight, beauty, etc.) and the fact that you use it to draw your audience in. The only thing I would say work on to is to give it a stronger ending.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Saumya

9 Years Ago

thank you so much:)
please suggest me anything about the endin stanza..
thanx again:)
Ahhh wow, it was such a joy reading this. The flow was wonderful and as a whole I loved the message :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Saumya

9 Years Ago

thank you:)
That was a beautiful poem. It was light and made you understand its meaning.

Posted 10 Years Ago


That was really pretty, I enjoyed the flow, rhyme, and message. Definitely reminded me of myself a bit :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


stars, rainbows, butterflies, there is joy in keeping that child like wonder when we contemplate the world. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


WOW! Now, I just want to recite this line,"always remember, that's never a full stop, but only a comma in life. Lovely and very memorable line. Thank you for this wonderful and lively poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a good message and I also like looking at the beauty of nature and such, but I don't really agree with children not knowing worries, anger, rejection or pain. Indeed they experience these things just like any other human being, they just don't know exactly what causes these feelings or why they feel that way and they need help identifying those feelings. It is true that children have a playful nature and seem to be filled with cheer and delight at times, but it also depends on their home life. I think some children may not even know what happiness feels like. Anyway, I am just blabbering lol it is just how I feel, you shared your feelings well though and I did understand what you were trying to get across. It is nice seeing things through a child's eyes since they usually have a simple nature about them and they are easily amazed about things that adults easily pass by.

Good Job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Saumya

10 Years Ago

thank youu my friend for portraying your thouhts:) i respect it :) children not knowing worries, ang.. read more
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

10 Years Ago

You're Welcome
I like this! Keep up the great work


Posted 10 Years Ago


Saumya

10 Years Ago

thank you dear:)
Nice and beautiful one, i really like it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Saumya

10 Years Ago

thank you:)

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