Huh?

Huh?

A Poem by Michael G. Smith

I set my newly acquired app 
To see which traveled more
My body or my mind 
And now my phone is broke 
And I'm stranded in another time 

© 2017 Michael G. Smith



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Cool! A relatable and clever read :) Isabella

Posted 8 Months Ago


Michael G. Smith

8 Months Ago

I believe all of us here have that wandering to create other places in other times.
Isabella Ivy

8 Months Ago

I do. That's why I write stories. I can visit anywhere and actually get lost there for days. lol.
being stranded in another time, with no phone. Stranded off the grid, sounds perfect to me. This was a clever write!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Michael G. Smith

8 Months Ago

Thank you MP. And for stopping by.
nothing but the painful truth. An outstanding example that a lot can be said in a few lines. Lovely piece :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Ana B.

8 Months Ago

:) i get many ideas flashing through my brain, and if i don't write them down somewhere, i cannot re.. read more
Michael G. Smith

8 Months Ago

Oh, I hear ya. And, when do the come the most frequently and fastest? Any time we try to sleep, lol.. read more
Ana B.

8 Months Ago

hahahha, or while driving :)
YES!!! A better time, when we didn't feel the need to document our thoughts or what our food looked like and when we made real friends and liking something was a feeling, not a button.
Now where did I put that time machine?

Posted 8 Months Ago


Michael G. Smith

8 Months Ago

Agreed! I was just discussing with someone how before video games we would spend hours into the even.. read more
That was wonderful.. I liked the last line. We do struggle to move along with the speed of technology.. Once we achieve that.. it's difficult to go back in time.. that is to the the time when we could do without the tech!
Precise and powerful.
Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Michael G. Smith

8 Months Ago

Thank you and I agree. Although, here I was trying to relate in that final verse is how people such.. read more
haha the frustrations of technology! :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


KT-B

8 Months Ago

I must try that sounds like a lovely way to nod off :)
KT-B

8 Months Ago

just listening to some on utube, very tranquil and relaxing...
KT-B

8 Months Ago

my mum had a recording like this when she used to do her reflexology on people.. lovely
The more we connect, the more we disconnect from reality.

Stranded in another time? Perhaps not such a bad thing.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Michael G. Smith

8 Months Ago

So true. I enjoy the convenience of the digital age but abhor the disconnect as you say. Thanks for .. read more
Ah! The byter bit. A wry look at the way we are now locked into an electronic existence. How long before it becomes a genetic implant???



Posted 8 Months Ago


Michael G. Smith

8 Months Ago

Perhaps, we will be able to live on through software once our physical self passes. Thanks for stopp.. read more
Made me laugh out loud... fabulous.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Michael G. Smith

8 Months Ago

Thanks, DIR. A silly thing that come out of more crazy mind. Glad I could give ya chuckle.

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