A Preemptive Strike

A Preemptive Strike

A Screenplay by ScottTheScreenwriter
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A down-on-his-luck Advertising Executive devises a plan to prevent his wife from receiving spousal support. All copyright belongs to the author, Scott Turner.

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               INT. AVERY HOME - DEN - EVENING

               SUPER: One out of every two marriages in the United States
               end in divorce.  In an at-fault divorce in the state of
               Pennsylvania, a spouse who is found guilty of infidelity
               will be barred from seeking spousal support.

               SUPER: NEW CASTLE, PA, 2003

               CLOSE ON FRAMED PHOTO

               A photo of a bride and groom. Both are smiling and holding
               one another.

               The CAMERA SLOWLY PANS over the wall to reveal more framed
               photos.  The couple at the beach.  A New Year's Eve party. A
               family barbecue - the man is grilling.  Another wedding
               photo, the couple feeding each other cake.

               The last frame is empty.

               A man is sleeping on the couch below the photos.  He is JOHN
               AVERY, a successful businessman in his mid-40s.  He has a
               short, stocky build and his head of brown hair is beginning
               to go bald.

               CLOSE ON ALARM CLOCK

               The time is 11:29.  As the time changes to 11:30, the ALARM
               BEEPS and John immediately turns it off, as if he's been
               waiting for it.

               BACK TO SCENE

               John throws the covers off, revealing that he's still fully
               dressed.  He wipes the sleep from his eyes and runs a hand
               through his messy hair.


               INT. JOHN'S CAR - LATER

               JOHN'S POV

               The snow is coming down heavy, drifting across the highway
               and obscuring his view.  The combination of snow and dark
               highway driving gives off a claustrophobic feeling.

                                                       FADE TO BLACK


               INT. WELLINGTON'S PUB - LATER

               A man is seated at a booth in a fairly run-down bar.  He's
               drinking a pint of beer and he appears bored.

               The man is ANTON BRODY, a tall, attractive man in his early
               50s, with tan skin and a very light beard.  He has
               close-cropped dark hair with specks of grey.

               The man finishes his drink and looks around the room for the
               waitress.  He catches her eye and signals her to come over
               with a wave of his hand.

                                     WAITRESS
                         How ya doin' hun?  Can I getcha'
                         'nother?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Yeah, that'd be great.  Actually,
                         get me two.  I'm expecting
                         company.

                                     WAITRESS
                         Two cold ones, comin' right up!

               The waitress grabs the empty pint glass and walks away.
               Anton stares at her a*s as she walks.

               Anton is distracted by the flash of headlights coming
               through the front window of the pub.

               A moment later, John walks through the front door wearing a
               heavy winter jacket, a winter hat and heavy winter gloves.

               John clumsily removes his gloves and takes out his cell
               phone.  He dials a phone number and hears the jingle of a
               RINGTONE in the distance.

               John investigates the source of the noise while holding his
               phone out in front of him awkwardly (and unnecessarily)
               until he comes upon Anton's table.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         You made it.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         The roads were a mess.  Haven't
                         been to Pittsburgh in years.

               John smiles nervously.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Well, you're one of the lucky ones
                         then.
                         (beat)
                         Go on, take a seat.  I don't bite.

               John sits down across from Anton, leaving his jacket and hat
               on.

               Anton stares at John.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         So things didn't quite work out,
                         huh?  My condolences.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         What's that?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Your marriage.  Jesus, I hope
                         that's why you're here.  Steve
                         said --

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Oh!  Yeah, well... that's not
                         really... I'd prefer not to get
                         into that.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         It's why we're here, isn't it?

               Anton grins at John.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         What's the plan here?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Well, that's what we need to
                         figure out, isn't it?

               The waitress brings two beers over to the table.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Good timing.  Thanks so much.

                                     WAITRESS
                         Cheers, boys.

               Anton raises his glass in cheers, holding it in mid-air,
               waiting for John to reciprocate.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Oh, no thanks, I'm actually not
                         really much of a drinker.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Well, all things considered, now
                         would be a great time to start.

               Anton pushes his drink forward a bit in mid-air, spilling
               some on John's side of the table.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Cheers.

               Anton takes a long gulp of beer and sets the mug down on the
               table.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         So... the plan.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Well, I guess the plan is for me
                         to f**k your wife, isn't it?  What
                         specifically do you want to talk
                         about?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                               (quietly)
                         Jesus Christ!  Do you mind?

               John motions to the elderly couple sitting near to them,
               afraid that they might overhear.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         I was told you'd be professional
                         about this.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         You know what I do, right?

               John nods.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         And you know this isn't my first
                         time doing this, right?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Listen, I know, I'm just... I
                         mean, are you sure it's gonna
                         work?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Well, you can never be totally
                         sure, John.  If you need some
                         statistics, which I'm assuming you
                         do, I'd say my success rate is...
                         seventy... maybe seventy-five
                         percent.  Those are pretty good
                         numbers, all things considered.  I
                         take pride in those numbers.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         And what if I'm one of the
                         twenty-five percent?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Then you'll get your money back,
                         don't worry about it.  My word is
                         my bond.  Speaking of money,
                         though...

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Oh, right.

               John reaches into his winter jacket and pulls out a large
               Manila envelope.  He passes it across the table.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Great, the hard part's over then.
                         Now, I will need a few things from
                         you before we move on.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Sure, like what?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Well, first of all... does she
                         have any hobbies outside of the
                         home?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         What kind of hobbies?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I don't know, John, I'm not the
                         one married to her.  Oh! Before we
                         even get into that... I need the
                         name and photo.  Did you bring
                         that?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Her name's Rachel and...

               John reaches into his pocket and pulls out a photo.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         That one's pretty recent... about
                         6 months old.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         That's perfect, thanks.  Hey, you
                         guys make a pretty cute couple.

               CLOSE ON PHOTO

               John and Rachel are at the beach, cuddling under a blanket.

               BACK TO SCENE

               John frowns at Anton.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Anyway... hobbies.  I can't just
                         bump into her at Circuit City and
                         ask for a quickie behind the
                         battery stand.  That usually
                         doesn't work too well.  I need a
                         good reason to talk to her. What's
                         her routine like?

               John takes a moment to think.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         She's been going to Yoga for the
                         last few weeks every Wednesday
                         night.  I'm not sure where,
                         though.  Some place in town,
                         that's all I know.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Here in Pittsburgh?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         In New Castle... I thought you
                         were told... I know it's a bit of
                         a drive, but --

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Somehow that part was left out.
                         Don't worry about it, I'll figure
                         out where the place is.  Might
                         have to bill you for the mileage
                         though.

               John looks confused.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         That was a joke.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         So... is that it then?

               Anton winks at John and takes another drink.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Here's the deal; we're gonna meet
                         back here next week, same time,
                         same place.  Everything should be
                         taken care of and you'll be one
                         step closer to freedom, my friend.

               John nods and gets up to leave.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         See you next week, John.  And
                         don't worry, I'll pick up the
                         tab... ha ha!

               Anton nudges the envelope that John gave him.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Put that away before someone sees
                         it.

               John puts his gloves back on as he walks to the exit with a
               look of deep concern on his face.


               INT. JOHN'S CAR - LATER

               CLOSE ON CLOCK RADIO

               The time reads 1:32.

               BACK TO SCENE

               The glow of the street lights flicker across John's face as
               he drives.  He looks extremely concerned about the meeting
               that just occurred. He runs a hand through his hair and rubs
               his forehead.


               EXT. AVERY HOME - LATER

               John pulls his BMW into the driveway of his home, a large
               modern looking-house on a cozy suburban street.


               INT. JOHN'S CAR - CONTINUOUS

               John takes off his gloves and rubs his hands together to
               warm them up.  He looks down at the ring on his finger.  He
               fiddles with it, taking it off and putting it back on again.


               EXT. AVERY HOME - CONTINUOUS

               John exits the car and walks to the front door of the house.
                He struggles with getting the key in the lock and ends up
               dropping the key ring on the porch.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Damn it...

               John picks up the keys and unlocks the door.


               INT. AVERY HOME - CONTINUOUS

               FRONT DOOR

               The house is dark.

               As John opens the door, a BEEPING noise begins.

               John turns to his left and turns off the house alarm by
               punching in the code.

               MASTER BEDROOM

               John opens the door to the bedroom slightly, letting in a
               bit of light from the hallway.  His wife, RACHEL AVERY, an
               attractive woman in her early 30s with long dark hair and a
               thin build, is asleep in the middle of the bed.

               There are two pillows on the floor in front of the doorway.

               John stares at Rachel for a few moments and then stares at
               the floor.  He reaches down and picks up the pillows.

               DEN

               All of the lights are off in the room and John's face is
               illuminated with bright, white light from the television
               screen.  John is looking off to the side with half-closed
               eyelids, not really paying attention to what's happening on
               the screen.

                                     TV
                         From New York, the greatest city
                         in the world, it's The Late Show
                         with David Letterman!  Tonight,
                         Executive Producer of The Tonight
                         Show starring Johnny Carson, Peter
                         Lassally and a musical performance
                         from Doc Severinsen!  Plus, Paul
                         Shaffer and the CBS Orchestra! And
                         now, the youngest Gabor sister,
                         David Letterman! (applause)


               INT. AVERY HOME - DEN - MOMENTS LATER

               The room is dark and John is lying down on the couch.  He
               looks at his ring finger again, removes the ring and puts it
               in his pocket.

               CUT TO BLACK


               INT. WELLINGTON'S PUB - LATER

               Anton is sitting by himself at the same table he's been
               sitting at all night.  There are now four empty beer mugs
               surrounding him.

               Anton takes out his flip-top cell phone and scrolls through
               his contacts until he gets to "Dafino, William".  He dials
               the number.


               INT. DAFINO'S HOUSE - DEN - CONTINUOUS

               WILLIAM DAFINO, a man in his late 60s with a buzz cut and a
               pot belly, answers his phone.

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         Yeah?

               INTERCUT TELEPHONE CONVERSATION.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Hey Bill, how ya doin'?  Listen I
                         need a bit of a favor from you.

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         I'm listening... assuming it's a
                         paid favor.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         You'll be paid, don't worry.  I
                         need you to put a tail on a Rachel
                         Avery of New Castle. Husband's
                         name is John Avery. He owns some
                         advertising firm down there.  See
                         where she goes, what her routine
                         is like.  I hear she likes Yoga.
                         Get back to me when you have
                         something.

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         Of course, Anton, ANYTHING for
                         you.

               Dafino's sweet, elderly wife walks by, picks up an empty
               beer can and replaces it with a fresh one.  Dafino smiles at
               her and blow her a kiss.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Thanks pal, I owe you one.

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         You don't owe me ONE, you owe me
                         MONEY.

               A BEAUTIFUL GIRL walks into the bar, heavily bundled in a
               winter jacket.  She walks toward the bar.

               Anton glances at the woman, distracted.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Right, that's what I meant.
                         Anyway, I gotta go.  You say hi to
                         Phyllis for me OK?  Take care.

               Anton hangs up the phone and takes a sip of his beer, never
               taking his eyes off of the woman.


               INT. WELLINGTON'S PUB - CONTINUOUS

               Anton reaches into his pocket and pulls out a folded
               photograph.  He unfolds it and glances back and forth
               between the photograph and the girl.

               CLOSE ON PHOTO

               A young man and the beautiful girl, laughing and hugging in
               Las Vegas in front of the MGM Grand Casino.

               BACK TO SCENE

               Anton gets up from the booth and wanders over to the bar.

               He stands next to the beautiful girl and tries to get the
               bartender's attention.

               The WELLINGTON'S PUB BARTENDER walks over.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Uh, Rolling Rock please.

               The Wellington's Pub Bartender nods and walks away.

               Anton looks around the room and glances at the beautiful
               girl. They catch each other's glance for a moment and they
               both smile.

                                     WELLINGTON'S PUB BARTENDER
                         five fifty.

               Anton throws down a five dollar bill and two singles and
               takes the beer.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                               (to the bartender,
                               as the bartender
                               walks away)
                         Cheers.

               Anton scans the bar area as if searching for an empty seat,
               even though there's one beside the beautiful girl.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                               (to the beautiful
                               girl)
                         This seat taken?

               The beautiful girl flashes Anton a wide smile and shyly
               shakes her head no.

                                     BEAUTIFUL GIRL
                               (O.S.)
                         Ohhh YES!  YES!  HARDER!  FASTER!


               INT. ANTON'S APARTMENT - LATER

               BEDROOM

               CLOSE ON BEAUTIFUL GIRL'S FACE

               She moans loudly while moving up and down excitedly.

               BACK TO SCENE

               She and Anton are having sex.  She is on top of him.

                                     BEAUTIFUL GIRL
                         Oh God!  Oh my God!

               The headboard is wobbling back and forth as the girl uses it
               for support.

               The moaning reaches its high point and suddenly stops, as
               the girl climaxes.

               On the floor of the apartment there are clothes strewn
               about.  Next to a pair of wrinkled jeans is the folded up
               photo of the beautiful girl and her husband.

                                                       FADE TO BLACK


               INT. ANTON'S APARTMENT - LATER

               Anton and the girl are lying in bed, both seemingly asleep.

               The girl opens her eyes and looks to her side to see if
               Anton is asleep.

               She creeps out of bed slowly and starts putting her clothes
               back on.

               She steps on the photo but doesn't notice.

               The girl puts on her jacket and shoes and leaves the
               apartment, quietly opening and closing the door behind her.

               Anton opens his eyes as soon as she leaves.  He gets out of
               bed and watches out the window as she gets into her car.

               He smiles to himself, scratches his head and starts walking
               across the room.  On his way, he steps on the photo as well.

               Anton bends down and picks it up.  He shakes his head and
               tosses it in a garbage can.

               He wanders over to the dresser where a small video recorder
               is hidden among a pile of clothes.

               CLOSE ON VIDEO RECORDER'S BUTTONS

               Anton hits the 'stop' button.

                                                       CUT TO BLACK


               EXT. ESTABLISHING SHOT - AVERY ADVERTISING - DAY

                                                       FLARE TO WHITE

               The three-story office building is home to several
               businesses, including Avery Advertising.  The windows are
               floor to ceiling.

               Snow is falling and the landscape and sky are mostly white.


               INT. AVERY ADVERTISING - BOARDROOM - CONTINUOUS

               John, dressed in a suit and tie, is seated beneath an Avery
               Advertising wall sign, staring at his computer, playing
               online poker, while the other three men in the room are
               talking loudly.

               KYLE, a heavyset man with boyish features, looks as though
               he's about to explode.  His eyes bug out when he gets
               excited and he has a tendency to stutter as he speaks.

                                     KYLE
                               (speaks with a
                               stutter)
                         The bottom line is, they just
                         don't know what the heck they
                         want!  I put the lemon on the top
                         of the bottle and they say it's
                         too dominant.  I put it on the
                         middle of the bottle and they say
                         it's too focused.  I'm tired of
                         moving this f*****g lemon!

               MATT, a geeky 30-something, nods his head in acknowledgement
               of the issue at hand.

                                     MATT
                         Why don't we suggest a bunch of
                         waves or... I don't know... a
                         water droplet?  That's good,
                         right? People see water, they
                         think fresh.  It's like a
                         subconscious thing.

                                     KYLE
                         We've already been over this, they
                         want a tropical feel to this thing
                         and water isn't tropical.  I can
                         go to the kitchen right now and
                         pour you a glass of water, I don't
                         have to be in Honolulu to see a
                         water droplet.

               DEREK, a chubby 20-something with a beard that probably
               should have been trimmed months ago, looks frustrated by the
               whole conversation.

                                     DEREK
                         And a lemon is tropical?  My wife
                         buys lemons every week and last
                         time I checked, FoodLand didn't
                         have a tropical theme going on.

                                     MATT
                         F**k, is it still snowing out
                         there?

                                     DEREK
                         Yeah... never ends.

                                     MATT
                         I don't know, this is a lost
                         cause.  I'm hungry, are you guys
                         hungry?  I could go for some Roti
                         right about now, anyone wanna grab
                         some Roti with me?

                                     DEREK
                         That place down on Verlander?  I
                         went there last week with Stevens,
                         something was off.

                                     KYLE
                         Well I guess it doesn't have to be
                         a lemon.  What about a pineapple?
                         The spikes might be a bit too
                         much, though.

                                     MATT
                         You nuts?  That place is great,
                         it's never off, it must have been
                         a fluke.

                                     DEREK
                         I had diarrhea for three  days,
                         I'm not going back there.

                                     KYLE
                         Cantaloupe?  Kiwi?
                         (beat)
                         Avocado?

                                     KYLE
                         John, you wanna weigh in here?

               John looks up with a blank stare on his face.  He looks
               tired.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Uh, yeah.  Don't worry about it.
                         I'll talk to Jennifer later about
                         this and get it all straightened
                         out.  Listen, why don't we all
                         take an hour for lunch, meet back
                         here at 1?

                                     KYLE
                         I'm sorry John, I'm just
                         frustrated.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         I know, it's fine.

                                     KYLE
                         People don't realize, I'm a senior
                         graphic designer, I can make a
                         decision on where to put a
                         f*****g...
                         (beat)
                         Never mind.  See you after lunch.

               Everyone nods, stands up and goes toward the door except for
               John, who remains seated.

                                     DEREK
                               (O.S.)
                         I'm not getting the runs again,
                         forget it.

               John opens up his instant messenger program and clicks on
               Steve Peters' contact icon.  A window pops open.  John
               types:

               "I met with the guy.  Wanna grab a bite?"

               John stares outside at the bright, winter day.  The snow is
               falling quickly and creating a fresh layer on the parking
               lot outside.


               INT. AVERY ADVERTISING - LOBBY - MOMENTS LATER

               John is walking out of the building and passes the front
               desk.  He walks past ELIZABETH REISENFELD, the secretary at
               Avery Advertising.  Elizabeth is a young woman in her
               mid-20s with curly blonde hair and a perpetual smile.

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         Psst.

               John turns around.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                               (dismissive)
                         Oh, hey Liz.

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         How ya doin'?  You wanna grab
                         lunch with me today?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Uh, no.  No, that's OK, thanks,
                         I'm a bit busy.  You faxed that
                         memo to Jennifer yet?

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         Well, no, I --

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Well, get it out before 1, I have
                         a meeting with her this afternoon.
                         Actually, if you could just do it
                         now...

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         Sorry...

               John stares at her with a defeated look.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Just...

               John looks like he wants to say something, but instead waves
               her off and walks out of the building.

               Elizabeth stares at him as he walks away, looking far too
               hurt for simply forgetting a fax.


               INT. RESTAURANT - LATER

               Two plates of food are placed on a table.  The food looks
               unappetizing.  It's mostly unrecognisable pub grub.

                                     WAITRESS
                         Anything else I can get you?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         No... no, thank you, I think we're
                         good.

               STEVE PETERS, a balding, paunchy man in his mid-40s, starts
               eating hungrily.

               John fidgets in his chair.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         This Chicken-Fried Chicken is
                         amazing.  You wanna try?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         That's quite possibly the most
                         disgusting thing I've ever seen in
                         my life.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         All right, I'll agree, it's not
                         five-star dining, but it gets the
                         job done.  What's up with you
                         anyway? You've had a sour puss on
                         since you walked in here.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Just tired, I guess.  Been
                         sleeping on the couch all week.

               Steve grins as he chews noisily.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         I know how it goes, buddy.  You're
                         making the right choice though,
                         you know.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Yeah.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         So how'd that go, anyway?  You met
                         with him, everything's cool?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Yeah, last night.  We talked it
                         out, he seemed real OK with the
                         whole situation.  We're gonna meet
                         up again in a week.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         Yeah, I told you... the guy acts
                         fast.  I don't know how he does
                         it.  Well OK, he's a sexy f*****g
                         guy, that's how he does it.  If I
                         looked like him I'd be getting all
                         kinds of p***y too.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         You sound like you've got a little
                         thing for him there, Steve.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         Hey, there's nothing wrong with a
                         man admitting that another man is
                         good looking.  Shows you're
                         comfortable with your own
                         sexuality.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Yeah, well, when you describe him
                         as "f*****g sexy", it doesn't help
                         your case.

               Steve laughs with his mouth full of food.  Some of it sprays
               out.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         Whatever, man.  Oh, hey, I didn't
                         tell you... the divorce was
                         finalized on the weekend.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         No kiddin'?

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         Yeah, done deal.  I'm a free man!

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         So, it worked then?

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         Oh, it f****n' worked.  Don't have
                         to pay a dime going forward. Yeah,
                         she got like thirty percent out of
                         the shared account, but it wasn't
                         the end of the world.  I like to
                         think of it as a one-time fee to
                         buy back my freedom.  Smooth
                         sailing from here on out.  You'll
                         see, you'll be there soon too.  I
                         just wish I was there when she saw
                         the tape.  She probably s**t her
                         pants!

               Steve laughs to himself.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Yeah...

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         Hey, I'm tellin' ya man... it's
                         gonna be fine, just keep your chin
                         up.

               John picks at his food.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         You see Liz at all this week?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Naw...

               John stares at his food.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         You kidding?  She's a piece of
                         a*s, John.  And, let's not forget,
                         you're a free man.  Well, let me
                         rephrase that.  A free man in the
                         making.  Have fun, why not?  You
                         deserve it, buddy.

               The waitress walks up.

                                     WAITRESS
                         Aww you didn't like your food?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         It's all right... I'm just not
                         real hungry, I guess.

                                     WAITRESS
                         I'll get you a doggy bag.  Always
                         good for a midnight snack, right?

               The waitress smiles and walks off.

               John's CELL PHONE BUZZES in his pocket.  He pulls it out and
               reads the message.

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                               (text message)
                         Did I do something wrong?  Why
                         won't you return my calls?

               John flips his phone closed and puts it back in his pocket.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Hey, listen, I think I'm gonna get
                         back.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         Jesus, you just got here!

               John throws down a twenty dollar bill and stands up, putting
               his jacket back on.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Sorry, I've just got a lot on my
                         plate right now.  I'll talk to you
                         later.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         Let me know how it goes!

               As John walks away, Steve is in the background reaching
               across the table with his fork to pick food off of John's
               plate.

                                                       FADE TO BLACK


               INT. ANTON'S CAR - EVENING

               SUPER: Five days later

               Anton is driving on a dark highway.  The snow has stopped
               briefly, but the road is still slippery.

               Anton's CELL PHONE RINGS.  He answers it.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         You got it?


               INT. DAFINO'S CAR - CONTINUOUS

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         Yeah, I got it.  She's in there
                         now.  "La Vida Yoga", it's on main
                         street here.

               INTERCUT TELEPHONE CONVERSATION.

               Dafino is sitting in his car outside of the Yoga Studio,
               watching as people go in and out.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Aw, sounds like a cute place.
                         Maybe you should pop in for a few,
                         work off some of that beer gut
                         you've been nurturing for so long.

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         I drag my a*s out to this podunk
                         town for you and now you're gonna
                         sass me?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Ha ha!  You know I'm only kidding.
                          I'm pretty sure you used to have
                         a sense of humor.

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         Must have left it back in
                         Pittsburgh.  We good here?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Yeah, we're good, you go home, get
                         some rest.  Good work tonight.

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         Good luck.

               Anton closes his phone and puts it in the cup holder.  He
               lays his foot on the gas and speeds away.


               INT. LA VIDA YOGA - LATER

               A group of about forty men and woman are all exercising in
               unison to the tune of a slow, relaxing MELODY.  Several
               people look like they are about to pass out.

               One man, overweight and in his 40s, is checking the messages
               on his phone while doing as little effort as possible to
               make it appear as though he's trying to touch his toes.

               Rachel Avery, on the other hand, is clearly giving it her
               all. She has a look of determination on her face as she
               stretches.  The music suddenly stops.  She stops exercising
               in unison with the rest of the class.

               The YOGA INSTRUCTOR at the front of the room is an
               intimidating broad-shouldered woman in her 50s with frizzy
               grey hair.

                                     YOGA INSTRUCTOR
                         I'm still seeing a few of you in
                         the back there not really
                         trying... if you're not going to
                         give it your all, you might as
                         well just go home.  Everyone else
                         though, great effort!  I like what
                         I'm seeing.

               The lazy, overweight man rolls his eyes and his wife, who is
               sitting beside him, gives him a hard nudge with her elbow.

                                     YOGA INSTRUCTOR
                         Two minute break and then back at
                         it!

                                     ANTON BRODY
                               (O.S.)
                         Hell of a workout, isn't it?

               Rachel looks to her left to find an attractive man with a
               tan complexion and greying hair sitting beside her.

               She smiles awkwardly.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         I suppose so.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         She never tires out, does she?
                         Must be fun being married to her.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Right..

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         You a regular here?

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                               (dismissively)
                         Once a week.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         This is my first time... thought
                         it might help with my back... I
                         get these cramps sometimes...

               Rachel looks away and stretches in the opposite direction of
               Anton, trying her best to ignore him.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Hey, I'm sorry, I'm talking your
                         ear off, aren't I?

               The Yoga Instructor is slamming back a purple energy drink,
               spilling some of it onto her leotard.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I'm Anton.  Nice to meet you...?

               Anton extends his hand, prying for Rachel's name.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Rachel.  Nice to meet you, Anton.

               She shakes his hand lightly.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         You've got great form, you're a
                         natural at this.  Your
                         Downward-Facing Dog... it's very
                         refined.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Excuse me?

               Anton smiles.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Wow.  I don't know who told you
                         that'd be a good pick up line, but
                         you might want to rethink your
                         strategy.  And next time, think
                         about who you're hitting on.

               Rachel flashes her wedding band at Anton, gives him the
               finger and then stands up.

               She grabs her workout mat and moves it a few rows back.

               Anton chuckles to himself and scratches his head.

                                     YOGA INSTRUCTOR
                         OK everyone, back at it!  We're
                         going to kick it up a notch.
                         Twenty more minutes and we'll call
                         it a day.

               The MUSIC starts back up again.

               Anton glances back at Rachel, who's already begun to stretch
               again.  He smiles to himself and goes back to stretching as
               well.  He winces in pain as he tries to touch his toes.

               The overweight man stands up and leaves the room.  The Yoga
               Instructor shoots him a nasty look as he passes by,
               shrugging his shoulders at her.


               EXT. LA VIDA YOGA - LATER

               The Yoga class is being let out and people are filing out of
               the building.  Rachel emerges and starts walking toward her
               car, which is parked at the side of the street.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Hey, I'm sorry about before.  Hey,
                         hey! Wait up!

               Anton jogs to catch up, as Rachel starts to walk faster
               after hearing his voice.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Listen, I'm sorry about before, I
                         was out of line.  I didn't know
                         you were married.

               Rachel stops and turns around.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Would it have stopped you if you
                         knew?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Probably not.

               Anton grins.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         I figured.

               Rachel starts to walk away again.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Can I buy you a coffee?

               Rachel stops again.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         You serious?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         As a peace offering, nothing more.

               Rachel cracks a slight smile.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         It's a little late for caffeine,
                         isn't it?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         A beer then?

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         You're really something, you know
                         that?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I am definitely a handful.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Exactly.  I'll see you next week,
                         Anton.  MAYBE.

               Anton smiles.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Next week, then.

               Rachel grins slightly.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Don't be so sure.

               Anton turns around and walks away with his hands in his
               jacket pockets.

               Rachel shakes her head and walks toward her car.


               INT. RACHEL'S CAR - CONTINUOUS

               Rachel slides into her car.  She takes her phone out of her
               purse and flips it open.  There's one message from John:

               "We need to talk about this, Rachel.  Enough is enough."

               Rachel SNAPS her PHONE shut and tosses it on the seat next
               to her.  She closes her eyes and lays her head back on the
               headrest.

               A beat.

               She takes her ring off and throws it in the glove
               compartment.

               Rachel starts the car and does a quick U-turn.

               She drives up next to Anton and rolls the window down.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         One beer.

               Anton gives her a big smile.


               INT. JOHN'S CAR - LATER

               John is sitting in his car in an empty mall parking lot.
               He's rubbing his hands together and listening to the weather
               report on the radio.

                                     RADIO
                         Yeah, that's right Kelly, we're
                         calling for, you guessed it; snow,
                         snow, snow!  No reprieve from the
                         white stuff this week, I'm afraid.
                          Time to pass it on over to Bill
                         now at the Sports Desk to get an
                         update on  tonight's Penguins
                         game.  How'd they do Bill?

               Headlights flash in John's rear-view mirror and a white
               sedan pulls up next to his car.

               John turns the radio off.

               The driver looks over at John and frowns.  He gets out of
               his car.

               The SNOW CRUNCHES as the man walks around John's car.  John
               looks nervous.  The man opens the passenger door and gets
               in.

               The man is FISCHER, a man in his mid-30s with short, curly
               dark hair and a dark complexion.  A dangerous looking
               person.

                                     FISCHER
                         Let's have it.

               John nods and reaches into his back seat.  He produces a
               Manila envelope, similar to the one given to Anton
               previously.  He hands it to the man.

               The man looks confused as he takes the envelope from John.

               The man opens it and leafs through the money inside.  He
               gets to the end and leafs through the bills one more time.

                                     FISCHER
                         The f**k is this?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Now... I know that's not --

                                     FISCHER
                         That's less than half!

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Listen, I'm trying to explain.
                         I've had some personal issues that
                         were... out of my control.  I had
                         to --

                                     FISCHER
                         Are you f*****g kidding me, man? I
                         don't give a f**k about your
                         problems!  Where's my money?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Listen, I can have it for you next
                         week, plus interest, if you'll
                         just --

               The man punches John in the face and grips him around the
               throat with leather-gloved hands.

                                     FISCHER
                         You little piece of s**t.  You're
                         telling ME how this is gonna go
                         down?  We're going to an ATM right
                         now and you're givin' me the rest
                         of my money.  Don't think for a
                         second you can get away with s**t
                         like this.  I let you in on that
                         game as a favor, you did this to
                         yourself by not knowing when to
                         quit.

               The man releases his grip on John's neck.  John leans
               forward, coughing and gasping for air.

                                     FISCHER
                         Let's go.  Drive.

               John, still coughing loudly, glares at Fischer.

               Fischer opens his jacket and shows John his pistol.

                                     FISCHER
                         Drive.

               John puts the car into drive.


               EXT. PARKING LOT - CONTINUOUS

               The car leaves the parking lot, leaving tire tracks in the
               newly fallen snow.

                                                       CUT TO BLACK


               INT. HOTEL ROOM - LATER

               A dark room.

               There's a COMMOTION in the hallway and the door suddenly
               swings open, illuminating the room.  Anton and Rachel are
               kissing passionately.

               They move to the bedroom and begin undressing one another.

               Anton playfully pushes Rachel down onto the bed.  He
               discreetly reaches into his jacket pocket and pulls out the
               video recorder, which he quickly sets up on the hotel room
               desk, hiding it behind the coffee maker.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         What are you doing?  Get over
                         here!

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Just looking for a rubber babe,
                         one sec.

               Anton goes into his wallet and pulls out a condom.  He moves
               onto the bed.

               Rachel puts her hand behind Anton's neck and forces him down
               on top of her.

               Anton is on top of Rachel, removing the rest of her clothes,
               kissing her passionately.

               CLOSE ON VIDEO RECORDER

                                                       FADE TO BLACK


               INT. FLASHFORWARD - OFFICE BUILDING - DAY

               A pane of glass in a nicely decorated office building. After
               a moment, blood starts running down the glass in long, gooey
               streaks.

                                                       CUT TO BLACK


               EXT. FLASHFORWARD - RIVER - EVENING

               A garbage bag is floating in the water.  It's unclear what
               is in the bag, as it thrashes against the turbulant activity
               of the water.

               Suddenly, the bag is tossed violently against a rock and an
               arm appears, jutting out from the side of the newly torn
               bag.

                                                       CUT TO BLACK


               EXT. FLASHFORWARD - PARKING LOT - EVENING

               An icy pavement surface painted with yellow parking lines.
               Suddenly, blood begins to TRICKLE and SPURT horizontally
               down the surface of the ice.  Exasperated GASPING can be
               heard as the blood begins to pool on the ice.

                                                       CUT TO BLACK


               INT. AVERY HOME (BACK TO PRESENT) - LATER

               FRONT DOOR

               The JINGLING of keys can be heard outside.

               Rachel enters the house quietly and closes the door behind
               her.

               KITCHEN

               She walks into the kitchen and pours herself a glass of
               milk.

               She glances in the den and sees John sleeping on the couch.
               The TV is still on.  She stares at him with a thoughtful
               look.

               An infomercial is playing in the background:

                                     TV
                               (O.S.)
                         For all the work it does, this
                         machine should sell for over four
                         hundred dollars.  You know you're
                         not gonna spend four hundred on
                         it, you're not gonna spend three
                         seventy-five or three fifty, not
                         three twenty-five or even three
                         hundred.  Not two seventy-five or
                         two fifty, not two twenty-five or
                         even two hundred dollars, like
                         you're already thinking.

               Rachel suddenly notices that there's an ice pack on John's
               face.  He stirs in his sleep and the ice pack falls to the
               floor.

               DEN

               Rachel sets the milk down on the counter and walks over to
               the den and picks up the ice pack.  She stares in confusion
               at John's swelling face.

               John opens his eyes.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                               (startled)
                         Jesus!

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Rachel...

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         What the hell happened to you?

               John's face wells up with tears of pain as he slowly sits
               up.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Just... an argument with someone.
                         It's nothing.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         For some reason I don't believe
                         you.  What really happened?

               John shakes his head and puts his face in his hands.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         You know what... I don't want to
                         know.

               Rachel starts to walk away.

               KITCHEN

               She stops, her back to John.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         I want you out of here.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         I'm not going anywhere, this is my
                         house too, Rachel.

               John slowly rises from the couch.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Can we PLEASE talk about this?

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         I have nothing to say to you.

               John moves into the kitchen.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Rachel, I told you a thousand
                         times that what I did --

               Rachel interrupts him by knocking over the glass of milk as
               she runs upstairs.  The GLASS SHATTERS on the floor.

               John stares at the spilt milk.  A DOOR SLAMS upstairs.

               John bends down and starts picking up the broken shards of
               glass.

                                                       FADE TO BLACK


               INT. AVERY HOME - AFTERNOON

                                                       FLARE TO WHITE

               DEN

               John wakes up with a splitting headache.  The light is
               blinding in the room, forcing him to squint.  His right eye
               is a deep purple and swollen and there's a slight red mark
               around his neck.

               John looks over at the alarm clock.  It reads 3:55.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Jesus...

               John stands up and knocks over a few beer bottles that were
               standing on the floor beside the couch.  He stumbles and
               almost loses his balance.

               SHOWER

               ANGLE ON John in the shower, he's leaning against the wall
               of the shower stall with his head in his hands.

               KITCHEN

               John is sitting alone at the dinner table eating Kraft
               Dinner while pressing a bag of peas against his swollen
               right eye.  The sun is now starting to set, illuminating the
               room in an orange glow.


               INT. JOHN'S CAR - LATER

               The snow is coming down fast and hard ahead of John's car.

               The glow of passing street lights flash over his face, one
               by one.  His right eye is dark and puffy and he can only
               really see well out of his left eye.


               EXT. WELLINGTON'S PUB - MOMENTS LATER

               John pulls into the parking lot of Wellington's Pub.


               INT. WELLINGTON'S PUB - MOMENTS LATER

               The door of the pub opens and John enters.  He takes off his
               winter hat and gloves and stamps his feet on the mat to get
               rid of the excess snow.

               He walks into the bar and finds Anton sitting in a familiar
               spot.

               Anton pretends to look at his watch, even though he's not
               wearing one.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I'm impressed, you're actually on
                         time.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Yeah.  I left early on account of
                         the storm and all.

               As John moves closer, Anton notices John's face.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Jesus, who's Cheerios did you piss
                         in?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         What?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I'm referring to that crater in
                         the middle of your head, John,
                         what the hell happened?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Oh, that's... I had a bit of an
                         argument with someone, that's all.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I'd hate to see the other guy. Sit
                         down, take a load off.

               John sits down across from Anton, his puffy winter jacket
               barely fitting in the booth.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         So, it's done then?

               Anton reaches into his jacket pocket and pulls out a DVD in
               a plastic case.  The DVD has 'Avery' scrawled on it in black
               Sharpie.  He places it in the middle of the table.

               John takes the DVD and stares at it, as if he's not sure he
               wants to hold it.

               An awkward beat.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         You thirsty?  Can I get you a beer
                         or something?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Oh, no, that's OK.  Like I said
                         before, I'm not really much of a
                         drinker.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Right...

               Anton turns around and signals the waitress by holding up
               one finger.  She points back and smiles.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         You wanna tell me what really
                         happened?  That's one hell of a
                         shiner you're sporting there.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Listen, I really can't stay, I
                         need to be heading back.

               John starts to get out of his seat.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         She still wears her ring, you
                         know.

               John stops, and slides back into his seat slowly.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Beg your pardon?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Her ring.

               Anton points to his ring finger.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         She was wearing it last night.  At
                         the yoga studio.

               There's a moment of silence between the two men.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         You know, she really is a great
                         girl.  You should try to patch
                         things up before you do something
                         you'll regret.

               The waitress comes by with a beer and sets it down in front
               of Anton.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Thank you.

               Anton takes a long sip of his beer.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Listen, I appreciate your help in
                         this, but really, this, uh... this
                         isn't any of your concern.  If you
                         don't mind, I think we're done
                         here.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Hey, of course.  Sorry for
                         meddling.  Listen, good luck.  I
                         mean it.

               Anton extends his hand.

               John shakes it.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         And hey, listen, I always say that
                         the greatest compliment my clients
                         can give me is a solid reference.
                         I can't exactly list this gig on
                         my resume if you know what I mean
                         so, you know, if you have any
                         buddies that, God forbid, are
                         going through a tough time, you
                         feel free to drop my name, all
                         right?  Or if your next marriage
                         doesn't work out...

               John frowns.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Ha ha!  But seriously, keep me in
                         mind.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Yeah, whatever.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Now you go on home and play nice!
                         I'd hate to see you get a matching
                         pair.

               Anton points to his eyes.

               John slides out of his seat with a frown and walks away.

               The waitress walks back over to Anton.

                                     WAITRESS
                         What the hell happened to your
                         buddy?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Marriage happened.

               Anton smiles at the waitress.

                                                       FADE TO BLACK


               INT. BERNSTEIN'S OFFICE - DAY

               John's divorce lawyer, ETHAN BERNSTEIN, is sitting behind a
               large oak desk.  Bernstein is a portly, Jewish man, with
               thinning grey hair and large, round glasses.  He is dressed
               in a blue suit with a matching blue tie.  He's reviewing a
               document closely.

               John is sitting across from him, wearing dark sunglasses to
               cover his swollen eye.

                                     ETHAN BERNSTEIN
                         Now, if I understand you
                         correctly, Mr. Avery, which I
                         think I do, you're saying that
                         you're seeking an at-fault divorce
                         against your wife... what is it...
                         Rachel?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         That's right, yeah.

               Bernstein looks up at John, his glasses perched on the edge
               of his nose.

                                     ETHAN BERNSTEIN
                         You do understand, Mr. Avery, that
                         such a thing can't just be...
                         conjured up from thin air.  A good
                         deal of proof is required to
                         determine that such a course of
                         action is, uh... what's the word
                         I'm looking for...

               Bernstein snaps his fingers in thought.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Warranted?

                                     ETHAN BERNSTEIN
                         Sanctioned, yes.  The point I'm
                         trying to get across here, sir,
                         and forgive me for speaking in
                         absolute truths with you, the
                         point I'm trying to get across to
                         you is... it's not going to be
                         just a walk in the park.  Absolute
                         proof will be required to
                         determine that she did indeed
                         conduct this alleged, uh...
                         malfeasance.  The commission of
                         unlawful act, if you will.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Actually, I do have proof. Pretty
                         solid proof, as it happens.  You
                         see, there's a video...

                                     ETHAN BERNSTEIN
                         A video?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         A video, yes.  Of my wife.

               Bernstein looks confused.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         With another man.

                                     ETHAN BERNSTEIN
                         Well!  Mr. Avery, I would say that
                         is a rather irrefutable piece of
                         evidence, if such a thing were to
                         exist.  This video, how did it
                         come to be in your possession?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         I hired someone.  A private
                         investigator.  Listen, when can
                         this be done?  I'd like to get
                         moving on this thing right away.

                                     ETHAN BERNSTEIN
                         Well, I'm afraid, sir, it's highly
                         unlikely that anything more can be
                         done today.  There's all manner of
                         paperwork that needs to be filed
                         in order to forge ahead in such a
                         manner.  This video you speak of,
                         might I ask where it is?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Oh, I left it at home.  S**t, I
                         wasn't sure if I should --

                                     ETHAN BERNSTEIN
                         And that's exactly where it
                         belongs, Mr. Avery.  I would
                         caution you to keep a close eye on
                         that particular piece of evidence,
                         don't let it out of your sight, if
                         at all possible.  What I can do
                         for you, is set up a follow-up
                         appointment in, say, one week from
                         today.  Let's call it seven days;
                         five business days.  That should
                         allow for ample time to get all of
                         our proverbial ducks in order,
                         hmm?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Ducks?

                                     ETHAN BERNSTEIN
                         Mmm, yes.  Mallards.  Waterfowl.
                         They must be in order, Mr. Avery,
                         in order for us to proceed.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Look, there's gotta be some way we
                         can speed this along, I mean, come
                         on, a week?

                                     ETHAN BERNSTEIN
                         As I explained, there are all
                         manner of processes and procedures
                         in place that do need to be
                         followed to the letter.  I's to be
                         crossed and T's to be dotted, that
                         sort of thing.  Patience, in this
                         case, would be of a virtue, Mr.
                         Avery.  Let's agree to meet again
                         in one week's time.  Five business
                         days.  I would ask that you bring
                         the video with you at that time so
                         that it can be entered as
                         evidence.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Fine, one week then.

               Bernstein smiles as John gets up to leave.

                                     ETHAN BERNSTEIN
                         "Knowing trees, I understand the
                         meaning of patience.  Knowing
                         grass, I can appreciate
                         persistence."

               John stops briefly to listen to Bernstein's parting words
               before continuing his exit with a frown.


               INT. ANTON'S APARTMENT - LATER

               BEDROOM

               CLOSE ON Anton's face.  He's lying on a bed, which is
               shaking violently.  He looks disinterested, and lost in
               thought.

                                     WOMAN
                         Oh God, Oh God!  Baby, I'm almost
                         there!

               ANTON'S POV

               A busty WOMAN is grinding her hips against Anton's.

                                     WOMAN
                         Ahhhh!

               The woman slides next to Anton and slips under the sheets.

                                     WOMAN
                         That was... exactly what I needed.
                         Mmm, I'm so sleepy now.  I
                         think... I'm just gonna...

               Anton looks over at her and sees that her eyes are already
               closed.  He pokes her gently.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Hey. Hey, wake up.

                                     WOMAN
                         Mmm... what's up baby?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         You're just gonna fall asleep?  I
                         thought maybe we could, I dunno,
                         talk for a bit or something.

                                     WOMAN
                         Mmm....OK.  What about, baby?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I don't know, just, anything
                         really.  Where are you from?
                         Originally?

                                     WOMAN
                         Aww, that's boring!  Who cares
                         about that stuff?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I do... sort of.  I mean, It'd be
                         nice to know a little bit about
                         you.  What sort of things are you
                         into?  Maybe we have a few things
                         in common, who knows?

                                     WOMAN
                         Well we both like to f**k each
                         other, we have that in common. And
                         we're both GOOD at it!

               The woman flashes Anton a devilish smile as she reaches for
               his crotch.

               Anton squirms away from her reach.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Ha ha! Well, yeah.  That's not
                         really what I meant but... good
                         point.  How long have you been
                         married?

                                     WOMAN
                         Ugh!  Why do you want to talk
                         about that?  You're really being a
                         bummer, you know.  I know what we
                         should do instead and if you ask
                         real nice, maybe I'll let you do
                         that thing we talked about.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Actually no, I'm good, I'm a bit
                         worn out right now, babe.

                                     WOMAN
                         Whatever.

               The woman turns around, away from Anton and lays her head
               down on her pillow.

               A beat.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I don't know, you ever feel
                         like... here you are, you're
                         living your life the same way
                         you've been living it for God
                         knows how long and it just doesn't
                         call out to you any more?  It's
                         just the same old thing, day in
                         and day out. For me, I guess
                         life's just become routine, paint
                         by numbers, clock in, clock out. I
                         don't know, I've never really...
                         committed to something before.  Or
                         someone, for that matter.  Maybe
                         I've just been afraid of getting
                         hurt.  I always tell myself,
                         Anton, you need to get out there
                         and try new things, meet new
                         people.  What is it all leading up
                         to, you think?  There must be some
                         higher purpose, some reason for us
                         to be here doing what we're doing.
                          Otherwise, what's the point?  You
                         know what I mean?

               Silence.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Babe?  You know what I mean?

               Anton looks over and sees that the woman is fast asleep.  He
               rolls his eyes and shakes his head.

               He gets out of bed, puts on his boxer shorts and walks to
               the bathroom.

               BATHROOM

               Anton is splashing water on his face.  He dries his face off
               with the hand towel and leans against the sink for a few
               seconds, lost in thought.

               As he's leaning on the sink, he glances into the trash can.

               CLOSE ON PHOTO

               The crumpled up photo of John and Rachel is lying in the
               trash.  Only Rachel is visible in the photo the way it's
               been folded.

               BACK TO SCENE

               Anton reaches down into the trash can and pulls out the
               photo.  He tears off the left side of the photo containing
               John's image and throws it away.  He continues smiling as he
               stares down at the image of Rachel, which smiles back at him
               against the backdrop of the bright, sunny beach.


               INT. LA VIDA YOGA - EVENING

                                     YOGA INSTRUCTOR
                         And now we're gonna stretch all
                         the way down... and hold.  Keep
                         holding for five... four...
                         three... two... one... and
                         release.

               Rachel releases her pose and is catching her breath as she
               sits on the Yoga mat.  The spot next to her is empty.

               A woman wanders over to the empty spot and starts to sit
               down.  Rachel moves her purse over to block her.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Sorry, this one's saved.

               The woman scowls at Rachel and walks away.

               Rachel looks around the room, searching for Anton.  She
               doesn't see him and she looks disappointed.

                                     YOGA INSTRUCTOR
                         OK everyone, next up is the
                         Ustrasana pose.  Make sure you pad
                         those knees, if you mess this one
                         up, I promise you, you're gonna
                         feel it tomorrow.

               Everyone in the class starts doing the pose in unison,
               except for Rachel.  She's still looking around the room.

               A beat.

               Rachel gives up her search and joins in with the others.


               EXT. LA VIDA YOGA - LATER

               Rachel is leaving the Yoga studio, bundled up in a heavy
               winter jacket.  She heads toward her car and notices someone
               walking behind her.

               Rachel turns to find Anton grinning ear to ear.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Wasn't sure I'd see you again.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Is that right?

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         I figured maybe you'd had your fun
                         and you were done with me.  On to
                         your next conquest.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I'm afraid my life isn't nearly as
                         exciting as you seem to think it
                         is.

               Rachel smiles.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         You missed an interesting class.
                         Maxine started to lose it on this
                         woman in the back that wasn't
                         paying attention, I was sure she
                         was gonna throw her right out the
                         window.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Something she's certainly capable
                         of.  That woman is truly a man
                         among men.

               Rachel laughs.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         I've been thinking about last
                         week...

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Oh really?  And what about it were
                         you thinking about?

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Just... all of it, I guess...

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         It was certainly all worth
                         remembering.  You know, I was just
                         thinking, I know this great place
                         around the corner from here,
                         really fantastic place to enjoy a
                         glass of wine.  Interested in
                         joining me?

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         I don't think I'm really fit for
                         public consumption right now. Look
                         at me, I'm in my LuLus!

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I don't think they'll mind.
                         Besides, I like you in your LuLus.
                          Makes your a*s look fantastic.

               Rachel puts her hands on Anton's face and kisses him.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         My a*s always looks fantastic.

               They both laugh.


               EXT. LA REVE RESTAURANT - MOMENTS LATER

               Anton holds Rachel's hand as they walk up the slippery
               stairs to the front entrance of the restaurant.  The name on
               the front of the building is "La Reve".

               Anton grabs the door for Rachel.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         What service!

               Anton has to keep holding the door as people come and go,
               oblivious to the fact that he's not the paid doorman.

               An ANGRY WOMAN in her 60s stops abruptly, right in the
               middle of the doorway.

                                     ANGRY WOMAN
                         Frank, COME ON!  I'm leaving,
                         let's go.

               The woman stands there, searching feverishly through her
               purse.

                                     ANGRY WOMAN
                         We have to be at my mother's in
                         twenty minutes!  I don't care if
                         the Penguins are playing, you can
                         listen to it in the car!
                         (beat)
                         Oh for f**k's sake!

               Anton gives Rachel a look of discomfort and Rachel bursts
               out laughing.

               The woman turns to Rachel and then to Anton.  She shakes her
               head and storms out of the building in a huff.


               INT. LA REVE RESTAURANT - MOMENTS LATER

               Rachel and Anton are standing over the booth they've been
               led to. Anton removes Rachel's jacket, revealing her workout
               clothes beneath.

               The Maitre'd gives them an unapproving look and walks away.

               Rachel and Anton take a seat across from each other.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Wow, this really is a nice place.
                         Real classy.  Usually when I go
                         out for dinner it involves a
                         dollar menu and a ball pit.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                               (smiling)
                         I've never felt as sorry for
                         someone's life as I do right now.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Excuse me?  MY life?  My life's
                         not so bad, you know, let's talk
                         about YOUR life.  Just who are
                         you, Anton Brody?  I feel like I
                         don't know anything about you.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         That's because you DON'T know
                         anything about me.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Well, OK, so tell me.  What do you
                         do for a living?  Let's start
                         there.

               The WAITER approaches, a tall snooty Frenchman in his 30s
               with a dirty little mustache.

                                     WAITER
                         Good evening, my name is Pierre
                         and I'll be serving you tonight.
                         Have you had a chance to look at
                         our drink menu yet?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I'm in the mood for a red. We'll
                         have a bottle of red... something.
                          I don't know, something with a
                         woody nose.  The woodier the
                         better.

               Anton smiles at the waiter.

                                     WAITER
                               (awkwardly)
                         Very good, sir.

               The waiter walks away.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         You know, some girls don't like a
                         man that orders for them.  What
                         makes you think I even like red
                         wine?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Well, Rachel, it just so happens
                         that everyone likes red wine. It's
                         a scientific fact.  Look it up if
                         you don't believe me.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         I'll choose to believe you.  A
                         woody nose, though?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I just like f*****g with these
                         pretentious waiters.  I bet he
                         goes back there and freaks out
                         when he can't find one that says
                         'woody' on the bottle.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         I bet he does.  Back to you,
                         though.  What DO you do for a
                         living?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         A variety of things.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Well, that's very mysterious.  A
                         variety of what things?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Well, right now I'm actually
                         working on a novel.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         So... you're a writer?  Wow I
                         would not have guessed that.  If I
                         had to guess I'd have said...
                         travelling salesman.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Seriously?

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         You've got a look about you.  Have
                         you written anything I might have
                         read?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         No, I highly doubt that.  So far
                         my resume consists entirely of
                         unpublished works.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Oh OK, so you're a broke writer. I
                         get it.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                               (winks)
                         I get by.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Have you always lived in
                         Pittsburgh?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Yeah, my whole life.  I gotta tell
                         you though, lately, this weather
                         has really started to get under my
                         skin.  To be honest, I've always
                         wanted to live on the West Coast.
                         Spend my days out in the warm sun
                         and my nights relaxing on the
                         beach.  Maybe open up a little
                         coffee shop or something and work
                         on my writing in my spare time.  I
                         don't know.  it's a pipe dream, I
                         guess.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         That sounds perfect.  Maybe I
                         could come visit.

               Anton smiles wide at Rachel.

               The waiter walks up with a decanter of wine and two glasses.
               He pours a small amount of wine into Anton's glass and
               offers it to Anton.

               Anton takes the glass and swirls it around pretentiously
               under his nose.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I thought I asked for a woody
                         nose?

                                     WAITER
                         I'm sorry sir, I --

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Don't worry about it, this will
                         have to do.

               The waiter looks annoyed.  He pours two glasses and walks
               away.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I notice you're not wearing your
                         ring.

               Rachel awkwardly hides her ring finger and puts her hands
               under the table.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         You're right.  I'm not.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         How long have you been married? Do
                         you mind if I ask?

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Far too long...

               Rachel looks around the restaurant awkwardly.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Hey, I'm sorry, that's a s****y
                         subject, we don't have to talk
                         about that.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         No, it's OK.  It's the elephant in
                         the room, right?
                         (beat)
                         I found out he's been... John, my
                         husband... I found out he's been
                         cheating on me.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         No kidding.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         No kidding.  He, uh... he came
                         home late one night.  Well, a few
                         nights actually.  Said he was
                         putting in a lot of overtime, some
                         big new client that had to close
                         by the end of the week.  I bought
                         it, why not right?  Made sense at
                         the time.  The Friday of that week
                         though, I borrowed his car first
                         thing in the morning to run out to
                         get some milk.  I looked in the
                         back seat... she left her purse
                         behind.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Ouch.  How did you react?

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         How do you think?  The second I
                         got home I screamed at him, asking
                         for an explanation.  He made up
                         some bullshit excuse. I can't even
                         remember what it was now, it's not
                         important.  I could tell he was
                         making it all up on the spot, he's
                         a terrible liar.

               Rachel stops to wipe away a tear.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Anyway...what's done is done. And
                         now, here I am, sitting with you
                         in this fancy restaurant.  And all
                         the while it seems like I should
                         feel like a total a*****e for
                         being here with you, but... I just
                         don't care.  I don't feel the
                         least bit guilty about it.  It
                         feels right, somehow.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Hey, listen...

               Anton lifts a glass.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         To new beginnings.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         I can drink to that.

               They CLINK their GLASSES together and they each take a swig
               of wine and smile at one another.  Rachel puts her hands
               back on the table and Anton puts his on top of hers.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         It tastes a bit woody, I guess.

               They both laugh.


               INT. AMANDA GRANT'S OFFICE - DAY

               HALLWAY

               Rachel is walking down a long office hallway with many doors
               on either side.  She comes to a door labelled "Amanda Grant
               LLP".

               OFFICE

               Rachel opens the door to find AMANDA GRANT seated at her
               desk, talking to someone on the phone.  Amanda is a thin,
               well-maintained woman in her mid-40s with an intimidating,
               harsh look.  She has a slight British accent, which makes
               her seem even more intimidating.

                                     AMANDA GRANT
                         Well I can't, Harry.  No, I can't,
                         I told you, I've got meetings
                         until at least seven o' clock.

               Amanda looks up and sees Rachel.  She waves her in.

                                     AMANDA GRANT
                         Well, you'll just have to get her
                         ready yourself.  The skates are
                         hanging up in the basement.
                         Honestly, it's not that hard. Yes,
                         well, that's very unfortunate but
                         I have faith in you.  Listen, I
                         have to go, I have a client here.
                         Chicken tonight, OK?  Oh for
                         f**k's sake, it's in the freezer.
                         Goodbye!

               Rachel makes an awkward face, to appear sympathetic.

                                     AMANDA GRANT
                         Honestly, the man has his Ph.D, he
                         can perform open heart surgery but
                         getting our daughter to skating
                         practice is an ordeal.

               Rachel laughs nervously.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Men, right?

                                     AMANDA GRANT
                         Makes me remember why I do what I
                         do.

               Amanda sighs loudly.

                                     AMANDA GRANT
                         Rachel, right?  How are you? Come,
                         sit down.

               Amanda extends her hand.

                                     AMANDA GRANT
                         Amanda Grant.  You can just call
                         me Amanda.

               Rachel shakes Amanda's hand lightly and sits down in front
               of her.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         I'm fine, I'm just here to get
                         some information, really.

                                     AMANDA GRANT
                         Certainly.  What can I help you
                         with?

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Well, obviously... I'm thinking
                         of... divorce...

                                     AMANDA GRANT
                         Let me stop you right there.  Now,
                         there's a few different ways we
                         can run with this thing and I'd
                         like to make sure we're on the
                         same page.  What's the reason for
                         the divorce?

               An awkward beat.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Infidelity.

               Amanda CLAPS her hands together, excitedly.

                                     AMANDA GRANT
                         That's FANTASTIC.

               Rachel gives her a disturbed look.

                                     AMANDA GRANT
                         Oh, not for your marriage, of
                         course, but from a legal point of
                         view... let's just say that it
                         gives us  many, many options. Have
                         you spoken to your husband about
                         this yet?

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         No, no, we... we really haven't
                         spoken about anything in a while,
                         to be honest.

                                     AMANDA GRANT
                         Good.  Keep it that way.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Excuse me?

                                     AMANDA GRANT
                         Don't talk to him.  About
                         anything!  And by anything, I mean
                         anything at all.  Don't ask him to
                         pick up milk on his way home,
                         don't ask him why he's such a
                         slob, don't even yell at him when
                         he leaves the toilet seat up.
                         Total silence.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         OK.  Why is that so important?

                                     AMANDA GRANT
                         You don't want to give him any
                         indication of what you're about to
                         do.  No indication whatsoever!
                         It's important that he has no
                         forewarning of your intentions.

               Rachel looks concerned.

                                     AMANDA GRANT
                         Now... tell me everything.

               Amanda leans forward eagerly on her desk, smiling widely.


               INT. AVERY ADVERTISING - DAY

               LOBBY

               John walks into the lobby of his office suite.  He's wearing
               sunglasses to cover his eye.  He walks past the reception
               desk.  Elizabeth is on the phone with a client.

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         We can totally help you with that.
                          Um, did you want to talk to a
                         sales associate now, or... OK. OK,
                         sure!

               She gives John a small smile as he passes.

               JOHN'S OFFICE

               John enters his office.  He removes his sunglasses and
               jacket.  At the same time, Steve enters.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         Hey buddy, how are ya?  Just
                         wanted to give you a heads up
                         on...
                         (beat)
                         Jesus John, what the hell happened
                         to you?  Please tell me you
                         haven't been...

               Steve lowers his voice and rubs his fingers together, giving
               John the "money" signal, hinting at John's gambling habit.

               John sighs loudly and shakes his head.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Got into an argument with Rachel
                         last night about you-know-what. I
                         had it coming. It's no big deal.

               John shrugs.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         Wow she really popped you good.
                         She's a real force of nature.
                         Anyways, uh... you know what, I'll
                         give you some space.  Talk to you
                         later, all right?

               John leans back in his chair and stares at a clock mounted
               on the wall.

               The CLOCK TICKS away, second by second.

               CLOSE ON THE CLOCK

               The second hand slowly reaches the twelve and then...

               BACK TO SCENE

               John's PHONE RINGS and he jumps in his chair at the sudden
               noise.

               John picks up the phone.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Avery Advertising.

                                     FISCHER (V.O.)
                         It's me.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Jesus, what are you --

                                     FISCHER (V.O.)
                         Shut up and listen.  I need to
                         make the pick-up this week a bit
                         earlier, something's come up.  Can
                         I come in for a second?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         What are you talking about?  Are
                         you... you're not HERE, are you?

               John swings around in his chair and looks outside, not
               seeing anything suspicious.

                                     FISCHER (V.O.)
                         I'm coming up or you're coming
                         down, what's it gonna be?

               John glances around the office and then stares out the
               window again.


               EXT. AVERY ADVERTISING - MOMENTS LATER

               John is walking through the parking lot with his heavy
               winter coat on.  He approaches Fischer's car.

               Fischer gets out of his car and walks towards John.

                                     FISCHER
                         You got it here or we takin' a
                         trip again?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         What the hell's goin' on here, you
                         said we'd always do this at night,
                         in a private place.  This is not
                         --

                                     FISCHER
                         Don't tell me my f****n' business,
                         Avery.  Don't ever raise your
                         voice at me like that again. Don't
                         forget who's doin' who a favor
                         here.  I'll ask again.  You have
                         it or we goin' for a ride?

               John is fuming, but he reaches into his jacket and pulls out
               another Manila envelope.  He looks around the parking lot
               and then hands it to Fischer.

                                     FISCHER
                         See you in a week.  Put a steak on
                         the eye.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Hold on.  Hey, hold on, I wanna
                         talk to you.

                                     FISCHER
                         What is it?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Do you think you can get me a spot
                         at the table this Saturday?

                                     FISCHER
                         What?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         If I could just get another
                         chance, I know I could --

                                     FISCHER
                         You've already fucked me over
                         once, it's not gonna happen again!
                          The best thing for you to do
                         right now is to march your little
                         a*s back in there, put your head
                         down, and get to work.  Don't
                         forget how much you owe me.  Start
                         selling some f*****g ad space.

               Fischer gets into his car and drives off.

               John stands in the snow and watches him drive away.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                               (O.S.)
                         John?

               John turns quickly around to find Anton standing behind him.
                John stares at him with wide, unbelieving eyes.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         What the hell?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         We need to talk.  You have a few
                         minutes?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Is everyone in my life conspiring
                         against me today?  What do you
                         want?

               Anton motions to his car.


               INT. ANTON'S CAR - MOMENTS LATER

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Who was that guy?  He looked
                         pissed.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         What do you want, Anton?  What are
                         you doing here?

               A beat.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         It's Rachel.

               A look of concern washes over John's face.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         What, what do you mean?  Is she
                         OK?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I love her, John.

               An awkward beat.

               John scoffs.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         What?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Look, I know, it's crazy, right? I
                         didn't' expect it, you sure as
                         hell didn't expect it but it's the
                         God's honest truth.  I love her,
                         John.  More than I've ever loved
                         anyone before.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Wait, why are you telling me this?

               Anton reaches into the back seat and grabs a Manila
               envelope, the same one that John gave him originally, and
               hands it back to John.

               John opens the envelope cautiously and sees that it's full
               of money.

               John looks confused.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         What the hell is this?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         It's money.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         I know it's f*****g money, why are
                         you giving this to me?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I'm not giving it to you.  I'm
                         buying back that disc from you.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Oh no, no you're not, we're done!
                         The transaction or whatever you
                         want to call it, it's DONE.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         If she sees that tape, John,
                         she'll --

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         She'll what?  Realize who you
                         really are?  What your intentions
                         were?  Yeah, you're right, she
                         will.  But that's not my problem.
                         You agreed to do this, you're the
                         one that's supposed to be a...
                         a...  'professional', whatever the
                         hell that means in this situation.

               John throws the envelope back at Anton.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         I don't want to see you around
                         here again.

               John opens the car door and begins to make his exit.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I'll give you double your money
                         back.

               John pauses and turns back around.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         A hundred-thousand.

               Anton laughs to himself.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         That's more than ten times...

               Anton stares at John, who is staring back at him with a
               frown.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Fifteen.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         One hundred.  You have my number
                         if you decide she's worth it.

               John gets out of the car and marches away, SLAMMING the CAR
               DOOR behind him.  The CRUNCHING of SNOW is heard as Anton
               shakes his head.

               Anton reaches into his jacket and pulls out his cellphone.
               He punches in a number.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Hey pal, how are ya?  Everything
                         good?  Ha ha!  That's great.
                         Listen, I need a favor.  Think you
                         can meet me tonight?

               Anton looks at his watch.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I dunno, a couple hours or so?  My
                         place.  All right, great, see you
                         soon.

               Anton flips his phone closed.  He starts his car and drives
               off.


               INT. FLASHFORWARD - OFFICE BUILDING - DAY

               Blood is dripping down a pane of glass.  It reaches the
               floor of the room and starts to collect on a pamphlet.  The
               logo on the pamphlet is for Avery Advertising.  In the
               background, through the glass, we can see people running
               frantically.

                                                       CUT TO BLACK


               EXT. FLASHFORWARD - RIVER - EVENING

               A garbage bag, with an arm poking out, is floating in a body
               of water.  A heavy wave suddenly pushes it violently onto a
               strip of icy land.

               A young boy and his parents are building a snowman nearby.
               The young boy runs over to have a look and screams when he
               sees what's inside the bag.

                                                       CUT TO BLACK


               EXT. FLASHFORWARD - PARKING LOT - NIGHT

               The blood is pooling on the icy pavement of the parking lot,
               spurting and spraying all over the place.  A GRUNTING NOISE
               can be heard and suddenly a bloody arm comes INTO FRAME. And
               then another.  Someone is crawling along the ice.

               The bloody arms come to a stop at a pair of shoes, clawing
               at them, frantically.  A LOUD GUNSHOT.  The arms go limp.

                                                       CUT TO BLACK


               INT. ANTON'S APARTMENT (BACK TO PRESENT) - EVENING

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         I was thinking, maybe tonight we
                         could go out and watch a movie.
                         What do you think?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Baby, that sounds  like a
                         fantastic idea.

               Anton and Rachel are cooking dinner together in Anton's
               tastefully decorated apartment.  Rachel is chopping carrots
               and onions while Anton is searing some meat on the stove
               top.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         You're gonna love this recipe, I
                         used to make it all the time.  One
                         might say it's my speciality.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Well, it smells fantastic already.
                          I'm tempted to just eat right out
                         of the pot.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         No way!  You're gonna wait it out,
                         no cheating.  So, what movie you
                         wanna see?

               Anton's CELL PHONE RINGS.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Hold on, babe.

               Anton flips his cell phone open.  He checks out the caller
               ID.

               "Dafino, Bill"

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO (VO)
                         I'm here, you wanna let me in?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Uh, yeah, actually, tell you
                         what... I'll come down to you.
                         Give me a minute.

               Rachel frowns.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Who's that?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         That there was just a friend of
                         mine.  I haven't seen him in ages.
                          I'm just gonna whip down and say
                         hi to him, I'll be two seconds.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Why don't you just invite him up?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Listen... to be perfectly
                         honest... he's a bit of an
                         a*****e.  There's a reason I
                         haven't seen him in a while.
                         Between you and me, I can't stand
                         the guy. Just let me go down, say
                         hi, and I'll get him out of here,
                         OK?

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Sure...

               Anton kisses Rachel on the forehead.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Love ya babe!  Be RIGHT back!
                         Don't eat without me!

               Anton throws on a heavy jacket and heads out the door.


               INT. DAFINO'S CAR - MOMENTS LATER

               It is snowing heavily outside.  William Dafino is sitting in
               his car, sipping on a coffee.  He doesn't look happy.

               The passenger door opens and Anton slides in.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Sorry, old-timer, got some company
                         up there.  You know how it is.

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         Well, I hope you're having a good
                         time.  Me?  I just drove my a*s
                         through the goddamn blizzard of
                         the century.  Took me two hours to
                         drive ten miles.  Whatever this is
                         better be worth it.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Well, it's actually about a
                         girl...

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         And it's not usually?

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         No, it's not like that.  As it
                         turns out, I'm out of the
                         business.  For good.  I'm throwing
                         in the towel.

               Dafino scoffs.

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         I've heard THIS story before.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Hey, listen, I know what you're
                         thinking.  It didn't exactly work
                         out the last time but that doesn't
                         mean it won't work out with
                         Rachel.  I'm on my hands and knees
                         here, Bill.  I need your help.

               Dafino frowns at Anton.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Ten Grand.  Cash.  I can get it to
                         you tomorrow.

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         I'm listening.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         There's a disc, I need you to get
                         it back for me.  Well, a disc and
                         probably a computer or a laptop,
                         too.  There's a video that I need
                         to make sure doesn't get out.

               Dafino is still frowning.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         The house'll be empty.  Should
                         just be a quick in and out. Oh...
                         and if you could, you know, just
                         make it look like a robbery...

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         All right, Anton, I'll do this
                         thing for you, but this is it,
                         man. After this, I'm done.  I'm
                         gettin' old, in case you haven't
                         noticed. You can consider me
                         retired after this.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Hey look at us, a couple of old
                         retired farts.  That's great,
                         really!  You told Phyllis yet?

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         It was her idea, mostly.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Haha, sounds like a great idea
                         until she realizes she has to put
                         up with you all day long.  How's
                         she doing these days?  She still
                         having a tough time with her dad?

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         Oh you know, he's in and out of
                         the hospital.  Surprised he's not
                         racking up frequent flier miles in
                         that goddamn place.  Worst part
                         is, she drags ME there every
                         single weekend.  You know that
                         hospital smell?  That moth-bally
                         pungent smell?  Makes me sick
                         every time I go there.  I love the
                         man, he means the world to Phyl,
                         but goddamn it... that smell.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         That's a shame.  I'm sure he'll
                         pull through, though, he's made of
                         tougher stuff than you and I.

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         Well, it's the cancer now, too...
                         eating through him like a shark.
                         Doctors gave him nine months but
                         he's holding strong. F****n' don't
                         know how I'd handle that.  Hook me
                         up to one of those machines, you
                         might as well kill me right then
                         and there.  F**k that.  Promise me
                         that ever happens, you'll take my
                         gun and put me out of my misery.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         You're not the type to die like
                         that Bill, don't worry. Phyllis'll
                         kill ya before the cancer ever
                         will.

               Both men laugh.

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         Well... you seem happy, Anton. For
                         someone as sick as yourself,
                         that's really saying something.
                         Don't get delusional though.  One
                         woman can't change the world.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Ah, that's where you're wrong
                         old-timer.  I'm sure Phyl used to
                         put a spring in your step back in
                         the day.  You play the tough guy
                         now but I bet you were a real
                         charmer back in the eighteen
                         hundreds.

               Anton laughs.  Dafino takes out his gun and waves it around
               playfully at Anton.

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         Bang bang, you're dead.

               Both men continue laughing together inside the car.

                                                       FADE TO BLACK


               EXT. AVERY HOME - LATER

               Dafino pulls his car up to the curb a few houses down from
               John and Rachel's.

               Dafino is dressed all in black and wearing white surgical
               gloves.

               Dafino opens his phone and punches in Anton's number.

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                         Send the message, I'm here.


               INT. AVERY HOME - CONTINUOUS

               John is watching TV when his CELL PHONE VIBRATES.  He picks
               it up and sees a text message from Rachel:

               "I'm ready to talk.  Meet me at the coffee shop?  I'm so
               sorry.  I love you."

               John stares at the message on the phone and breathes a heavy
               sigh of relief.


               EXT. AVERY HOME - CONTINUOUS

               Dafino is staring at the Avery home, waiting for John to
               leave.

               Suddenly, the only light in the house goes off and John
               exits.  John gets into his car and backs out of the
               driveway, taking off in a hurry.

               Dafino slides out of his car and opens the trunk to retrieve
               a large satchel.  He closes the trunk and walks towards the
               home.

               He walks around the side of the house.  The side gate has
               been left open.  He makes his way to the back door, lightly
               kicking aside a snow shovel that's in his way and begins
               picking the lock.

               A beat.

               The LOCK CLICKS and the door swings open slightly.  A loud
               BEEPING noise is heard, signifying that the house alarm will
               sound shortly.

                                     WILLIAM DAFINO
                               (Calmly)
                         Oh, for Christ's sake...


               INT. AVERY HOME - CONTINUOUS

               Dafino walks at a steady pace to the front door.  He bends
               down and reaches into his bag, pulling out a multi-purpose
               screwdriver.

               He attempts to unscrew the panel from the wall with the bit
               that's currently in the screwdriver, but the bit head is too
               large.  He swaps it out with a slightly smaller one and
               tries again, successfully.

               The PANEL slips off and falls to the floor with a metallic
               CLANG.

               He puts the screwdriver back into his bag and pulls out a
               pair of wire cutters.  He thinks to himself for a brief
               moment before clipping the red wire.

               The beeping noise stops.

               Dafino looks around the room, triumphantly, with a slight
               smile on his face.


               INT. JOHN'S CAR - CONTINUOUS

               John is driving in a hurry to the coffee shop.  He suddenly
               sees his own bare hand on the steering wheel.  He isn't
               wearing his ring.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         S**t... s**t!

               John rubs his bare finger.  With his other hand, he searches
               the pockets of his jacket and pants, but comes up empty.  He
               does a sudden U-turn and heads back home for his ring.


               INT. AVERY HOME - CONTINUOUS

               FRONT DOOR

               Dafino picks up his bag and stares up the stairwell to the
               second floor.  He walks slowly up the stairs.

               SECOND FLOOR HALLWAY

               Dafino, now on the second floor, looks in each room, one by
               one.  The master bedroom, the two guest bedrooms and finally
               the office, the room he's looking for.

               He starts to enter the office before remembering something.
               He steps back into the hallway and heads into the master
               bedroom.

               MASTER BEDROOM

               He lazily grabs a handful of necklaces and bracelets from
               the dresser and throws them into his bag.

               OFFICE

               He goes back to the office, where he carefully unplugs the
               laptop and places it in the bag he's been carrying.

               He continues looking for the DVD but can't find it on the
               desk.  He sees a filing cabinet next to the desk and begins
               to rummage around in it.


               EXT. AVERY HOME - MOMENTS LATER

               John pulls into his driveway.  He gets out of the car and
               approaches the front door.

               He fumbles for his keys, dropping them once before finally
               finding the right one.  He opens the door and sees the cover
               for the alarm system resting on the floor in front of him.

               He looks panicked, but isn't moving.  His eyes are searching
               the first floor of his house.  Everything else appears
               normal.  He closes the door behind him very slowly and
               quietly.


               INT. AVERY HOME - CONTINUOUS

               John very slowly and very quietly heads for the kitchen at
               the back of the house.

               KITCHEN

               He reaches into a cabinet and pulls out a small six-shot
               revolver. It's not loaded.

               He frantically searches for the bullets.  He searches
               through three or four boxes of junk, trying to make as
               little noise as possible, before he comes across the right
               one.

               He clumsily loads the gun with six bullets.  He has a look
               of terror on his face as he stands in his kitchen with the
               loaded weapon.

               John slowly and carefully searches the main floor of his
               home.  He doesn't find anything out of place.

               FRONT DOOR

               As John approaches the stairs, he hears a loud THUMP. Dafino
               is emptying the filing cabinet, dumping it's contents on the
               carpeted floor upstairs.

               John holds his breath and slowly ascends the staircase.

               SECOND FLOOR HALLWAY

               As John reaches the top of the stairs, he knows that the
               sound is coming from the office.  He walks slowly down the
               hallway towards it but stops suddenly, frozen in fear, as
               the HOME PHONE RINGS loudly from the master bedroom.

               The RUSTLING stops in the office.

               John is holding his breath.

               Dafino moves quickly to the master bedroom to find the
               source of the noise. His back is to John as he moves.

               John stares, horrified, as Dafino moves to the bedroom,
               unable to speak.  He raises his gun, but doesn't fire.  He
               has a direct line of sight to Dafino at this point.

               MASTER BEDROOM

               Dafino finds the phone on the bedside table and takes a look
               at the call display.  Beside the phone is the DVD.  He lets
               out a chuckle and grabs it.  He turns around to leave, but
               instead finds John aiming the gun at him.

               Neither men say a word.  After a beat, the PHONE RINGS
               again.

               John fires his weapon in reflex.  BANG!  The bullet hits
               Dafino in the shoulder and he falls to the ground with a
               loud grunt, clutching his arm.

               Horrified, John rushes into the bedroom and stands over
               Dafino.

               Dafino, gasping for air, slowly reaches under his shirt for
               his own gun.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                               (whimpering)
                         No...

               Dafino grabs his silenced pistol but before he can bring it
               up to shoot, John fires another round into Dafino's chest,
               killing him.

               John drops to his knees and puts his hands on his head,
               letting out a howl.

               The phone stops ringing.

               John suddenly remembers Dafino's GUN and bats it out of the
               way. It smacks against the wall with a THUD.

               John shuffles over top of Dafino's body and hovers his hands
               over him, as if he's about to give him CPR.  He doesn't know
               where to place his hands, there's too much blood.  He
               realizes there's no point.

               John reaches into Dafino's jacket and pulls out his wallet.
               He reads the driver's license and shakes his head in
               confusion, not recognizing the name.

               John reaches into Dafino's pants pocket and finds his cell
               phone. He flips it open and looks at the most recently
               contacted number:
               
               "BRODY, ANTON
               212-555-1253"

               John looks shocked.  He pockets the phone.

               John grabs the DVD and puts it back in the office on top of
               his desk.

               He then goes back to Dafino's body and kneels beside it.  He
               lightly puts his hands on Dafino's shoulders and starts to
               drag him.  John notices the mess he's making, as Dafino's
               blood smears all over the carpet.  John stops immediately,
               stands up, and walks out of the room.


               INT. AVERY HOME - SECOND FLOOR HALLWAY - LATER

               John now has Dafino's body wrapped in drawstring garbage
               bags.  One end covers his head, the other covers his legs
               and feet. His torso is showing because the bags aren't long
               enough.

               John begins dragging Dafino down the stairs.  He doesn't
               realize how heavy Dafino is and almost loses his footing.

               John stops and calms himself before trying again.  This time
               he gets three or four stairs down before Dafino's body
               starts sliding on its own.

               John loses his grip and Dafino's head takes out John's legs,
               causing him to tumble down the stairs awkwardly.

               John SMACKS his HEAD on the hard ceramic floor. Dafino's
               BODY SLAMS against the WALL head-first, putting a large dent
               in the drywall.

               John's eyes flutter briefly for a moment before he passes
               out completely.  Blood is trickling down his face.

                                                       FADE TO BLACK


               INT. AVERY HOME - MORNING

                                                       FLARE TO WHITE

               FRONT DOOR

               John opens his eyes, squinting, to find that it's now light
               outside.  There is dried blood all over his head, face and
               shirt.

               John sits up and blinks several times to bring the room into
               focus.

               John looks around the room and sees the body wrapped in
               garbage bags.  There is a large pool of blood on the ceramic
               floor under the body.

               Everything suddenly comes rushing back to him.  He stands up
               in a hurry, nearly falling on his way up.

               John rubs his face, smearing blood all over his cheeks.

               John grabs hold of Dafino's feet and drags him slowly to the
               door leading to the garage.  He leaves a bloody smear all
               across the floor as he drags the body.

               He makes it to the door after some struggling and leans up
               against the wall, panting.  He catches his reflection in the
               mirror on the wall.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Oh my God...

               KITCHEN

               John stumbles to the kitchen, grabs a tea towel that's
               hanging from the oven and wipes his face off.  He throws the
               towel in the sink and takes his shirt off, turns it inside
               out, and puts it back on.

               John stares with a look of concern at the body lying slumped
               against the door to the garage.


               INT. AVERY HOME - GARAGE - MOMENTS LATER

               John reverses his car into the garage.

               A beat.

               The trunk pops open.


               INT. AVERY HOME - LATER

               CLOSE ON SUDSY WATER

               A persistent RUBBING noise.  Suddenly, the water becomes
               discolored with red liquid. The red liquid slowly diffuses
               into the water and the water turns a dark pink color.

               BACK TO SCENE

               John, wearing large yellow rubber gloves, is scrubbing the
               ceramic floor near the front door of the house and ringing
               the bloody rag into the bucket of soapy water.

               MASTER BEDROOM

               John is soaking up the blood in the rug and scrubbing at it
               wildly.

               CUT TO:

               John is firmly scrubbing the wall of the bedroom, attempting
               to remove any trace of the blood splatter.

               STAIRS

               John is scrubbing the stairs frantically.

               MASTER BEDROOM

               John is back at the carpet, scrubbing wildly. There are
               cleaning products all around him now.

               GARAGE

               John is cleaning the cement floor of the garage with a mop.

               BASEMENT

               John is taking his clothes off and putting them in the
               washing machine.

               MASTER BEDROOM

               John continues scrubbing wildly.  Even more cleaning
               products are littered around him now.  He pauses briefly,
               and then throws up into the bucket.  He continues scrubbing,
               more slowly than before.

               John picks up the bucket and heads out of the room.

               SHOWER

               John is showering, the blood and grime is quickly swirling
               down the drain.  He splashes water over his face and holds
               his hands there, covering his eyes for some time.


               EXT. AVERY HOME - LATER

               John is walking down the street in his heavy winter jacket
               with a key belonging to Dafino's car.

               John approaches a Ford Focus and attempts to open it.  The
               key doesn't fit.  He looks further down the street and sees
               a beat up old Ford Escort.

               John walks up to it and tries the key, looking around first
               to make sure no one's watching.  The key fits.  John gets in
               and drives the car around the block.  He gets out of the car
               and walks back to his house.


               INT. AVERY HOME - EVENING

               DINING ROOM

               It's now dusk and the dining room is cast with an orange
               glow.

               John is sitting at the dining room table.  He is staring
               intently at the table.

               JOHN'S POV

               The contents of Dafino's pockets are all laid out neatly in
               the middle of the table.  The pile includes his cell phone,
               his keys, an after-dinner mint and a couple of scrunched-up
               receipts.

               John takes out his cell phone and tries calling Rachel.  He
               gets no answer.

               Suddenly, there's the sound of a RINGING CELL PHONE.

               John tries to answer his cell phone but the sound continues.

               CLOSE ON DAFINO'S PHONE

               The display reads "Blocked Number".

               BACK TO SCENE

               John stares at the phone, unsure of what to do with it.

               A long beat.

               John quickly grabs the phone and answers it.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Yes?

                                     ANTON BRODY (V.O.)
                         Where have you been, Bill?  I
                         thought you said you'd call when
                         you had it taken care of.  Is it
                         done?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         It's done.

               An awkward beat.  Neither men say a word.

                                     ANTON BRODY (V.O.)
                         You all right, Bill?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Mmmhmm.

               Another awkward beat.

                                     ANTON BRODY (V.O.)
                         So, I'll see you soon then.
                         Wellington's.

               The call disconnects.

               John stares forward with a concerned look on his face.


               EXT. ESTABLISHING SHOT - WELLINGTON'S PUB - LATER

               It's a crisp, cold night.  No snow is falling and it's
               eerily quiet.  The Wellington's pub fluorescent SIGN is
               BUZZING incessantly.


               INT. JOHN'S CAR - CONTINUOUS

               John is sitting in his car, wearing his heavy winter jacket,
               gloves and winter hat.  He's situated in the darkest corner
               of the parking lot, watching people entering and exiting the
               front door of the pub.

               The time on the radio says 5:52.  John turns the radio on
               and Bohemian Rhapsody is playing, loudly.

                                     RADIO
                         Oh mama mia, mama mia, mama mia
                         let me go
                         Beelzebub has a devil put aside
                         for me

               John jumps, startled by the noise of the song.  He turns the
               volume down and flips the channel several times, stopping on
               a talk radio station.

                                     RADIO
                               (old man talking)
                         Now, see, the prospects of the DOW
                         are, in my opinion, directly
                         related to the state of the
                         economy.  What's happening here,
                         and, by all means, correct me if
                         you think I'm wrong, but what's
                         happening here is that the economy
                         has been improving steadily
                         enough, for long enough that...

               John looks around impatiently as the old man on the radio
               mumbles about the DOW Jones.  He turns the radio off.


               EXT. JOHN'S CAR - CONTINUOUS

               The moon, barely visible, become more and more discernible
               as it races past the ever-brightening stars in the night
               sky.


               INT. JOHN'S CAR - LATER

               Back in the car, John is still sitting and waiting.  His
               eyes are barely open and his mouth is ajar.  His breath is
               creating puffs of vapour in the cold winter air.  The clock
               in front of him now reads 12:54.

               John stirs in his drowsy state and rubs his face with his
               gloved hands.  He puts his keys in the ignition.

               Just at that moment, headlights fill his car and the first
               car in an hour enters the lot. It parks on the opposite end
               of the lot in a similarly darkened area.

               John is staring at the car with great interest.  For the
               first time in hours, he's alert.

               Anton steps out of the car and looks around.  He takes out
               his cellphone and looks at it for several seconds before
               walking towards the front door of the bar.  He opens the
               door and steps inside.

               John's breathing quickens and his hands start to move
               quickly.  He takes the gun out from his jacket pocket and
               checks that the bullets are still loaded, as if they somehow
               might have jumped out when he wasn't looking.

               He nods to himself and puts the gun back in his jacket
               pocket and removes the key from the ignition.


               EXT. WELLINGTON'S PUB - CONTINUOUS

               John opens the car door and quietly closes it behind him. He
               begins walking slowly towards the building, trying to walk
               casually but instead walking with an awkward limp that would
               look strange to anyone watching.

               John approaches the front door of the bar and pulls it open.


               INT. WELLINGTON'S PUB - CONTINUOUS

               With his hands in his pockets, John walks slowly over to the
               booth where he met Anton previously.  Anton appears to be
               sitting there with his back to John.

               John, with a look of fear on his face, standing over the
               man, fumbles around for the gun in his pocket.  Suddenly,
               the man turns around. It's not Anton, but a man much
               younger.

                                     MAN
                               (in a southern
                               drawl)
                         You got a problem, friend?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         No, I just... sorry.

               An awkward beat.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                               (O.S.)
                         Look who it is.

               Anton is standing behind John.  John doesn't turn around.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Imagine finding YOU here.  For
                         someone that doesn't drink, you're
                         here more often than I am.  I'm
                         about to sit down for a drink with
                         an old friend, but seeing as how
                         he hasn't shown yet, how about you
                         and I catch up?

               John turns his head to the side, seeing Anton with his
               peripheral vision, and lets out a stunted laugh.

               Anton walks past John and orders two beers at the bar.

               John stands still, staring at Anton.

               Anton stares back at John, never taking his eyes off him,
               while the waitress pours the drinks.

               The waitress taps Anton on the shoulder and he pays her.

               Anton walks over to a booth near John and sits down.  He
               sets one beer down in front of himself and one on the other
               side of the table.

               John slides slowly into the booth, his hands still in his
               pockets.

               Anton picks up his beer and raises it in the air.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         To new beginnings.

               John slowly raises his drink and Anton clinks his glass
               against John's.  Both men take a drink.  As soon as John
               sets his glass down, his hand goes back into his pocket.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I really do care about her, John.
                         I want you to know that.  This
                         isn't just some fling, it's real.
                         And it was tough for me to come to
                         you like that, on my hands and
                         knees. I really wish we could have
                         made a deal.  We still can, if you
                         want.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Really.

               Anton takes a drink.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         That shiner's lookin' better.  You
                         put a steak on it yet?  I hear
                         that helps.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         You're not getting it back.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I hope you change your mind.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         I won't.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         That's too bad.  I don't know what
                         I'll tell Rachel when she finds
                         out.  It's gonna be tough.

               John shifts in his seat.

               Beneath the table, John is slowly pulling out his gun.

               Anton's eyes go down towards John's pocketed hand.  His eyes
               wince and he takes another drink.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         This is your move, is it?

               John stares down Anton, his face going red.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         I figured you'd at least wait
                         until I was out in the parking
                         lot.  Might be fewer witnesses
                         that way.  I'm sure you already
                         thought of that, though.

               John continues the stare-down.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Well, just go ahead and do it then
                         if you're gonna do it.  I don't
                         know what you're waiting for.  Aim
                         for the stomach, one good shot and
                         that's all it'll take... although
                         I doubt you've ever fired that
                         thing before.  Bet the safety's
                         still on, too.  Come on, I want
                         you to do it.  I want you to take
                         charge of the situation, show me
                         who's boss.  One good shot and
                         it'll all be over, I'll be gone
                         for good. BAM!

               Anton SLAMS his HANDS down on the table as he says it,
               causing John to jump in his seat.

               Several bar patrons look over to see what the commotion is
               all about.

               Anton grins and takes another drink.

               John lowers the gun and quickly puts it back inside his
               jacket pocket.  He gets up from the table, clutching the gun
               awkwardly inside his pocket.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         You know, it's weird.  My friend
                         is really late, I wonder where he
                         could be?  This isn't like him at
                         all, I should give him a call.

               Anton gives John a knowing glance while he takes another
               swig of his beer.

               John walks away in a hurry, still awkwardly clutching the
               gun.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Always a pleasure, John.

               Anton relaxes his right arm and we see that he was holding a
               gun on John the whole time.  Anton places the gun on the
               seat cushion next to him.  He runs a hand through his hair
               and shakes his head.


               EXT. WELLINGTON'S PUB - CONTINUOUS

               John is speed-walking to his car, clutching the gun in his
               pocket.  He nearly slips on the icy pavement as he walks,
               but manages to maintain his balance.


               INT. JOHN'S CAR - MOMENTS LATER

               John gets into the car and lets out a primitive scream.  He
               takes the gun from his pocket and beats it against the
               steering wheel several times in anger and frustration.  He
               screams again.

               The air bag suddenly inflates and fills the front seat. John
               struggles with it for a good ten seconds before finally
               managing to deflate it.

               John starts the car, feeling utterly defeated and pulls out
               of the parking lot.


               INT. JOHN'S CAR - MOMENTS LATER

               John approaches a red light at an intersection.  He isn't
               paying attention and nearly hits an old lady crossing the
               street.  He slams on the brakes at the last second, bringing
               the CAR to a SQUEALING stop

               The old lady looks extremely annoyed and gives him an evil
               stare, muttering to herself and shaking her head
               dramatically.

               John puts his hands on his head, and rubs his face.

               The light turns green.  After several moments, the CAR
               behind John's begins to HONK.

               The driver gets impatient and drives around John, giving him
               the finger as he goes.

               John regains his composure and continues driving, more
               carefully now than before.


               EXT. AVERY HOME - LATER

               John is driving down a street in his neighbourhood, the same
               street where he parked Dafino's car.  He drives by and
               notices a portion of the street untouched by snow.  It's
               where Dafino's car was parked.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         What the hell...

               John pulls over suddenly and gets out of his car.  He stares
               at the empty parking spot.


               EXT. AVERY HOME - MOMENTS LATER

               John runs down the street, searching for Dafino's car.  It's
               nowhere to be found.  John puts his hands on his head and
               has a look of panic on his face as he scans the street
               frantically.


               EXT. AVERY HOME - MOMENTS LATER

               John is now pulling into his driveway.  He slides out of his
               car and approaches the front door in a hurry.  He's about to
               insert his key when he pauses to think twice about it.

               John takes the gun out of his jacket pocket and walks around
               to the back of the house through the side yard.  He peers in
               the windows as he goes.  The house is pitch-black inside.

               John approaches the back door and very quietly opens it. The
               house is deadly quiet.  He closes the door quietly behind
               him.


               INT. AVERY HOME - CONTINUOUS

               KITCHEN

               John walks into the kitchen and notices that the bloody rag
               is still in the sink from when he wiped his face with it.

               John lets out a deep sigh.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Jesus.

               John takes the rag and throws it in the trash bin under the
               sink.

               DINING ROOM

               John walks by the dining room table and notices that the
               contents of Dafino's pockets are no longer there.

               John's eyes go wide as he realizes that someone has been in
               his house.  He raises the gun and points it forward as he
               scours the rest of the main floor of the house.

               FRONT DOOR

               John stares up to the second floor, looking trepidatious
               about his next move.

               A beat.

               John walks slowly up the stairs, expecting there to be
               another intruder.

               SECOND FLOOR HALLWAY

               John peers into each bedroom as he walks down the hallway.

               John peers into the office.

               CLOSE ON DESK

               The DVD and laptop are both missing.  Sitting in their place
               is a photograph.

               BACK TO SCENE

               John walks over to the desk with his gun at his side.

               CLOSE ON PHOTO

               The photograph shows what appears to be divorce documents
               signed by Rachel with an empty spot for John to sign.  On
               the papers is a section labelled "Fault Divorce" citing
               infidelity as the reason.

               BACK TO SCENE

               John stares at it with an emotionless glare.

               He picks up the photograph and looks it over carefully. He
               flips it around.  Written on the back in black Sharpie is
               written "to new beginnings".

               A beat.

               John begins to chuckle.  He slinks down to the floor and
               continues laughing, the sound getting louder and more
               exaggerated.  He tilts his head back and stares up at the
               ceiling, making a strange, giddy noise, like a child at
               Christmas.  He's clearly lost his mind.

               There is a ceiling fan rotating quickly above, John stares
               at it as his laughter slows until all that's left is the
               sound of the FAN WHIRRING overhead.

                                                       FADE TO BLACK


               INT. AVERY ADVERTISING - JOHN'S OFFICE - DAY

               John is staring up at the fluorescent lights above with
               baggy eyes.  He seems mesmerized by it.

               The PHONE RINGS.  John lazily looks down at it.  After three
               rings, he picks it up.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                               (monotone)
                         Avery Advertising.  John Avery
                         speaking.

               The voice on the other end of the line isn't audible.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Right.  Yes, that's right.  Well,
                         we're working hard to get that
                         done by the end of the week.  Yes.
                         Yes. All right, good.  Thank you.

               John holds down the telephone hook for several seconds.  He
               takes a moment to put on a fake smile and then dials a three
               digit extension.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Hey.  How are you doin'?  That's
                         good.  Oh really, again?  Geez.
                         That's just... that's....

               An awkward beat.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         I was wondering... are you busy
                         tonight?  No?  Do you feel like
                         grabbing some dinner with me?

               An excited tone can be heard on the other end of the line.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Great, I'll pick you up around
                         six? OK, sounds great, see you
                         then!

               John's smile immediately disappears as he hangs up the
               phone.  He leans back in his chair and closes his eyes.


               INT. MOTEL ROOM - EVENING

               A door opens into a dark room, letting in the swirling snow
               from outside and the harsh light of a parking lot light
               fixture.  Two figures are standing in the doorway.

               The intense wind outside is causing the TRASH CAN outside
               the motel room to RATTLE violently in it's metal cage.

               John and Elizabeth enter the room.  Elizabeth is laughing
               and holding John's arm.

               John flips on the light to reveal the cheaply decorated
               interior of the motel room.  John takes off his heavy winter
               jacket and Elizabeth hands him hers.  He places both on the
               chair next to the bed.

               John turns to face Elizabeth.  She has a huge grin on her
               face.  She runs over to him and starts kissing him, eagerly.
                She leans into him and they both fall backwards onto the
               bed.

               Elizabeth starts unbuttoning John's shirt while they kiss.
               She unbuttons her own shirt as well, to reveal a red lacy
               bra underneath.

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         I've missed you so much.

               They continue kissing passionately.  John squeezes her
               breasts and she moans.

                                                       FADE TO BLACK


               INT. MOTEL ROOM - LATER

               John and Elizabeth are lying next to each other in the
               darkened room.  Elizabeth has her eyes closed and John's are
               wide open, staring at the ceiling.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Liz?

               John nudges her slightly.  She doesn't respond.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Hey, you awake?

               John nudges her harder.  She opens her eyes slowly and
               smiles.

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         Hey, you.  Oh my God, are you
                         ready to go again already?

               She reaches down under the covers to grab him.  He shifts
               his weight away from her.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Actually, I'm still recovering
                         from round one.  Can I talk to you
                         about something for a minute?

               Elizabeth sits up with a smile on her face.

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         What's up?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         I haven't told anyone this yet
                         but... my wife and I... we're
                         getting a divorce.  Or... maybe a
                         separation, I'm not sure what it
                         is yet.

               An awkward beat.

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         I'm sorry.  I'm not really sure
                         what to say.  I mean... I didn't
                         mean for that to happen, you know
                         that right?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         I'm not blaming you.  I made the
                         decisions that I made and it's not
                         like I would change things. It's
                         complicated now though, because it
                         seems like she might try to use
                         you.

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         What do you mean?  Use me how?

               John shifts uncomfortably in the bed.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         I think she's going to get you to
                         testify against me.

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         Testify?  What does that mean,
                         exactly, testify?  About what,
                         about us?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Well, yeah, about us. See, she'll
                         have a real strong case if she can
                         prove that you and I were
                         together.  The laws, they're real
                         strict when it comes to this sort
                         of thing, so you have to promise
                         that you won't --

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         That I won't what?  What are you
                         asking?  You want me to lie? To
                         like, a judge or something?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Hey, now, listen... I don't even
                         know if it'll come down to
                         anything like that.  If it does
                         though... there's only one way we
                         can get out of this, we gotta be
                         real certain we're on the same
                         page here.

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         You want me to just pretend this
                         didn't happen? I... I can't do
                         that, John.  How am I supposed to
                         do that?  I'm not comfortable with
                         any of this.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         I can't afford this right now,
                         Liz.  There's just too much going
                         on in my life.  You really gotta
                         help me here.

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         Wait, wait, wait... is this why
                         you brought me here tonight?  To
                         convince me to lie so you don't
                         f**k up your life even more than
                         it already is!?  You know what,
                         you're a f*****g a*****e John.  I
                         should have seen it before.

               Elizabeth gets up from the bed.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         No! I --

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         And here I thought you really
                         wanted to see me again.  I thought
                         there might be something real
                         here.  I'm such an idiot, I should
                         have known you'd do something like
                         this.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Liz, no.  That's not why!  Listen,
                         I do have feelings for you, I just
                         --

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         You brought me here so you could
                         F**K me one more time and then
                         convince me to help you win your
                         f*****g court case. This isn't my
                         fault, OK?  None of this is MY
                         fault.

               Elizabeth finds her clothes on the floor and starts getting
               dressed.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Liz come on.  What are you doin'
                         there?

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         I'm getting the f**k out of here,
                         that's what I'm doing.

               Elizabeth is almost fully dressed when John gets out of bed
               and starts putting his clothes back on too.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Hey, c'mon, can't we just stay a
                         bit and talk about this?

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         There's nothing to talk about!

               John grabs his jacket and throws it on quickly.  The gun
               slides out of his pocket and thumps against the dresser near
               Elizabeth.

               She stares it in confusion.

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         What is that?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         It's nothing.

               John quickly crosses the room and picks up the weapon,
               putting it back in his pocket.

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         You brought a gun?  Is that for if
                         I decide not to cooperate?  That's
                         your backup plan?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         No... Jesus Christ, no! I only
                         have this because --

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         Stay the f**k away from me!

               Elizabeth opens the door and storms out.  Her shirt is
               half-buttoned up and she's struggling to put her jacket on
               as she runs.

               John starts to run after her.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Liz!  Wait!


               EXT. MOTEL ROOM - CONTINUOUS

               Elizabeth is almost to her car when she slips on the icy
               pavement and falls, face first into the ICE, with a loud
               THUMP.

               John stops running and goes wide-eyed.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Oh God!

               John sprints over to her as fast he can on the icy pavement.
                Her nose and jaw are broken and there's blood spurting out
               and starting to pool all over the ice in front of her.

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         Don't.... don't.... stop....

               She's coughing up blood as she tries to form words.

               John is hysterical.  He has his hands over his mouth and his
               eyes are wide.  He looks at Elizabeth and then back at the
               motel.  No one is around, it's a pitch-black evening and the
               snow is falling quickly now.

               John takes out his phone and dials 9-1-1.

                                     911 OPERATOR
                         9-1-1, what's your emergency?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         I'm... I need...

               John closes his eyes and tries to think.

                                     911 OPERATOR
                         I'm sorry sir, you'll have to
                         speak up.  Are you in trouble?

               John opens his eyes with a look of realization on his face.
               He disconnects the call and puts the phone back in his
               pocket.

               Elizabeth's eyes are barely open as she looks up at John for
               help.

               John takes his gun out slowly from his jacket pocket and
               looks down at it.  His hand shakes as he holds it but he's
               not pointing it at her.

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         Call... help... call...

               Elizabeth is crawling towards his leg and grabbing at it
               with her weak hands.  Blood continues pooling all around
               her.

               John slowly points the gun at her and squints his eyes.

               She doesn't react, she just stares back at him, moaning.

               John pulls the gun back to his side quickly, his hand still
               shaking violently.  He crouches down to steady himself,
               afraid that he might pass out.

               Elizabeth continues clawing weakly at his leg, grabbing at
               his arm now.

                                     ELIZABETH REISENFELD
                         Phone...

               She's trying to reach into his pocket for the phone.

               John stands up again, causing Elizabeth to lose her grip and
               fall to the ground.  She crawls forward again and tries to
               grip his legs with her weak hands.

               John puts his hand over his mouth to keep from screaming,
               aims the gun at her again and pulls the trigger.

               With a muted BANG, the sound lost to the wind, her body goes
               limp, lifeless.

               John stares at Elizabeth's body for several seconds, his
               hand still over his mouth.  He slowly removes it after he
               finds that he's not making any noise.

               There is a look of numb horror on John's face.  He's in
               complete shock.

               John stares at Elizabeth's body as the falling snow quickly
               begins to cover the evidence of what just occurred.

               John calmly turns around and starts to walk to his own car.
               He suddenly appears very calm and at ease.  It's obvious by
               his body language and demeanour that he's not in the right
               state of mind.

               John gets into his car and drives off into the dark,
               snow-filled night.


               INT. AVERY HOME - MASTER BEDROOM - LATER

               John is lying in his bed, staring at the ceiling with a dead
               look in his eyes.  He doesn't blink.


               EXT. AVERY HOME - LATER

               The moon outside goes down beyond the horizon and the sun
               begins to rise.


               INT. AVERY HOME - MASTER BEDROOM - MORNING

               John is still staring at the ceiling with the same look on
               his face.  His ALARM BEEPS and he just lies there, ignoring
               the annoying sound, staring at the ceiling, unmoving,
               unflinching.


               EXT. MOTEL ROOM - MOMENTS LATER

               A large METAL OBJECT is RATTLING around and snow is tumbling
               forward in front of it.

               A snow plow is the cause of all the commotion, working hard
               to get rid of the previous evening's snowfall.


               INT. SNOW PLOW - CONTINUOUS

               A SNOW PLOW DRIVER in his 50s with a grey beard is smoking a
               cigarette, listening to "Your Cheatin' Heart" by Hank
               Williams.  He's singing quietly to the music as he bounces
               in his seat.

                                     SNOW PLOW DRIVER
                               (singing quietly)
                         When tears come down like falling
                         rain
                         You'll toss around and call my
                         name
                         You'll walk the floor the way
                         I do your cheatin' heart will tell
                         on you


               EXT. SNOW PLOW - CONTINUOUS

               CLOSE ON METAL PLOW.  Snow continues piling up and flying
               madly to each side.


               INT. SNOW PLOW - CONTINUOUS

               The man removes the cigarette from his mouth to cough
               violently.  He rolls down the window and spits out of it. He
               then replaces the cigarette and continues puffing. Suddenly
               there is a jolt and he drops his cigarette between his legs.

                                     SNOW PLOW DRIVER
                         Whoa!

               He grabs the cigarette and puts it back in his mouth.  The
               SNOW PLOW starts to make a GRINDING noise as it moves along.
                The driver comes to a stop, puts his cigarette out in the
               ashtray of his cab and steps out.


               EXT. SNOW PLOW - CONTINUOUS

               The driver walks forward, before realizing how cold it is.
               He goes back to the cab and grabs his large winter hat and
               gloves.  He closes the cab door and takes out his
               cigarettes, lighting up a fresh one.  He puts on the hat and
               gloves and starts humming the song again.

               He walks around to the front of the cab to see what the
               problem could be.

               Everything appears normal at first glance.  The driver digs
               at the large pile of snow with one hand in front of the
               plow.  Still, everything seems fine.  He digs further, now
               with both hands, until he finally finds deep in the pile
               what appears to be hair.

                                     SNOW PLOW DRIVER
                         The heck...

               Brushing away the snow, he realizes with horror that it's
               the head of a young woman.

               CLOSE ON HEAD

               A face frozen in eternal horror.  The driver runs to the
               hotel in the background, out of focus.  The music from the
               snow plow's radio can still be heard.  "Your cheatin' heart
               will tell on you".


               INT. AVERY ADVERTISING - MORNING

               LOBBY

               John is walking into work through the lobby of Avery
               Advertising.  He has a day's worth of stubble on his face
               and his shirt is wrinkled.  His eye is still quite purple
               from the earlier incident.  He seems calm, given the current
               situation.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         Hey, how are you doin' buddy?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Hey, Steve.

               John glances uneasily at the receptionist's desk as he walks
               by.

               John heads straight to his office and closes the door behind
               him.

               JOHN'S OFFICE

               John opens his laptop lid and goes to a local news website.
               He scrolls through the list of top stories.  He reaches the
               bottom of the page and breathes a sigh of relief.  Just
               then, Steve walks in.  John pushes his laptop screen down.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         Oh, hey, sorry... didn't mean to
                         interrupt, I just wanted to ask
                         about the Anderson project. Amanda
                         called earlier this morning, she
                         was wondering if it could be done
                         by the end of the week.

               John doesn't appear to be paying attention.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         Um, also, I don't know if you've
                         heard, but Chantel at Upper Philly
                         was fired last week, so we're
                         going to be dealing with Allison
                         from now on.  I can forward you
                         her contact info.

               John nods, uninterested.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         John.  You OK, buddy?  You look
                         like hell.  Wild night last night?

               John makes eye contact with Steve.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Yeah, uh, I'll... I'll take care
                         of it.  Listen, I need to make a
                         few phone calls, so...

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         Oh, geez, yeah, I'm sorry, I
                         barged in didn't I?  I'll talk to
                         you later, all right?

               John forces a fake smile and nods as Steve turns to leave.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         Oh, sorry, one last thing before I
                         let ya go.  Elizabeth never came
                         in this morning.  Want me to give
                         her a call, see if she's feeling
                         OK?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         No!  No, that's... that's OK,
                         Steve.  Actually, we talked last
                         week and she's just taking some
                         time off.  That's all.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         Time off?  Jesus, she just got
                         back from Cuba a few weeks ago.
                         How much vacation time does a
                         secretary get around here?
                         (a beat)
                         Well, who's covering for her?  I
                         need some s**t faxed out ASAP and
                         I don't know how to work the
                         goddamn thing.

               John doesn't respond, he's staring into space.

               Steve gives up and leaves the room looking upset.

               John opens his laptop again and continues scrolling through
               the list of stories.  He suddenly stops scrolling when he
               comes across a story titled "Body found in Moraine State
               Park".

               John's eyes go wide.  He clicks the link and begins to read
               the story:

               "A body was found on the shores of Lake Arthur, yesterday,
               just outside the city of New Castle.  The cause of death has
               not yet been confirmed, but it is considered suspicious, New
               Castle Police said.
               
               A concerned parent, whose seven-year-old child spotted the
               body, called police.
               
               "Police were contacted and confirmed it was a body," said
               Staff-Sgt. Richard Levy. "It is being treated as suspicious.
                Anyone with any information is urged to contact police."

               BACK TO SCENE

               There's a KNOCK at the DOOR.  John jumps in his chair and
               looks up.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         Sorry bud, there's someone here
                         for you.

               Steve walks away before John has a chance to ask who it is.

               LOBBY

               A man in a brown puffy winter jacket and large fur hat with
               flaps is hovering over Elizabeth's desk, flipping through an
               Avery Advertising brochure.  The man is DETECTIVE HARRIS of
               the New Castle police department.  He's a middle-aged man
               with stark features and a pale complexion.

               A static noise comes out of Detective Harris' walkie talkie
               and he responds back to it.

                                     DETECTIVE HARRIS
                         Yeah, I'll only be a few minutes
                         up here, Laurie, sit tight.

               John approaches the man cautiously.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Can I help you, sir?

               The detective spins around with a smile.

                                     DETECTIVE HARRIS
                         Mr. Avery?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Yes.

                                     DETECTIVE HARRIS
                         Nice to meet you, Mr. Avery, I'm
                         Detective Harris with the New
                         Castle police department. I'm
                         sorry to barge in like this, I'm
                         sure you're a busy guy.  Your name
                         IS on the wall after all!

               The detective motions to the "Avery Advertising" logo on the
               wall.

               John laughs nervously.

                                     DETECTIVE HARRIS
                         Would you mind if we talked
                         somewhere in private for a few
                         moments?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Oh, I'm actually awfully busy this
                         morning.  I have a few calls to
                         make and I really need to --

                                     DETECTIVE HARRIS
                         I know the feeling.  I'm awfully
                         busy too, Mr Avery, but this will
                         only take a few minutes.  I
                         promise.  Then you can kick me on
                         outta here!

               The police officer gives John a pleasant smile.

               John glances nervously at Elizabeth's desk and then back at
               his own office.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         What's this all about?

                                     DETECTIVE HARRIS
                         Well, thing is, I'd actually
                         rather not say at the moment. Mind
                         if we step into your office? Like
                         I said, I just need a minute or
                         two of your time and I'll be outta
                         your hair.

               John nods hesitantly.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Yeah, OK... right this way.

                                     DETECTIVE HARRIS
                               (pointing to the
                               Avery Advertising
                               brochure)
                         Mind if I take one?

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         Sure...

               Detective Harris looks John up and down and inspects the
               various offices as he walks behind him to John's office.

               JOHN'S OFFICE

               John closes the door behind them.

                                     DETECTIVE HARRIS
                         Mr. Avery, when was the last time
                         you were in contact with Miss.
                         Reisenfeld?

               John stares at the officer, offering up a terribly fake
               smile.  He's cornered, and he knows it, it shows on his
               face.

               STEVE'S OFFICE

               Steve is watching intently as John and the officer are
               discussing something.

                                     STEVE PETERS
                         The hell's goin' on here?

               The officer starts writing something down on a notepad,
               before continuing to talk to John.  John starts rubbing his
               face with his hand as the officer continues talking.

               John puts a finger up as if to say "one second".  Detective
               Harris brings his walkie talkie to his mouth.

               John reaches into his jacket pocket, pulls out his gun and
               before the officer can reach for his own weapon, shoots him
               in the side of the face with a loud BANG, splattering blood
               all over the glass windows of the office.

               A look of horror comes over Steve's face and he gets up
               quickly from his desk and rushes into the hallway.

               John also runs out into the hallway towards the front door.
               One of the graphic designers, Kyle, is standing in the way.
               John shoots him in the shoulder with another loud BANG and
               barges through the door.

               Detective Harris is lying on the floor in John's office,
               blood spurting from where the bullet pierced the side of his
               face.

               Everyone runs into the hallway after hearing the gunshots.
               People are screaming and cursing.

               Utter chaos.

               STAIRWELL

               John is running down the stairs, taking them two or three at
               a time.  He trips and falls at the bottom of one of the
               flights of stairs but only falls down a few to the next
               landing.

               He manages to get back up with only a few scrapes to his leg
               and continues running full tilt down the stairwell.  He has
               a look of madness on his face.  What little bit of sanity he
               entered the office with is now long gone.


               EXT. AVERY ADVERTISING - CONTINUOUS

               John bursts through the side door of the large office
               building and runs around to the back of the building,
               searching for his car.

               His running is slow because of all of the snow from the
               previous night.  He trips and falls again, this time taking
               a few seconds to regain his composure and get back on his
               feet.

                                     COP
                         Stop!  Stop where you are!  Drop
                         your weapon and put your hands on
                         your head!

               John looks behind him and sees the female officer aiming her
               gun at him.  Beside the officer is the police cruiser that
               Detective Harris and herself arrived in.

               John aims haphazardly at her and FIRES, but the bullet
               doesn't hit her.  The officer FIRES back, the first shot
               missing it's intended target and the second hitting him in
               the leg.

                                     JOHN AVERY
                         No! Nooooo! Arghhhhhhh!

               John is screaming like a child, holding his leg in pain,
               while at the same time trying to inch his way forward toward
               his car.

               The officer runs over and kicks his gun away.  She then
               handcuffs John while trying to reach her partner on the
               walkie talkie.

                                     COP
                         Detective Harris, please respond,
                         I've got a man down in the parking
                         lot. Detective Harris, please
                         respond.  Repeat, I've got a man
                         down, possibly Mr. Avery.

               People come running out of the building looking horrified.
               The female officer signals that they shouldn't come any
               closer.

                                                       FADE TO WHITE

               The following text fades in over white:
               
               One Year Later


               INT. AVERY HOME - DAY

               The front door of the house opens and an ALARM SYSTEM starts
               BEEPING.

               The REAL ESTATE AGENT, a slim woman with dark hair and a
               fake tan, reaches into her pocket and pulls out a piece of
               paper with the alarm code on it.  She punches it into the
               system and it stops beeping.

                                     REAL ESTATE AGENT
                         OK!  Come on in, folks!

               A middle-aged ASIAN MAN and his younger wife step into the
               home.

                                     REAL ESTATE AGENT
                         As you can see, the house has a
                         very open feel to it the moment
                         you walk in.  It's VERY inviting!

               The Asian couple don't seem to be overly impressed.

                                     REAL ESTATE AGENT
                         I should also mention, the alarm
                         system does come with the house.
                         Well, shall we take a look around?

                                     ASIAN MAN
                         There's a hole.

                                     REAL ESTATE AGENT
                         Beg pardon?

               The Asian man points to the area of the wall where John and
               Dafino had previously fallen down the stairs.

                                     ASIAN MAN
                         Hole in wall.

               Oh... oh my!  You're right, I did not notice that.  You know
               what, it's probably just from when the movers were here.  A
               little bit of patch work and it'll be good as new!  Let's go
               check out the rest of the home.  You're going to love the
               kitchen!

               The Asian man and woman exchange a glance.

               SECOND FLOOR HALLWAY

                                     REAL ESTATE AGENT
                         Now, there are three bedrooms up
                         here.  I believe one of them was
                         being used as an office.  Do
                         either of you ever work from home?

               The Asian couple shake their heads in unison, still looking
               unimpressed.

                                     REAL ESTATE AGENT
                         Well then, maybe you could turn it
                         into an exercise room!  If you'll
                         come right this way, we'll take a
                         peek at the master bedroom.

               MASTER BEDROOM

               The three of them walk into the master bedroom.  As they
               walk in, they all notice the dried up blood still on the
               carpet.

                                     REAL ESTATE AGENT
                         Oh my... must just be a bit of
                         paint.  That should come right
                         out, I'd imagine.

               The Asian couple look VERY unimpressed.


               INT. BEACH HOUSE - EVENING

               It's early evening and Anton and Rachel are lying on Anton's
               couch together.  Rachel is clearly pregnant.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         The house finally sold today.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         You're kidding, that's fantastic.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         I feel like the last of it's
                         behind me now.

               Anton hugs Rachel tightly and rubs her belly.  The baby
               kicks.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Did you feel that?

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         Of course.  She's a feisty one.
                         Just like her daddy.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         Her?

               Rachel smiles.

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                         According to the ultrasound...

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         You said they couldn't tell!

                                     RACHEL AVERY
                               (smiling widely)
                         Surprise!

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         We're gonna have a baby girl...

               Anton smiles.  He leans over and kisses Rachel.  He then
               leans down and kisses her belly.

                                     ANTON BRODY
                         C'mere.

               Anton helps Rachel get up from the couch and they walk
               outside using the double French doors at the end of the
               room.

               It's dusk on the beach and the sun is just disappearing
               behind the Pacific Ocean.  Anton and Rachel lie down on
               matching recliners and stare out at the waves.

                                                       FADE OUT.




                                          THE END

© 2014 ScottTheScreenwriter


Author's Note

ScottTheScreenwriter
I'd love to hear any and all feedback! Please note: the image I've associated with this screenplay does not belong to me and was obtained from the following location:

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs13/f/2007/032/8/6/Bloody_Ring_by_ljbitzki.jpg

I've been asked who I picture in the roles of the various characters. Below are the actors I had in my mind while I was writing - who did you picture while you were reading?

John Avery - Paul Giamatti - http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0316079/
Rachel Avery - Claire Danes - http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000132/
Anton Brody - George Clooney (or maybe Pierce Brosnan) - http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000123/
Dafino - Jonathon Banks - http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0052186/?ref_=tt_cl_t8
Bernstein - Michael Lerner - http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0503627/?ref_=tt_cl_t8
Amanda Grant - Tilda Swinton - http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0842770/?ref_=tt_cl_t5

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I am new to the site and this is the first review I am attempting, so I hope you find my thoughts useful in moving forward.
I really enjoyed your screenplay overall. I think you have a very good idea here and have some engaging characters. That being said, I would like to offer some constructive thoughts for you in the spirit of seeing this move towards your goal of production.
The initial opening is good, with the set up about at-fault divorces. I like the way you are setting-up motivation for John to make the decisions he does, however, I do think that the stakes need to be shown a bit starker. By this, I mean he takes some very extreme measures that escalate him into what is essentially a life or death struggle but I have a hard time believing that he would go to such extremes without more information on his financial predicament. Yes, he is in debt to a bookie, but how in debt? Is he essentially just paying off the points (interest) on what he owes? Why is his money all tied up? How would spousal support affect his ability to pay and what would be the consequences to him. Although there are some very subtle hints at this, I feel you are asking the audience to take a big jump to believe he would go to such measures without the screws being at least a bit tighter on him. Show me why paying spousal support would be on par with a life or death struggle for him.
The other thing I would recommend you consider is to bring Rachel in a bit sooner. Much of the first 20-30 minutes is really all about John without any glimpse at Rachel, even though she becomes a major character. I realize that John is your tragic hero, here, but clearly Rachel is supposed to be important as we resolve the entire project by showing her finding contentment and comfort with Anton's "pipe dream." Consider showing us something of Rachel interspersed with he scenes of John in the beginning so the audience can begin to relate to her earlier rather than feeling like they are playing catch-up on her.
Speaking of Rachel, you do a nice job of capturing why she considers Anton's proposal at their first meeting, and she does seem to be the most relatable character in the story; but, would she really fall into his bed so easily? More importantly, would that one encounter really be all it takes for Anton to fall in love with her - this hardened giggolo for hire. If he had been doing some surveillance on her himself, rather than contracting Dafino to do it all, it might be more believable. Maybe she does something that plays on his past experiences and softens him to her.
Up to this point, these are really just ideas and recommendations that I think would help build some tension for the story. Now I would like to address what I do see as a minor plot hole, however. When John shoots Dafino, he is completely in the right. I don't understand why he doesn't take the DVD to hide in his car and then call the police to report a break-in. This is a critical event in the decline of John's sanity, so I think we need to understand why he takes the measures he takes rather than what your average homeowner would do if they came home to find an unknown prowler in their house. John may realize that Dafino is connected to Anton, but he doesn't have anything to fear from reporting his reaction to finding a burglar in his home. There must be something that Dafino can say to him, before dying, that would prompt fear of the authorities.
Anton is an interesting character, but he seems to fade out during the final acts. As close as he is with Dafino, would he really just sit back and watch from the sidelines? He has been a man of action up to this point and has more of a history of involvement with questionable activities. He almost fits the role of a hero but we don't get to see his revelation and change (as already mentioned above regarding him falling in love with Rachel). As an audience member, I would like to see him change into a caring man looking for a relationship rather than learn about it through exposition.
Your final act is excellent, plenty of action and rising tension throughout. You do a really nice job of describing and incorporating the action into the story and present it very well on the page. The atmosphere that you generate with the snow and heavy clothes is also excellent and helps to keep the audience absorbed in the world of the story. Nice use of scene setting there. Overall, a very entertaining piece. Thanks for sharing this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I am new to the site and this is the first review I am attempting, so I hope you find my thoughts useful in moving forward.
I really enjoyed your screenplay overall. I think you have a very good idea here and have some engaging characters. That being said, I would like to offer some constructive thoughts for you in the spirit of seeing this move towards your goal of production.
The initial opening is good, with the set up about at-fault divorces. I like the way you are setting-up motivation for John to make the decisions he does, however, I do think that the stakes need to be shown a bit starker. By this, I mean he takes some very extreme measures that escalate him into what is essentially a life or death struggle but I have a hard time believing that he would go to such extremes without more information on his financial predicament. Yes, he is in debt to a bookie, but how in debt? Is he essentially just paying off the points (interest) on what he owes? Why is his money all tied up? How would spousal support affect his ability to pay and what would be the consequences to him. Although there are some very subtle hints at this, I feel you are asking the audience to take a big jump to believe he would go to such measures without the screws being at least a bit tighter on him. Show me why paying spousal support would be on par with a life or death struggle for him.
The other thing I would recommend you consider is to bring Rachel in a bit sooner. Much of the first 20-30 minutes is really all about John without any glimpse at Rachel, even though she becomes a major character. I realize that John is your tragic hero, here, but clearly Rachel is supposed to be important as we resolve the entire project by showing her finding contentment and comfort with Anton's "pipe dream." Consider showing us something of Rachel interspersed with he scenes of John in the beginning so the audience can begin to relate to her earlier rather than feeling like they are playing catch-up on her.
Speaking of Rachel, you do a nice job of capturing why she considers Anton's proposal at their first meeting, and she does seem to be the most relatable character in the story; but, would she really fall into his bed so easily? More importantly, would that one encounter really be all it takes for Anton to fall in love with her - this hardened giggolo for hire. If he had been doing some surveillance on her himself, rather than contracting Dafino to do it all, it might be more believable. Maybe she does something that plays on his past experiences and softens him to her.
Up to this point, these are really just ideas and recommendations that I think would help build some tension for the story. Now I would like to address what I do see as a minor plot hole, however. When John shoots Dafino, he is completely in the right. I don't understand why he doesn't take the DVD to hide in his car and then call the police to report a break-in. This is a critical event in the decline of John's sanity, so I think we need to understand why he takes the measures he takes rather than what your average homeowner would do if they came home to find an unknown prowler in their house. John may realize that Dafino is connected to Anton, but he doesn't have anything to fear from reporting his reaction to finding a burglar in his home. There must be something that Dafino can say to him, before dying, that would prompt fear of the authorities.
Anton is an interesting character, but he seems to fade out during the final acts. As close as he is with Dafino, would he really just sit back and watch from the sidelines? He has been a man of action up to this point and has more of a history of involvement with questionable activities. He almost fits the role of a hero but we don't get to see his revelation and change (as already mentioned above regarding him falling in love with Rachel). As an audience member, I would like to see him change into a caring man looking for a relationship rather than learn about it through exposition.
Your final act is excellent, plenty of action and rising tension throughout. You do a really nice job of describing and incorporating the action into the story and present it very well on the page. The atmosphere that you generate with the snow and heavy clothes is also excellent and helps to keep the audience absorbed in the world of the story. Nice use of scene setting there. Overall, a very entertaining piece. Thanks for sharing this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting, i think the only screenplays that i have read was only written by Tarantino, , the ending seems, so are we going to see it on cinemas soon enough :D...anyway great job

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ScottTheScreenwriter

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Nick! With a little luck, you'll be watching it on the big screen someday ;)
Nick.B

11 Years Ago

Let's hope so, I always wanted to enter this screenwriters world :D
I don't generally read many screenplays, but I have to say with my limited experience you have something really good going here. Keep writing and putting it out there. Awesome screenplay

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ScottTheScreenwriter

11 Years Ago

Thanks Neva! Appreciate you taking a look at it.
I love your screenplay so much that I spent valuable time on my vacation reading it. I will not even comment on the minor grammatical errors I noticed, and that's unusual for me. If your screenplay was a movie, I would definitely go see it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ScottTheScreenwriter

11 Years Ago

Wow, thanks a lot! It means a lot to hear feedback on something I worked so hard on :) I'm in the .. read more
E.A. Rubin

11 Years Ago

You're welcome. You wrote a really exciting screenplay! Nice work!
Wow. That was like reading a movie. I feel bad for John though, was his ending really necessary? I don't think he deserved that. As for Anton, I loved his line,"Now would be a good time to start." Those words could have been twisted back onto himself. I especially loved the twists. Excellent job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ScottTheScreenwriter

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for the review, I really appreciate it! I feel like John had it coming :) He's defini.. read more

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Tags: Thriller, Drama, Dark Comedy, Divorce, Adultery, Murder

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