Friend

Friend

A Poem by Saumya
"

a piece for one and all those great being, who make our lives worth...

"
Light, that ends
dark's existence,
Snow, that adorns
the mountains,
The cool breeze
that imparts calmness,
hopefulness and patience,
Music, that  heals 
heart's ailments,
Joy, that deters
pain's commencement,
and everything magnificent,
which is beyond definition,
is an incredible creature,
called....Friend

The one, who's 
ever ready
to heal all your pains,
The one, who can
tolerate you
in any condition,
The one, who 
perceives you
in all situations,
and A treasure, completely different
from any other possessions..

The one, who's the happiest,
and celebrates more than you,
on your success and achievements,
The one, whom you can ask and tell for anything 
any moment,
The one, who always 
relishes your presence,
and  is equally sad, 
in your destruction
The one who is sometimes,
more caring then parents,

The one, whom you can 
disturb any moment,
and merrily enjoys it
every now and and then..
The one who helps you,
in all conditions,
the one who's always fond of you
no matter how horrible or great
you have been to them,
And the one who makes your heart
cry loudly...'here lies the best person'
Such is an incredible treasure,
called...Friend

An indispensable element 
of one's life,
like salt, in brine solution,
body, without legs and hands,
sunlight, without sun
and life, without enthusiasm..





© 2014 Saumya



Author's Note

Saumya
i hope you all enjoyed the write:)
please review it too:)
regards
saumya

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Friends... they make us happy, they make us sad. Life seeks balance, always and change is the only constant. Everything has its limits; everything can "break." Even friends. Beyond life, who knows? Perhaps the rules change then. Perhaps.

100 constant changes

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

3 Years Ago

yes Tam i absolutely agree with u:) but till the time we have friends with us, life seems really goo.. read more



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Your poem is so beautiful .

Posted 6 Months Ago


Saumya

6 Months Ago

Thankyou Priyanshi :)
This is really really beautiful, my friend. Keep writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Saumya

1 Year Ago

Thank you! :)
There is nothing to deny in this wonderful writing.
You have covered almost every aspect of friendship in this poem.
Will be looking forward to read your other writings soon.

Thanks for writings such a meaningful poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Saumya

6 Months Ago

Thankyou you so much for stopping by, and reviewing my write-up:) I'm glad you liked it!

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I love this! It instantly made me think of my husband. In all my 35 years, he is the only friend I have ever had. This was a nice reminder of how blessed I am. Thank you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saumya

2 Years Ago

I am glad that you could relate:)
Thank you for your kind words:)
You always write with a 'pen' dipped in something happy and contented and.. more.

Friends are for sharing the world and our reflection of and by it. And the holding of hands and giggles and..

You write with kindness and skill, with heart and care. Thank you, Saumya

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saumya

2 Years Ago

:):):)...:) Thank you for the another lovely review Em:)
Blessed to have to here ! :)
emmajoy

2 Years Ago

My true pleasure,Saumya. So sorry it was delivered late. Lack of time is a poor postman!
Saumya

2 Years Ago

yea i agree:) sorry wasn't required btw, its okay:)
So nice to read your uplifting words again dear...thanks for posting...enjoyed...Rose

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saumya

2 Years Ago

Thanx, Rose:)
A masterpice with the truest words. I'd be lost without my friends. I really enjoyed this. Wonderful poem!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saumya

2 Years Ago

thanx Ana:)
Saumya I liked much of this. I don't know if you consciously avoided ending with one of the stanzas that finish with the word Friend - I think it would have lent a final 'Ahh' to the work. I felt that the last stanza was an afterthought or a separate piece - maybe it could have been included earlier - also it contains 1 example of a 'with' - the brine, but then 3 examples of without which sullied the end for me.
This here -
"The one, who's the happiest,
and celebrates more than you,
on your success and achievements..."
blew me away - its for me the Gem - its glorious!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


I really liked the poems imagery of a perfect friend and more to the point a compassionate friend.
The idea of placing ones own needs above their own has always rang true in my ideals as a friend and is displayed lovingly and thoughtfully.

My only adjustments would be to shorten for potency. But unfiltered and true to you is always the truest form.

Thanks for a beautiful read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saumya

2 Years Ago

thank you Aaron:) m happy that you got the zest of my write:)

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Hi all:) this is me....Saumya well, i don't have much to tell you all about me.. but yes to start with, I love writing & painting.(you can find some of my paintings in the "my photos" section of.. more..

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