Friend

Friend

A Poem by Saumya
"

a piece for one and all those great being, who make our lives worth...

"
Light, that ends
dark's existence,
Snow, that adorns
the mountains,
The cool breeze
that imparts calmness,
hopefulness and patience,
Music, that  heals 
heart's ailments,
Joy, that deters
pain's commencement,
and everything magnificent,
which is beyond definition,
is an incredible creature,
called....Friend

The one, who's 
ever ready
to heal all your pains,
The one, who can
tolerate you
in any condition,
The one, who 
perceives you
in all situations,
and A treasure, completely different
from any other possessions..

The one, who's the happiest,
and celebrates more than you,
on your success and achievements,
The one, whom you can ask and tell for anything 
any moment,
The one, who always 
relishes your presence,
and  is equally sad, 
in your destruction
The one who is sometimes,
more caring then parents,

The one, whom you can 
disturb any moment,
and merrily enjoys it
every now and and then..
The one who helps you,
in all conditions,
the one who's always fond of you
no matter how horrible or great
you have been to them,
And the one who makes your heart
cry loudly...'here lies the best person'
Such is an incredible treasure,
called...Friend

An indispensable element 
of one's life,
like salt, in brine solution,
body, without legs and hands,
sunlight, without sun
and life, without enthusiasm..





© 2014 Saumya



Author's Note

Saumya
i hope you all enjoyed the write:)
please review it too:)
regards
saumya

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Friends... they make us happy, they make us sad. Life seeks balance, always and change is the only constant. Everything has its limits; everything can "break." Even friends. Beyond life, who knows? Perhaps the rules change then. Perhaps.

100 constant changes

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

3 Years Ago

yes Tam i absolutely agree with u:) but till the time we have friends with us, life seems really goo.. read more



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Excellent write... Your pen truly writes light. This glows with joy, and it had me at hello.

Posted 3 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

3 Years Ago

thank you so so much my friend:) am very glad u enjoyed the write, and i wish my pen always do such .. read more
Your pen is your greatest friend and your sword of light. You have penned a great one...:)..................

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

3 Years Ago

yes, i think sami my pen and also all you dear writer's pen is your greatest friend:) thank you for .. read more
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

MY pleasure ...Any time...:)..................
Well expressed poem on friendship. Thanks for penning a lovely piece.

The last stanza is so powerful.

An indispensable element
of one's life,
like salt, in brine solution,
body, without legs and hands,
sunlight, without sun
and life, without enthusiasm..


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

3 Years Ago

thank you so vry much praveeta:) very glad you enjoyed the write:)
Praveeta

3 Years Ago

My pleasure.
Lovely...friendship is everything! x

Posted 3 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

3 Years Ago

yup Poppie, you are absolutely right:) thank you soo vry much for the lovely review:)
Indeed friends are to be cherished because a great friend is a true treasure.Well penned:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Saumya

3 Years Ago

yup, i completely agree with u vidya:) thank you for the lovely review:)
Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

You are welcome:)
This is so sweet, and so beautiful, too! Friends do make make life worth living, and I loved how you phrased that and put it into such nice words in the poem you wrote. Excellent job.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

3 Years Ago

thank you so so very much Zenia, for this great review:) am very glad u enjoyed the write:)
ZeniaK

3 Years Ago

your welcome :D
A poem I like. maybe not a new subject, but a great last verse, fantastic imagery ! Excellent.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Saumya

3 Years Ago

thank you soo much Leslie:) am very glad to knw u enjyd the write:)
Friends... they make us happy, they make us sad. Life seeks balance, always and change is the only constant. Everything has its limits; everything can "break." Even friends. Beyond life, who knows? Perhaps the rules change then. Perhaps.

100 constant changes

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

3 Years Ago

yes Tam i absolutely agree with u:) but till the time we have friends with us, life seems really goo.. read more
I really enjoyed the tribute to your friends and I am glad to be one

Posted 3 Years Ago


Saumya

3 Years Ago

thank you for the lovely review, my friend,Ron:)
very glad u enjoyed the write:)

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