TOO-DEEP

TOO-DEEP

A Poem by Sirius King
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Something i wrote my senior year in high school

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IMMA WRITE SOMETHIN

-BUT I DON’T WANNA GET TOO DEEP
GOTTA DO SOMETHIN

-CUZ I CAN’T GET NO SLEEP
…WITH FINGERNAILS BITTEN

BEYOND THEIR BOUNDARIES…
REALITY SLIPS IN

AND SURROUNDS ME
INVADING MY COMFORT ZONE
IN EVERY CORNER,

NEVER LEAVING ME ALONE

…IN THE BEGINNING

I MADE A PROMISE

-THIS PROMISE I WILL KEEP
IT WAS TO WRITE SOMETHIN’

-BUT I WONT GET TOO DEEP…

BURNIN TREES

TO EASE THE BEAST

TRAPPED INSIDE OF ME
ENGAGED TO A RAGE

THAT WILL ALWAYZ BE

TIED TO ME
…ENGULFED IN SMOKE,

IM FEELIN LAZY…
SO I WONT TALK ABOUT

HOW MY MOTHER IS SLOWLY

GOING CRAZY
OR HOW THE FEMALE IM FEELIN

IS HAVIN ANOTHER DUDES BABY
DON’T WANT TO TALK ABOUT

AN UNSURE FUTURE

OR FAMILY PROBLEMS
LEFT ONLY WITH PRAYERS,

HOPING GOD WILL SOLVE THEM
…WALKING TOWARD THE EDGE OF THE CLIFF…
TAKING MY LAST PUFF
REALIZING THIS IS DEEP
BUT NOT QUITE DEEP ENOUGH…

© 2013 Sirius King


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that ganga never solves lifes problems but sure makes the tough ride more mellow. amazing and very deep write..well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

so true man lol
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

;)
When chaos strikes and life gets real, things do tend to get a bit deep even if we don't intend them to be.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

its hard... but if we want a better life, its up to us to fight for it
Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

very true
Awww this is really sad! But I like it. It's dark.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

yea life comes with a lot of ups and downs, u have to learn quickly how to roll with the punches
SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Right! Or ull just end up getting knocked down :)
Sirius King

11 Years Ago

exactly :-)

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Added on September 17, 2012
Last Updated on March 3, 2013
Tags: Serenus, Raymone, TOO-DEEP, poem

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Sirius King

Cleveland, OH



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