Broken and battered emotionless

Broken and battered emotionless

A Poem by passionberry

Being tortured by Love
is merely unbearable
the boundaries was crossed
due to my breakdown
my breathless circumstances
which held me clear confession
of corrupt
dangerous damage left me dazed
without hope
I must change as my change of heart
has became stable
I'm now in restraint
I resume my quest in vision
to have once what was
my indestructible man.

© 2014 passionberry


Author's Note

passionberry
read and review let me know what u think comments are appreciated. Thank you.😉😁😁

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Thank u so much for review

Posted 9 Years Ago


That's a great piece; however, it would be better if you change was to were in the third line. Apart from that, it is a wonderfully deep poem :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Trying something a bit different starting to change thoughts within

Posted 9 Years Ago



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passionberry
passionberry

Cleveland , OH



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I love to write about my life experiences and other people experiences through poetry. I been a writer since I was 15yrs old I just recently had one of my poems published and I'm still working harder .. more..

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