My Broken Heart

i have to write only six words

I thought I was loved.

Wrong.

Author's Note

:P okay so....?

Reviews

[The Scholar]

I liked it a lot! Your other six-word story was cute and sad, but this was is even better, I do believe. :) It's almost as if you're two people talking to each other. You thought you were loved, and then someone shoves a finger in your face and says wrong.
And it's the perfect words for a story, because so much can happen between the two lines.

Nicely done.

[AK]

Wow! So short, yet it is so very powerful! I really loved it:) it is wondrous how you can express so much in these six, simple words. Keep writing!

[Aehr]

only 6 words, yet they speak so much! well done!

[Buniheart]

emotions evoke, to a simple story, leaving linger in the heart as one imagines what your story holds! nice :)

[Tai Ryens]

Words are strong and the story is very simple. I liked it, powerful emotions in such few words.

[Miss Evans]

Wow.

This is good. Very blunt, like your reaction would be to being wrong about something like that.

Well done.

[Archia]

I love how the word wrong says so much yet it's so simple.