Girl Finds her Apple Core~

Girl Finds her Apple Core~

A Poem by NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
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~A Haiga~

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~A Haiga Is A Haiku Painted Image~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Author's Note

NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
~there is no end to creative poetic play with a haiga which is like cotton candy to the poet soul with a preference for sweets~ ;)~

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Hello Selene,

I must say I have come upon a couple forms of Poetry I am not very familiar with, course I am not the brightest star in the sky. Speaking of Stars, you know what irritates me? No I know you don't know...sorry..but I moved out of the city so I can see stars in the sky, and yet I cannot see a one. It's the little things that make beauty and it seems the little things are always first to go.....hmmmm

Anyway Sorry, I went on a rant. Not being familiar with this I feel I am not really qualified to judge this, but I have read a few of your writings before and they never disappoint. So I read this a couple of times. I like it. I like the simpleness behind it yet it tells a huge tale. If you just open up your imagination. Fascinating really. Much enjoyed and as always well done

Always,

Matthew

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I can't stop looking at the picture, THAT is cotton candy all on its own. No matter what form, you dance through the prose with ease relaying just what you want to reveal!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eve in a hopeful light, sin in a good and hopeful light a sexist bit from the bible turned into a sexy empowering bit of art lovely

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

from the sublime to the sublime - the sweetest words, dear friend ..

'eve tastes apple hope' - beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hello Selene,

I must say I have come upon a couple forms of Poetry I am not very familiar with, course I am not the brightest star in the sky. Speaking of Stars, you know what irritates me? No I know you don't know...sorry..but I moved out of the city so I can see stars in the sky, and yet I cannot see a one. It's the little things that make beauty and it seems the little things are always first to go.....hmmmm

Anyway Sorry, I went on a rant. Not being familiar with this I feel I am not really qualified to judge this, but I have read a few of your writings before and they never disappoint. So I read this a couple of times. I like it. I like the simpleness behind it yet it tells a huge tale. If you just open up your imagination. Fascinating really. Much enjoyed and as always well done

Always,

Matthew

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

this aesthetic piece has a very appealing quality and beauty all its own~

a most artistic form.... indeed; lovely in poetic expression;

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In the beginning direct simple. A perfect haiku of classic form.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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. gorgeously done ... incredibly poetic ... and amazingly beautifully presented ... wow! ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cotton candy? that was like baklava with extra honey!!
and that butterfly tatt looks vaguely familiar...hmm

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very interesting, I didn't know of this kind of poetry. Beautiful imagery. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its like a short quick kiss, femininity from the first female as her soul paints a portrait, its very surreal and imaginary from the garden long ago, Haiga works well with you most definitely

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 26, 2010
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