My son

My son

A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes

























Looking out the window

Oh so big you are

Playing on the porch

With those funny toys

 

Oh you are my baby boy

So tall and big

playing so nice

 

Shadow the dog, runs after you

as you scream and hollar

having her catch you if she can.....

 

The sun shines upon your face

Smiling when you smile

The world is at your will

Take it, Use is, Toy with it

Bend and break it!


you make me teary eyed

thinking of how much you have grown...

i love you so much Sean you are my world 



 

© 2010 Misty Blue Eyes


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this is one of the most loving poems I've read on here... you really captured the essence of a mother and child...

"The world is at your will
Take it, Use is, Toy with it
Bend and break it!"

a childlike wisdom saturates this piece, making me smile. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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you love your son very much! this poem is making me miss mine even more!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aw, this is such a beautiful poem! It's so nice that you've written this for your son and im sure when he can understand when he's older he'll love it too.
You're a wonderful mother.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aw, this is definitely full of love. (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is pure... i don't know. i'm not a parent. but i like it. sounds like an awesome kid.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful write. My son is my world too. Without him, I am sure to have gone through a psychotic break at this point. It's amazing how children change your life in so many different ways, and it's amazing to watch them grow up.

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 13 Years Ago


Pretty much similar to the smile I have on my face as I watch my little three-year-old brother grow and learn, but I guess what a mother feels is much more intense and powerful towards her child. A write tender with emotions. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is no love like a mother's will. Very sincere.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Gifts of poetry, love through shining mother's eyes.

"The sun shines upon your face
Smiling when you smile
The world is at your will
Take it, Use is, Toy with it
Bend and break it!"

Beautiful at any age. There is nothing quite like the love of a mother for her son.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Aw, how sweet. He is a very loved little boy :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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awe how sweet hes got a good mom :D nice poem very loving

Posted 13 Years Ago



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