Shattered

Just a brokenhearted poem :P

Shattered

 

 

I am glass.

A mirror.

Some would say I was beautiful, even stop to admire.

Till I met you.

You thought I looked beautiful raining down in crystal raindrops.

I thought your hands would be there to catch me, but they only sent me to the ground.

Like a mirror I only saw your outward reflection.

Never did I look past your lying eyes or smile.

But now it’s too late.

I am glass.

Shattered.

Author's Note

Okay just to get this straight....This is NOT about me. (how you can tell, i used the word beautiful) :P

This was just one poem that came to mind when emotion fills the heart.

Reviews

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I can tell ya right now, that this has something to do with you... Whether your crushing on someone, or somethin' like that, it still has something to do with you :P
Bahaha, sorry.. Sometimes people lie about things that are true, they are afraid to admit it like me. But if you say it's not bout you, then that will be it.

The way you wrote this, made my heart melt...
So emotional. Sad. Sorrow...

Nice job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

[Summer'sBreeze]

Aww, thank you!

And thank you so much for reading/reviewing! ^-^

[creativequill]

your imagery in this is intense, strong write, love the last few lines, it's a captivating piece

[Summer'sBreeze]

Thank you. :)

[creativequill]

absolutely :)

[Summer]

You are writing the truth. Looking at ones reflection is as painful somedays as having a heart made of broken glass. My heart broke reading you.

[Summer'sBreeze]

Thank you for reading. :)

[Forgiven]

Very nice... I like it!

[Summer'sBreeze]

Thank you. :)

[Shadey Jadey]

Its great. Sad but true.

[Summer'sBreeze]

Thank you. :)

[Anna 27]

Its amzaing.....short,expressive sad but sweet.

[Summer'sBreeze]

Thank you. :)

[.]

Sad but beautiful *no pun intended* poem. Simple and full of impact. Great job.

[Summer'sBreeze]

Thank you!

[Legolas]

This is a sad poem though wonderfully crafted. I'm sure you are beautiful.

[Summer'sBreeze]

Thank You. :)

[Legolas]

You're welcome.

[Trixolomanea]

Wow, this is a beautiful poem, I really enjoyed reading it!

"Like a mirror I only saw your outward reflection.
Never did I look past your lying eyes or smile.
But now it’s too late.
I am glass.
Shattered."
especially this part I really liked, it really did something to me... I don't know :)

Well done!

[writingcrazy55555]

Great poem, descriptive, well-written. Nice work! :)