So Amazing

So Amazing

A Poem by saviorys

Everytime I think about us
it makes me smile
got me taking the initial
comes a freestyle
about our detail
how I look back now
I'm like wow

we were really in love
I wasnt good
you judged me with a curve
never ever shove
you because
you were always above
among everything I had of
You got me in love
now I can't date just anybody
Those pretty girls are infectious
you're my antibody
that's why you're in my write
every single night
if you think writing about love is wrong
then I'm never right
and you'll never be my type
don't get love drunk
when you're just sipping savior light
You know I'm honest
never say it just for your like
I tell you
I love you
no matter if you're black or white

our flow is tight
just like how we hold so tight
when we see each other
know we were
good together
so I rather
put some simple rhyme
for a much simpler time

We were each other's magnet
hump so much like
we were born in the year of the rabbit
neighbours think we were sex addict
it's just a habit
everytime we go behind close doors
we go at it
it's like candy from heaven
after you had it
other candy just taste nothing that it
made me think of us why we split
when all was well

I be writing under a spell
you can't tell
how I miss your smell
that's why I changed my cell
maybe I should publish our fairytale
i bet it will sell
we be rich
everyday
we be lazying
but our stacks be raising
I don't need to write about love
because I was living my phrasing
after a day of shopping
we back home blazing
that was the life we had.

and it was amazing.

© 2010 saviorys


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Added on July 9, 2010
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saviorys
saviorys

Scarborough, Canada



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