Love at First Sight

Love at First Sight

A Poem by DanaRegen
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For a contest.

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Love at First Sight
 
 
There you sat in front of me
Gazing at your hazel eyes
It seemed like love at first sight
Your gorgeous image stunned me
Clean cut black hair, a handsome face
What more could I want?
 
 
 

© 2009 DanaRegen


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This poem reminded me of a moment in time just like that.
The time I met my first love when a teenager.....many moons ago!
He actually had black hair too, but brown eyes! lol

Thanks for entering this into my challenge! ~ Helena


Posted 14 Years Ago


Lovely!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Yes, what more could you want? He sounds gorgeous!
A lovely romantic piece ....so what more could I want?!

Thank you Dana for submitting this to Sal's "Auden Tanka" contest! ~ Helena :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Lovely poetry with a great flow! It left me wanting more!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Love at first sight, how we all feel it at times.
I think you did a good job presenting it.
Not complicated, and presents it well.
Great Job :D

Posted 14 Years Ago



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