What we need?

What we need?

A Poem by Saurabh7677
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Now a days people are enchanted by magic but what we need are the simple things to make the world a better place to live.

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WHAT WE NEED..

What we need is not a magic wand but
a sight which knows what to see,
a sight which can make hell look heaven,
and future look bright.
A sight which can siege a mind to see world,
as a glass half filled with water and not empty.

What we need is not a magic wand but open hands,
hands that are always ready to help who so ever in need.
hands that can ease someone to relax,
and that are open to do work for humanity.

What we need is not a magic wand but a mouth,
mouth that can utilize its power of speech and change world with words.
A mouth that favors what is right and ditches what is wrong,
a mouth that expands the nature of literature.

What we need is a courageous heart that can withstand truth,
a heart that has power to die for country,
and brave enough to do what has to be done



© 2015 Saurabh7677



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Hi, my new friend … Richard Jenkins here, and I warmly welcome you amongst us.

What a wonderful poem to introduce yourself, as it speaks with a voice of knowing, compassion, empathy, wisdom, and love.

You are, indeed, a special person, and it has been my pleasure to read and agree completely with your amazingly inspiring poem!

Namaste ~ Richard

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saurabh7677

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much.It means a lot getting this from a experienced person.Thank you once again.
Richard

2 Years Ago

Stop by read my poem, "The TREE", or any others that might catch your eye.

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One of the best and most aspiring poem

Posted 3 Months Ago


I read this and I found it extremely beautiful. My thanks for this pleasant read and I really hope to read things like this some more.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very well written, and very true. Good job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


saurabh: I really enjoyed the poem. Great work. Negative attitudes are everywhere; you are very compassionate to write such a beautiful poem. So many people are greedy, unthankful and indifferent. That's one thing I wish for my son: be kind. Many people push success but where will he be if he isn't considerate of others. Uplifting, smart and encouraging. Bravo! Thank you very much. Dale

Posted 2 Years Ago


I agree.
"What we need is a courageous heart that can withstand truth,
a heart that has power to die for country,
and brave enough to do what has to be done"
I like the repetition and the flow of thought leading to the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 2 Years Ago


Saurabh7677

2 Years Ago

thanks. i admire your review
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome and I enjoyed your poetry.
I agree with you
How wise ......

Good job

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saurabh7677

2 Years Ago

thank you very much:)
I enjoyed this poem immensely. This is a broad topic and you have masterfully summed it up with relatively few words. I think that all people can relate to it universally. I loved the rhythm and flow as well. Thanks for sharing this!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saurabh7677

2 Years Ago

thank you very much..
Good work I like this. Please stop by a few of my poems.
Thanks

Posted 2 Years Ago


awesome!!!
indeed those arw the things we truly need....
very well written strong poem with powerful message!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saurabh7677

2 Years Ago

thankssss pushkar....:)
Pushkar Prabhat

2 Years Ago

you are welcome!!! :) :)
This is beautiful to think so highly and hope with such loving arms. To see with light that over shadows darkness. This shows how sweet and kind of a person you are. great write

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saurabh7677

2 Years Ago

Thank you and i appreciate for your compliment.
silent poet

2 Years Ago

you're very welcome

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Chandigarh, Punchkula, India



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Hi everyone my name is Saurabh Sharda. I'm from India.I love reading books.Writing is my pass time.Hope you all like and enjoy my writings. more..


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