Tears of Life

About my friends darling child

Screaming and crying
As he is born
Covered in unspeakable substances
Before being cleaned
Big blue eyes
Luxurious dark hair
Eyelashes long and thick
Caleb Peter Ostreich
A young life turned son
Gorgeous and just so
Is this child

Author's Note

Any critique is appreciated

Reviews

[Ksummera]

It created an image in my mind, I liked it

[Chris]

An interesting view of a life to be...

[ROXANE DORSEY]

I love this nice poem thanks for sharing your talent.