take my hand

take my hand

A Poem by Cara

"Take my hand",
You pulled me up.
You said, "Take a stand,
don't ever give up.
Take a chance,
what's there to lose.
Live your life,
don't be a fool."
Tell me why,
it should end that way.
Tell me how,
it's better that way.
Can't you see
I'm fond of you,
and wherever you go
I want to be with you.
I really love you,
and i miss you too.
I'm trying my best
to be just like you.
To make you proud of me
Cause maybe if you are
You won't leave me
I hate to be so far from you
I hate to not be able to protect you
I hate that I know you miss us so much
and I hope that you know we miss you just as much.
So take my hand
I'll pull you up
Just like you did
When i was young


© 2017 Cara



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The message of having a strong bond and friendship shines through clearly in this piece. I like the way you show the speaker's progression by having her need help at first, then having her offer help at the end ... it helps bring the story full-circle. I also like how this piece portrays the strength of love without necessarily being romantic ... that's almost a rarity.
Thank you for sharing.

- William Liston

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

4 Months Ago

Thank you XD glad you liked it



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the message here...is wonderful....your work is done with so much perfection and the words used are so catching and lovely....i loved it...

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

3 Months Ago

Thank you, İm glad you did XD
I enjoyed the strong bond and friendship in this poem..lovely work

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

4 Months Ago

thank you XD
The message of having a strong bond and friendship shines through clearly in this piece. I like the way you show the speaker's progression by having her need help at first, then having her offer help at the end ... it helps bring the story full-circle. I also like how this piece portrays the strength of love without necessarily being romantic ... that's almost a rarity.
Thank you for sharing.

- William Liston

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

4 Months Ago

Thank you XD glad you liked it
I believe the love given to us. We must return.
"So take my hand
I'll pull you up
Just like you did
When i was young"
The karma of a good life. Giving kindness, concern and love back to the ones who took of us. Thank you Cara for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

4 Months Ago

Sometimes its hard to not be able to give the love that was once given to you, to not be able to tel.. read more
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

You are right but we must try. You are welcome Cara.

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