keep the dark part inside

keep the dark part inside

A Poem by Cara

Hush
Keep the dark part inside
Save it hide it
Let it grow
Slowly 
Let it grow
When the time comes
You'll know
When to let go
You'll know
how to let go
but for now
let it grow
hide it
don't let it glow
Not yet
it's our secret
wait for it
and you'll know
when time comes
only you will know
when and where
and how to let go
then you'll see
the dark side you used to hide
will be the end of me
of you too
remember
what to do
it's the end
let it go

© 2017 Cara


Author's Note

Cara
i don't kow what that was

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Sometimes hiding the dark side can destroy you- playing with fire we will get burnt I believe if something must be hidden then it’s not worth being part of?? Deep words🌹

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

5 Years Ago

I agree, maybe it is dark because it is hidden thank you for reading XD
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

5 Years Ago

Always a pleasure🌹
Hard to do my friend. Hide the dark side. Everyone had a dark side. Nice flow of thoughts making the reader think dear Cara. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

5 Years Ago

thank you for reading XD
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome Cara.
Beautiful
I love it
Mystery

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

6 Years Ago

thank you XD
Mysterious poem wonderfully written..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

6 Years Ago

thank you XD
It's a great poem. Very mysterious.
Well done...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

6 Years Ago

Thank you XD
some of the greatest poems were born from random scribbles and venting.....this is eligible to be in their number. The flow is fluid, the imagery strong, the poem dances, and beneath it all, it's mysterious and profound to the extent that it makes the readers think. Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Cara

6 Years Ago

thank you XD it means alot

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

323 Views
6 Reviews
Rating
Added on June 17, 2017
Last Updated on August 15, 2017

Author

Cara
Cara

About
Ravenclaw Holly wand with unicorn hair core Blue-tailed seahawk Writer Animals Languages. TARDIS People change people I'm in it for the long game more..

Writing
Four Four

A Poem by Cara



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Silent Echoes Silent Echoes

A Poem by Chris