Inked

Inked

A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes

She lays upon his skin
Inked beauty marked deep within him
A waterfall of black flows 
down the side of her head
Eyes of red rock crushed
springing blood
Silence of the pool it pours into 
tears  for-warn the pain that has come
For she lays upon his arm
the soft warm skin
silent and unmoving
forever she will stay
protected now by the one she loved
too late the clock has run out
haunted by her stare he goes on
She lays upon his skin
Inked in a beauty of black shine 
and red shame

© 2012 Misty Blue Eyes


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Very nice poem here - I love the 3rd stanza in particular. And the opening line - 'she lays upon his skin' - I found that to be an intriguing start to the poem.
Again, nice work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




"For she lays upon his arm

the soft warm skin

silent and unmoving

forever she will stay




protected now by the one she loved"

A lovely poem. Thank you for penning...:)....................

Posted 10 Years Ago


This endearing and hopeful. Beautiful work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Multifaceted, many layers and dimension, many places it can go, mysterious and intriguing. A fine poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so many layers.... fascinating write... loved it!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's memorable IMHO.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sometimes loved ones tattoo their presence on our soul.

Posted 11 Years Ago


powerful... I love the title... so different from anything I've read and very unique.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Amazing write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


nice work ... almost reads like a tattoo...enjoyed

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Misty Blue Eyes
Misty Blue Eyes

denver, CO



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