My Eyes See Through Time

My Eyes See Through Time

A Poem by Michael G. Smith

My eyes
See through time
Only when
I look at you
Yet, when
I peer
Into the mirror
They always
Accelerate the view

© 2017 Michael G. Smith



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Short sweet and beautiful :)
Quite romantic i think.
I enoyed it :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Michael G. Smith

8 Months Ago

Thank you Chimmy. It's inspiration is a real love with a great woman, my wife Milagros.
cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Months Ago

Awwww so sweet. :)
This short & such a sweet write. Nicely penned :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Kesha

8 Months Ago

That's right haha. & you are welcome, I'm very much liking your writing style, in all honesty too.
Michael G. Smith

8 Months Ago

Please critique my new poem I just posted last hour. The perfectionist me is saying it's not finishe.. read more
Kesha

8 Months Ago

Alright I will check it out here :)
When you look at the one you love, you do not see the wrinkles or the scars time left. You see the smile, the twinkling eyes, the love coming back at you. However, we are our own worst enemies and when we see ourselves in the mirror, we are quite critical! This is my take on your words. Lydi**

Posted 8 Months Ago


Michael G. Smith

8 Months Ago

You nailed it! It's so nice to have intelligent people such as yourself here. Thank you for stopping.. read more
Lydia

8 Months Ago

You are quite welcome. Glad I understood your meaning! Lydi**

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Added on March 21, 2017
Last Updated on March 21, 2017
Tags: Time, eyes, love, age, mirror, relationship