venom....

How is it you see my hurt and not care??

Do you not stop to think before you write that?

Your words of venom tear my newly healed flesh from the deep wound

I have worked hard to  mend and tend to my wound of broken

My heart will never be the same. Ill never mend okay again

All kindness in your body is gone, 

blackness consumes you and you have forgotten

Being human takes more then you have.........

Reviews

[J Todd Underhill]

Strong work, powerful! I love this, I fancy the darker side of life do this enthralls me!

[P.S.Chance]

I hate mean people. But I like your vulnerable words and I thank you for sharing.

[Jazique]

Wow deep dark and truthful those. Well done with such words of power of their venomous words as to be blind is one thing but, ignoring is another. Keep up the excellent work.

[Dream Weaver]

Dark and distressing and right
to the point...

[KAREN]

Deep, and full of anger and pain.

[Alicia Hirshey]

Short but extremely powerful.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

a short and powerful like venam it is enough to hurt deadly,

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a short but poignant feel..the emptiness heals though

[Maryum Mazhar]

I love this! :)))

Short, precise, and pretty much just sweet!

[Maggie]

Because their heads are usually up their own asses:D lovin it for sure!