Twilight

Twilight

A Poem by Maxinne Marie
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Inspired by the view of the sunset through the windows of NB 203. Written during Disturbances in Metabolism class (4-8 PM! Geez.)

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The lapse of daylight…

            I watched it fade.

The hues of gold and aubergine dispersed with the falling of the veil of shadow.

The trees, their silhouette �" I begin to fear them.

The silence, its haunting sound �" I am afraid.

 

A distant figure…

            I saw you coming.

The fireflies in your brown eyes �" they enthralled me.

The warmth of your presence �" it gave me reason to fear no more.

Your power, your strength �" No, I am not afraid of you, creature of the Night.

I am yours.

 

 

Written September 3, 2008, 7 p.m.

© 2015 Maxinne Marie


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you remind me a movie "TWILIGHT SAGA : MOON ECLIPSE", Nicely penned and it's now really an honor to me to read your stuffs cuz..i'm seeing that this's @2008 that means i'm reading this piece after 5 years...wow, it's an honor indeed.
i'm gonna read your some more stuffs now.

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you remind me a movie "TWILIGHT SAGA : MOON ECLIPSE", Nicely penned and it's now really an honor to me to read your stuffs cuz..i'm seeing that this's @2008 that means i'm reading this piece after 5 years...wow, it's an honor indeed.
i'm gonna read your some more stuffs now.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I LOVE the last line. "creature of the night.. I am yours". How enthralling! The concept of total submissiveness to the unknown... to the darkness that either leads to the light in the end or destruction... :)
not a fan of the movie though. :p

Posted 13 Years Ago


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love it..paano ba magupload ng photos..hehe..ala kasi ako alam sa mga ganyan..

Posted 13 Years Ago


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poetically beautiful!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You created an epic mood with few words = fine poetry! The lines are hynotic and each word well placed. much enjoyed the read!



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pretty nice

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ooh, very nice. I like this poem, the imagery is just amazing. Wonderful write!!!

Heather

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Maxinne Marie
Maxinne Marie

Iloilo City, Western Visayas, Philippines



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The Flightless Angel Maxinne Marie Belo Sentina. Portrait photographer, beauty/fashion blogger, aspiring musical theatre singer, poet, mermaid, RN. Graduated from West Visayas State University. Loves.. more..

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