Back to Katsu

Back to Katsu

A Poem by DanaRegen
"

it's time for you to return, back to Katsu with you.

"

 

Staring down into space,
my eye catches
 a magical place
 
Fairies and knights,
squires with kites
blue butterflies and an army of mice
 
 Castles galore
with dragons ashore
light up the sky
with the sound of a
Roar
 
Banquets take place
all through the night
as the children of Katsu
rest in their nests
 
Kings and queens bask in glory
while poor beggars roam the crooked aisles
of the small vermin penatrated town  
 
Its here you belong,
back in your own story
so don’t dawdle and go
 
A bird waits below
 to guide you home,
so jump
 
Take a chance
& return to your home,
in your own story,
in Katsu

© 2009 DanaRegen


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Creates great images in my head, but for some reason doesn't catch my eye.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really like the free spirit and heppy feeling in this poem,
Great write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I think you did a good job with rhymes, none of which are forced or contrived. Good poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Delightful :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


I'd like to visit this place. Where do I get a ticket?
This reminds me of many of my daydreams from years ago before "real life" crowded out the fantasy world(s) in my head. Seriously, where do I get a ticket?

Posted 15 Years Ago


A beautiful poem, a very smooth write to an enchanting world, I love it. The line before last I would put "own" instead of "on", Keep them coming, God Bless,

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that's an interesting thing to see another world in another place in another 'place'
creative and visual



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 11, 2009
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