Deja

Wrapped around your little finger

By your side I'll always linger

Dancing, jumping, swinging, dreaming

I can see you softly beaming

 

Quietly I wach you sleeping

I can see you, playing, dreaming

My little Angel, running, dancing

 

Wrapped you tightly around my heart

Where no one can ever tare us apart

My little Princess, proper and prim

You are all I wish I was, you're my perfect whim

 

Reviews

[Yina]

Aw I love the rhythm an the color is totally awesome:)

[GoldenOne]

Great rhythm, beautiful poem! My favorite part is the last line- "my perfect whim"

nice work!

[*Evelen*]

aww this is so sweet:) beautiful love poem. Well done

[Ruth]

Cute :) Your heart on the screen :)
xx

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautifull written! Excellent flow and imagery!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very sweet. Like a love letter from a parent to a child.

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Sweet! Personalized expression. Lovely.

[Ripple of Aqua]

Love it!