I must say I have come upon a couple forms of Poetry I am not very familiar with, course I am not the brightest star in the sky. Speaking of Stars, you know what irritates me? No I know you don't know...sorry..but I moved out of the city so I can see stars in the sky, and yet I cannot see a one. It's the little things that make beauty and it seems the little things are always first to go.....hmmmm
Anyway Sorry, I went on a rant. Not being familiar with this I feel I am not really qualified to judge this, but I have read a few of your writings before and they never disappoint. So I read this a couple of times. I like it. I like the simpleness behind it yet it tells a huge tale. If you just open up your imagination. Fascinating really. Much enjoyed and as always well done
I can't stop looking at the picture, THAT is cotton candy all on its own. No matter what form, you dance through the prose with ease relaying just what you want to reveal!
I must say I have come upon a couple forms of Poetry I am not very familiar with, course I am not the brightest star in the sky. Speaking of Stars, you know what irritates me? No I know you don't know...sorry..but I moved out of the city so I can see stars in the sky, and yet I cannot see a one. It's the little things that make beauty and it seems the little things are always first to go.....hmmmm
Anyway Sorry, I went on a rant. Not being familiar with this I feel I am not really qualified to judge this, but I have read a few of your writings before and they never disappoint. So I read this a couple of times. I like it. I like the simpleness behind it yet it tells a huge tale. If you just open up your imagination. Fascinating really. Much enjoyed and as always well done
its like a short quick kiss, femininity from the first female as her soul paints a portrait, its very surreal and imaginary from the garden long ago, Haiga works well with you most definitely