Lazy with nothing but a pen

Lazy with nothing but a pen

A Poem by Cara

I am sorry, I ran out of words
must've dropped them on my way here
but it's called creative writing anyway
so anything I write is acceptable
as long as it is clear

I am sorry that my poem is short
and most probably it is not what you want to hear
but you must admit, you've seen nothing like it before
and as for whether you like it or not
well if you read it till the very very end
then I'm sure, I have nothing to fear

© 2017 Cara



Author's Note

Cara
I was trying to write my homework that's due tomorrow,when I thought that I should come up with a " why didn't I write my homework " excuse for the creative writing class that I may or may not be taking next year.
you know, just in case XD

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I really liked this piece. It was interesting to me how it's written in prose except that you threw in the two rhymes as a hint that it is a poem after all. Combined with the title, it's great. It's a joke with extremely dry humor.

I wouldn't change anything. Its a poem written in prose that calls itself a poem, but has no discernible meter, but it does have a rhyme scheme. If the meter and flow was better then you'd just have a poem. More poetic, but less interesting.

These are just my opinions feel free to ignore them if you wish!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

3 Months Ago

thank you ^.^
i wouldn't change anything either because my thoughts came this way
i r.. read more
LawrenceRaybon

3 Months Ago

You are most welcome.



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I really liked this piece. It was interesting to me how it's written in prose except that you threw in the two rhymes as a hint that it is a poem after all. Combined with the title, it's great. It's a joke with extremely dry humor.

I wouldn't change anything. Its a poem written in prose that calls itself a poem, but has no discernible meter, but it does have a rhyme scheme. If the meter and flow was better then you'd just have a poem. More poetic, but less interesting.

These are just my opinions feel free to ignore them if you wish!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

3 Months Ago

thank you ^.^
i wouldn't change anything either because my thoughts came this way
i r.. read more
LawrenceRaybon

3 Months Ago

You are most welcome.
This is truly creative!
Not everyone's cup of tea..
Random thoughts are penned together conveying vivid emotions.
Keep rocking :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

3 Months Ago

Thank you XD
Your "author's note" gives a background story that gives the poem a more absurd angle (in a good way) than the one that comes across at first read. The poem itself is fun! Love the way it flows. I would suggest a bit of pruning in some places so it flows more nicely - such as the "anyway" in Stanza 1 Line 3 and "most" in Stanza 2 Line 2, which merely add extra syllables to an otherwise perfectly fluid and musical line.....(both times you have "it is" could be contracted to help out as well).

Otherwise, Well done! ¡Fantástico! (A triumphant victory over the block!).

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

4 Months Ago

thank you so much for reading, i will try to work more on the pruning XD glad you liked it
Wow nice hey I like this one....

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

4 Months Ago

Thanks XD glad you did
Hard to write sometime. Homework should come first dear Cara. Have fun and be safe.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

6 Months Ago

you are right homework should always come first but sometimes you need a time out you.. and that was.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

I agree and you are welcome.
Cheeky! I like it. Nicely done. Much better than 'The dog ate my homework'.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

6 Months Ago

yes XD glad you liked it

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