April

April

A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes

Her heart beats to my every touch
Her smile makes my butterflies flutter
The oceans waves crash into the earth's sands 
As we crash against the bed, fingers laced together

Night stars twinkle 
Her body rises to my fingers traces 
Bumps of panting and shivers run through her skin
Heat flows through my lips
Electricity radiating through our finger tips 


Winds of passion cry out in her pleasure
Whirling around us, enclosed to the nights seductiveness 
Caged and chained to the lovers dance

waking in the Sun's smiles 
She's next to me, living in dreams of fantasy 
hair fallen from the heat and passion of the night before 

My world is complete
shes laying next to me in my arms.


 

© 2011 Misty Blue Eyes


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a perfect work of passion.
"The oceans waves crash into the earth's sands
As we crash against the bed" was a smasher line to sum up the effects of converging on to your lover..Heat and electric references make it all the more steamy..Good job !! quite liked it..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You took my breath away with this one and you made this poem very seductive yet full of gentleness and it flows so well in life stream. My god you're very talented my friend. So talented and don't you ever forget that and abandon this gift of yours.

Despite of the subject in this writing, you managed to made this sound angelic and so innocent even when it's clearly tempting.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aaww so passionate! loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Passion is itself an inspiration. Excellent flow, excellent structure.

There is nothing more beautiful than having the passion, love, and thrill than being with a lover. To feel their warmth to taste them, hold them....to just be in their presense.

Regards,

Matthew


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very curiously mentally stimulating..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Reminicing of better days, and I thank you sir.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well written piece of work accompanied by such passion
And intimate feeling fueling the poem to its beautiful ending
Once again good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ah.. passion oozed from this... very well written!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very romantic and sensously done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful and sexy and romantiic and passionate!!!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


oooo this is so wonderful! I love the feel of it the emotions it is just one great poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Misty Blue Eyes

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