The real me

With loving eyes I stare,

Into your caring eyes embrace,

Our love grows even when the land is bare,

When we touch I feel our hearts begin to race,

Our love is strong and never ending,

The thought of us seperating reduces me,

To a deep depression needing mending,

I love your gorgeous eyes that let you see,

Let you see the real me.

Reviews

[Lindsey:)]

this has a good flow too it. and it was super sweet.
I write alot of stuff like this.
Good Job!

[lilfeather]

I really enjoyed it. it reminds me of some the characters i write about.

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

it had a nice flow, and was sweet at the same time! i'm glad that you have someone to see the real you. it's like when people think they know someone, and they think that their life is perfect... but it isn't.. they just hide the bad feelings and emotions so well that no one ever knows..

~may

[Brittney]

i like this. great poem. do you show the real you or do you hide it????

[Star Cross]

I really like this. It's very cute and touching. [By the way, the I should be a capital on the fourth sentence] But overall, well-written and done.