UnAlice In Wonderland Grows Up And Will Kick You In The Face If You Cross Her~

~A Cautionary Tale For Men Things Contemplating Quickies With Tilty Girls~

Like a small animal

In a splash of morning sun

I will peel you from my skin

With my elemental canines

Grape skin in the veins of my struggle

To unmend you from my quilt

~No one asked you to stay the night, motherf*ck*r~

Like a large soul

With too many holes in the pockets of morning

I will kick the pieces of your dreams

Under my bed

For the Queen Of Clovers

To brew for brunch with Old Badger

~No one asked you to bleed your mind all over my sheets~

Like a unrequited fairy tale

Worn out under a King’s skin in lavender and soot

I will puzzle for hours over the shape of your fragrance

The indent of your bones in my twenty mattress layers

Betting my spirit with old Hoof

That you’ve never met such a version of UnAlice

Who will not only kick you in the face 

But firmly escort you out the morning door

With nothing more to show for your conquest

Than a pop tart

And a bloody soul

~No one asked you to play with my ink, motherf*ck*r~

 

 

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ALL GADDAMN RIGHTS RESERVED

Author's Note

title courtesy of Sam OT ~ ;)~

Reviews

[LilyT]

I was just reading the back and forths over at FB and you are one wicked, beautiful bish! LMFAO! Really only someone with a mazey brain like yours could connect the dots between a killer comment and put it on your potter's wheel and make one hell of a kick a*s poem out of it with subtle pushes going on in every damn line!


Betting my spirit with old Hoof

That you’ve never met such a version of UnAlice

Who will not only kick you in the face and out the morning door

With nothing more to show for your conquest

Than a pop tart

And a bloody soul

~No one asked you to play with my ink, motherf*ck*r~


Laughing myself into a pee fit! LOL

[Linear]

Words that bleed into your readers veins, need so much more time than a few moments or quickie :O)

[Raven Starhawk]

I find this riveting. The unique twist is amazing. I was not sure really if I dare comment, but I have to give credit where credit is due. This was a masterpiece.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Yeah, I am chuckling at this. Pure vengeance with the stroke of immortal ink I think.

[Muse]

The indent of your bones in my twenty mattress layers
The Princess and the Pea..she finally had her way. lol

The concept of playing with one's ink. For me as a poet...that's more personal than the touch of a lover's hand. This poem makes me think about a one-night stand that has gone BAD.

I will peel you from my skin
With my elemental canines
Grape skin in the veins of my struggle
To unmend you from my quilt

A bad lover ingrained in the skin like a permanent tattoo...she want's it to come clean. But instead has to peal it all off. It's her only solution. But I know this girl...she will grow new skin. xo

[EMF]

Ah. A beutiful love poem. Who indeed can rhyme, spoon, moon, June and canabalistic intent quite the way you can

[Loki Ragna-rock]

Yer a Pop Tart alright.

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LOL the most beautifully composed b***h slap..

[FireWoman]

Copyright A.G.R.R.!!! =)
This is the place they drug you to. The problem with survival of things which we don't speak is that we tend to push away hard as a reflex. I am told there are good men out there, hmmmmpff, we shall see...

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Even when you threaten to make me bleed raw, I still wish to kiss you!
What hold you have over me. Rage has never been a turn on... until it poured from your pen.