Friend

a piece for one and all those great being, who make our lives worth...

Light, that ends

dark's existence,

Snow, that adorns

the mountains,

The cool breeze

that imparts calmness,

hopefulness and patience,

Music, that  heals 

heart's ailments,

Joy, that deters

pain's commencement,

and everything magnificent,

which is beyond definition,

is an incredible creature,

called....Friend

The one, who's 

ever ready

to heal all your pains,

The one, who can

tolerate you

in any condition,

The one, who 

perceives you

in all situations,

and A treasure, completely different

from any other possessions..

The one, who's the happiest,

and celebrates more than you,

on your success and achievements,

The one, whom you can ask and tell for anything 

any moment,

The one, who always 

relishes your presence,

and  is equally sad, 

in your destruction

The one who is sometimes,

more caring then parents,

The one, whom you can 

disturb any moment,

and merrily enjoys it

every now and and then..

The one who helps you,

in all conditions,

the one who's always fond of you

no matter how horrible or great

you have been to them,

And the one who makes your heart

cry loudly...'here lies the best person'

Such is an incredible treasure,

called...Friend

An indispensable element 

of one's life,

like salt, in brine solution,

body, without legs and hands,

sunlight, without sun

and life, without enthusiasm..

Author's Note

i hope you all enjoyed the write:)
please review it too:)
regards
saumya

Reviews

[Tam Warink]

Friends... they make us happy, they make us sad. Life seeks balance, always and change is the only constant. Everything has its limits; everything can "break." Even friends. Beyond life, who knows? Perhaps the rules change then. Perhaps.

100 constant changes

[Saumya]

yes Tam i absolutely agree with u:) but till the time we have friends with us, life seems really good:)
thank you so much for the review:)

[LadyAnn68]

Wow..this is a work of art...truly impressive and truthfully descriptive.

[Saumya]

thank you soo much Anne:) this was a really huge compliment than i had expected from this work,thanx again dear:)

[LadyAnn68]

My name is LadyAnn...legally..and officially. Your work is amazing! I have read this now seven times and will continue to read it until I grow tired of it which I don't think will be too soon. What greater compliment can there be to an author than to know his work is re-readable? LadyAnn

[Saumya]

hey! LadyAnn..thank you so so very much for this incredible compliment! i seriously hadn't ever expected such great appreciation for my work/works, my very very glad to know that you are




so fond of my writes:) and i really wish you never get tired of reading them ever:) its all because of great friends and people like you that i hav attained a better level:)
thanx again!
regards
saumya:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Excellent write... Your pen truly writes light. This glows with joy, and it had me at hello.

[Saumya]

thank you so so much my friend:) am very glad u enjoyed the write, and i wish my pen always do such wonders that make you readers love and enjoy my writes:) thanx again!:)

[Sami Khalil]

Your pen is your greatest friend and your sword of light. You have penned a great one...:)..................

[Saumya]

yes, i think sami my pen and also all you dear writer's pen is your greatest friend:) thank you for the great review my friend:) very glad u enjoyed the write:)

[Sami Khalil]

MY pleasure ...Any time...:)..................

[Praveeta]

Well expressed poem on friendship. Thanks for penning a lovely piece.

The last stanza is so powerful.

An indispensable element
of one's life,
like salt, in brine solution,
body, without legs and hands,
sunlight, without sun
and life, without enthusiasm..

[Saumya]

thank you so vry much praveeta:) very glad you enjoyed the write:)

[Praveeta]

My pleasure.

[Ruth]

Lovely...friendship is everything! x

[Saumya]

yup Poppie, you are absolutely right:) thank you soo vry much for the lovely review:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Indeed friends are to be cherished because a great friend is a true treasure.Well penned:)

[Saumya]

yup, i completely agree with u vidya:) thank you for the lovely review:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[ZeniaK]

This is so sweet, and so beautiful, too! Friends do make make life worth living, and I loved how you phrased that and put it into such nice words in the poem you wrote. Excellent job.

[Saumya]

thank you so so very much Zenia, for this great review:) am very glad u enjoyed the write:)

[ZeniaK]

your welcome :D

[Leslie Philibert]

A poem I like. maybe not a new subject, but a great last verse, fantastic imagery ! Excellent.

[Saumya]

thank you soo much Leslie:) am very glad to knw u enjyd the write:)