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Friend

A Poem by Saumya
"

a piece for one and all those great being, who make our lives worth...

"
Light, that ends
dark's existence,
Snow, that adorns
the mountains,
The cool breeze
that imparts calmness,
hopefulness and patience,
Music, that  heals 
heart's ailments,
Joy, that deters
pain's commencement,
and everything magnificent,
which is beyond definition,
is an incredible creature,
called....Friend

The one, who's 
ever ready
to heal all your pains,
The one, who can
tolerate you
in any condition,
The one, who 
perceives you
in all situations,
and A treasure, completely different
from any other possessions..

The one, who's the happiest,
and celebrates more than you,
on your success and achievements,
The one, whom you can ask and tell for anything 
any moment,
The one, who always 
relishes your presence,
and  is equally sad, 
in your destruction
The one who is sometimes,
more caring then parents,

The one, whom you can 
disturb any moment,
and merrily enjoys it
every now and and then..
The one who helps you,
in all conditions,
the one who's always fond of you
no matter how horrible or great
you have been to them,
And the one who makes your heart
cry loudly...'here lies the best person'
Such is an incredible treasure,
called...Friend

An indispensable element 
of one's life,
like salt, in brine solution,
body, without legs and hands,
sunlight, without sun
and life, without enthusiasm..





© 2014 Saumya



Author's Note

Saumya
i hope you all enjoyed the write:)
please review it too:)
regards
saumya

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Friends... they make us happy, they make us sad. Life seeks balance, always and change is the only constant. Everything has its limits; everything can "break." Even friends. Beyond life, who knows? Perhaps the rules change then. Perhaps.

100 constant changes

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

4 Years Ago

yes Tam i absolutely agree with u:) but till the time we have friends with us, life seems really goo.. read more



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Ty
"...indispensable element of one's life..." Great lines. Resonates.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Saumya

1 Year Ago

Thankyou..Ty๐Ÿ˜Š
Very beautiful and touching dedication to FRIENDS. I could relate to every sentence you described about FRIENDS.
I would like to bring to your notice few glitches in the eyes of the critic:

"The one who is sometimes,
more caring then parents,"

It shouldn't be THEN PARENTS BUT;

"The one who is sometimes,
more caring than parents,"

And a small typo:

"The one, whom you can
disturb any moment,
and merrily enjoys it
every now and and then.."

The word AND gets repeated.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I am not very sure people like these exist anymore, and I dont agree, especially these words don't resonate with me.
''The one who is sometimes,
more caring then parents''
Thank you for the read request :)!



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

1 Year Ago

Haha...yea,unfair maybe๐Ÿ˜œ
But I guess you joined us too late๐Ÿ˜›
zaisham9393

1 Year Ago

Yup... and we were missing you Mr. :D ...not kiddin ๐Ÿ˜›...
Mr.Writer

1 Year Ago

Haha yeah, I joined late :D
But I'm rlly glad I was being missed :P
This poem you wrote about "Friend" I can only hope someday I get to meet and have a friend like this. They are a dime a dozen. In this cyber society we live in, it is hard to meet anyone who honestly cares.
I really enjoyed you use of words in this poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Saumya

1 Year Ago

Why to expect this kind of friends from the cyber world, when the one around us has so many good pe.. read more
There are more life long friendships than marriages which should tell everyone the real value and importance of true friends. And what makes a friend a true friend? They are always there for you when you need them and you do the same for them without thinking about it. Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

1 Year Ago

Indeed! A friend in need, is the best friend indeed๐Ÿ˜Š
Thankyou for sharing your thoughtful .. read more
This is beautifully creative the way you weave together realistic aspects of friendship with flowing metaphors from nature. It comes together well & conveys the enthusiasm that, to me, is the best part of a good friend. You are always filled with enthusiasm for each little thing that's shared between friends & for this reason you deserve every bit of that joyfulness right back atcha! *smile* (((HUGS))) You are a friend that makes people feel the way you describe in your poem, but I can also see that this was not written with any trace of ego, as if you thought it was a description of yourself. Total modesty from you always. It's an irresistible combination & I'm proud to call you my friend (((HUGS)))

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

1 Year Ago

*smiles* Thankyou in tons for such a positive an honest review to this piece๐Ÿ˜ŠI'm very glad that y.. read more
"The one, who's the happiest,
and celebrates more than you,
on your success and achievements,"

These are the truest words in this piece - a true friend has your best and highest interests in their hearts always.

When this is used as the measuring stick, then "friends" are eliminated as false and real friends are known.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

1 Year Ago

I agree, these are the truest thing about a true/real friend I've personally witnessed ๐Ÿ˜Š
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I really like the feel of it. It was such a nice write about a friend.
"An indispensable element
of one's life,
like salt, in brine solution,
body, without legs and hands,
sunlight, without sun
and life, without enthusiasm.."

How could I ever describe it more? Wonderful. :)


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

1 Year Ago

Thankyou so much, dear๐Ÿ˜Š
I'm very glad you liked the piece so much, your words indeed meant.. read more
A positive, graceful and sweet poem Saumya!!
Friends indeed do not leave our sides, they stick together :)
Well done, keep it up :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Saumya

1 Year Ago

Thankyou so much, Shaan๐Ÿ˜Š
Friends should rather, never leave our sides, no matter how harsh.. read more
Mr.Writer

1 Year Ago

I agree, it'll strengthen the bond!
No problem Saumya :))
wonderful it is..keep writingg.....

Posted 1 Year Ago


Saumya

1 Year Ago

Thankyou Wajiha!๐Ÿ˜Š

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