Purrrrrrr~

Plush

your  aura a rush

repossess

my skin of sanctified excess

crush

your mouth against my blush

caress

my colors on your atmospheric press

 

watch me crawl

I like to crawl

purring thrall

lap girl

with the pearl soul

unfurled

arched upward in refined control

 

smile

your push worthwhile

grip

me hard, I might  slip

beguiled

you draw my body on for hours

unzip

my mask , lean in, now dip

 

watch me close

superimposed

my spine a bow

strong will

opened like a shell

exposed

silky hallowed swells

 

provoke

soft bursts with tongue dipped in cherry coke

play

my parfait to your taste

flavor

sublime honey comb for soul tip to savor

sir!

you do stir my golden apple purrrrrrR

 

 

 

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Reviews

[Alysha]

Here you capture the true essence of what it means to be a woman aroused. Few would venture where you have gone, and I for one am greatful for your boldness. It's a fine line between sensual but not giving too much. You my dear are a tease and wonderfully so. Keep Writing.

[Prose-full]

steamy. sensually tantalizing.

"..play

my parfait to your taste

flavor

sublime honey comb for soul tip to savor..."

[dovetailer]

Is there a waiting list somewhere I could sign up on?
You must tire of hearing how amazing your poetry is...but it is amazing...not contrived...but real and seamless...
I often try to follow your train of thought to understand...sometimes I can...sometimes you fly by too fast...I feel like I'm hanging onto a comet's tail...I don't know a f*****g thing about comets, but I hang on anyway...because you make me feel...something...anything...but never nothing...
whatever you write...even if I'm clueless...I'm drawn in...if not by your expression of what I know, then by the mystery of what I don't...
I love the sensuous poems best...like this one...because I understand it...I can feel the heartbeat...the longing...the hunger...
This was terrific...per usual...

[No use.]

I don't know why, but the flow of this poem reminded me of a song called Slowdive by Siouxsie and the Banshees. It made me want to get up and be plush,... a woman!

[Art]

a sensually pleasing view of your thoughts...

[Yang]

wow...

very sensual and soothing...

words flowed smoothly...

caressing...

great write...

[Bard Constantine]

So steamy when the action is in between the lines... like nudity in shadows, the best is left to the imagination...

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is so good. I love how you say things in your poem. You create a wild and good vision with your words. Woman can make a man beg for forgiveness before he done anything wrong. I like this woman. She could make a man wish for great things. A outstanding poem. thank you.
Coyote

[Jibey]

sublime honeycomb indeed... good use of rhyme and the form... lips somehow trailing down... and down

[Dream Weaver]

May I say Holy shiiiiiiiit!!! If this isn't the most sensual seductive sensational
Satisfying piece pun intended, I'll retire and work on a farm milking cows!!
Great write Selene.....